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{{*mp}}... that the opening of the '''''[[Gesta principum Polonorum]]''''', a history of early Poland written sometime in the 1110s, is addressed to [[Martin I (Archbishop of Gniezno)|Martin I]], [[Archbishop of Gniezno]]?
 
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:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|18px]] for the ''Gesta''. A double DYK would be nice, but Martin I is currently at only 807 b. If you incorporate the text of the first footnote into the article it would probably already nearly be there, though. [[User talk:Ucucha|Ucucha]] 14:56, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
 
 
   
 
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This page is for nominations to appear in the "Did you know" section on the Main Page.

Contents


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Instructions

Using a DYK suggestion string (see below examples), list new suggestions in the candidate entries section below under the date the article was created or the expansion began (not the date you submit it here), with the newest dates at the top. Any user may nominate a DYK suggestion; self-nominations are permitted and encouraged. Thanks for participating and please remember to check back for comments on your nomination.

DYK criteria

Official criteria: DYK rules and additional guidelines
Unofficial Guide: Learning DYK

How to list a new nomination

Please use one of the strings below to post your DYK nomination, using the "author" and "nominator" fields to identify the users who should receive credit for their contributions if the hook is featured on the main page.

  1. Nom without image: {{subst:NewDYKnom | article= | hook=... that ? | author= }}
  2. Nom with image: {{subst:NewDYKnom | article= | hook=... that ? | author= | image= | caption= }}
    To include more than one new or expanded article in a single hook: |article2= |article3= |article4= | (etc)
    To include more than one author: |author2= |author3= | (etc)
    To include alternate hooks: |ALT1= |ALT2= | (etc)
    To add a comment: |comment=
    To add the article you reviewed: |reviewed=

Do not wikilink the article title, or the author username field; the template will wikilink them automatically. Do wikilink the article title in the hook field, however.
Do not add a section heading if you are using the template; the template will add one for you.
Do not include a signature (~~~~) after the template.
Do not use non-free images in your hook suggestion.

An example of how to use the template is given below. Don't forget to fill out the rollover text, so people know what the image is of! Full details are at {{NewDYKnom}}:

{{subst:NewDYKnom
 | article       = Example
 | status        = new<!--(or) expanded-->
 | hook          = ... that this [[article]] is an '''[[example]]''' ''(pictured)''?
 | author        = User
 | nominator     =
 | image         = Example.png
 | rollover      = An example image
 | comment       =
}}
  • Note that you should only use one of the above templates for the original hook. If you want to suggest a second, alternative hook for the same article submission, just type it in manually. The above templates output useful code for each submission and if you employ them for alternative hooks, you will mess up the page formatting.
  • When saving your suggestion, please add the name of the suggested article to your edit summary.
  • Please check back for comments on your nomination. Responding to reasonable objections will help ensure that your article is listed.
  • If you nominate someone else's article, you can use {{subst:DYKNom}} to notify them. Usage: {{subst:DYKNom|Article name}}
  • If a reviewer finds problem(s) that require that an issue be addressed, notify the nominator with {{DYKproblem}}.

How to review a nomination

Any editor who was not involved in writing/expanding or nominating an article may review it by checking to see that the article meets all the DYK criteria (long enough, new enough, no serious editorial or content issues) and the hook is cited. Editors may also alter the suggested hook to improve it, or may suggest new hooks.

If you want to confirm that an article is ready to be placed on a later update, or note that there is an issue with the article or hook, you may use the following symbols (optional) to point the issues out:

Symbol Code DYK Ready? Description
Symbol confirmed.svg {{subst:DYKtick}} Yes No problems, ready for DYK
Pictogram voting keep.svg {{subst:DYKtickAGF}} Yes Article is ready for DYK, with a foreign-language or offline hook reference accepted in good faith
Symbol question.svg {{subst:DYK?}} Query DYK eligibility requires that an issue be addressed. Notify nominator with {{subst:DYKproblem|Article}}
Symbol possible vote.svg {{subst:DYK?no}} Maybe DYK eligibility requires additional work. Notify nominator with {{subst:DYKproblem|Article}}
Symbol delete vote.svg {{subst:DYKno}} No Article is either completely ineligible, or else requires considerable work before becoming eligible

Please consider using {{subst:DYKproblem|Article|header=yes|sig=yes}} on the nominator's talk page, in case they do not notice that there is an issue.

Backlogged?

This page often seems to be backlogged. If the DYK template has not been updated for substantially more than 6 hours, it may be useful to attract the attention of one of the administrators who regularly updates the template. See the page Wikipedia:Did you know/Admins for a list of administrators who have volunteered to help with this project.

Where is my hook?

If you can't find the hook you submitted to this page, in most cases it means your article has been approved and is in the queue for display on the main page. You can check whether your hook has been moved to the queue by reviewing the queue listings.

If your hook is not in the queue or already on the main page, it has probably been deleted. Deletion occurs if the hook is more than about eight days old and has unresolved issues for which any discussion has gone stale. If you think your hook has been unfairly deleted, you can query its deletion on the discussion page, but as a general rule deleted hooks will only be restored in exceptional circumstances.

Candidate entries

Articles created/expanded on November 30

Joseph Moir

The Taroona shot tower, built by Joseph Moir in 1870


You're Beautiful (TV series)

Speechless (Lady Gaga song)

Bijapur Fort

Part of Fort, Beejapore..jpg

  • ...that the large canon at Malik-i-Maidan at the Bijapur Fort (pictured) was so heavy at 55 tons that it discouraged the British from carrying it as a trophy to England? Created/expanded by Nvvchar (talk). Self nom at 05:45, 30 November 2009 (UTC)


Alt Hook ---that at Saat Kabar near Bijapur Fort (pictured), Afzal Khan, the army chief of Bijapur Sultanate, before waging war against Shivaji, killed his 63 wives to prevent them from remarrying after his death?

Peirce Geodetic Monument

File:ProperfrontofPeirceMonument.JPG

Yuma Quartermaster Depot State Historic Park

Fairyhouse Racecourse

Articles created/expanded on November 29

Daithí Ó Drónaí

Pat Quinn (businessman)

Alice McGrath

  • ... that the author of "Zoot Suit" called Alice McGrath, a leader of the Sleepy Lagoon Defense Committee, "one of the heroines of the 20th century"? Created by Cbl62 (talk). Nominated by Cbl62 (talk) at 04:12, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

Bursaite

William Nichols (architect)

T. B. Walker

waist to shoulder high portrait wearing a suit and tie, mustache and short beard

George F. Kugler, Jr.

Gasmouloi

Tord Asle Gjerdalen

Siege of Corfu (1537)

Corfu map 16th century.jpg

  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Length and date okay, offline referencing accepted in good faith. TodorBozhinov 09:10, 30 November 2009 (UTC)


Robert de Chesney

  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Interesting article. I was at first confused by the term "Henry fitzEmpress", thinking it was some particularly egregious typo, before realizing it is a weird piece of Norman-French legacy. Ucucha 20:04, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Andrew W. Mellon Auditorium

The front of the Andrew W. Mellon Auditorium in 2009


German submarine U-607

Toy Trawler Spaniel

British Motorcycle Charitable Trust

Rudy Kennedy

Manila Thermal Power Plant

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Date, length, and hook sourced and verified. Calmer Waters 07:59, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

Robert Peverell Hichens

Sword of Aragon

  • ... that Sword of Aragon, a video game published in 1989, frustrated players with its copy protection that prompts them with inaccurate information?
  • Comment: The article was previously a copyviolation on creation and has been deleted. This is a 5x expansion of the cleaned-up article.[1]

5x expanded by Jappalang (talk). Self nom at 10:04, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Gill (jarl)

Brian Boru, King of Munster.jpg

Alford plea

Akira Iwasaki

Battle of Wawon

Request: if this DYK is approved, please also give credit to User:Hudavendigar, since he help on the draft and also provided most the materials for this article. Jim101 (talk) 06:35, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

    • Symbol confirmed.svg All set. I added a credit template for Hudavendigar. Ucucha 20:40, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Rommelspargel

Articles created/expanded on November 28

Jan Leighton

  • ... that Jan Leighton, Guinness record-holder as the actor who played the most roles, told an interviewer that heaven for him was to "lie in bed stark naked" with no costume and "luxuriate in my own skin"? Created by Cbl62 (talk). Nominated by Cbl62 (talk) at 04:22, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

Opening sentence

Polikarpov I-3

Mexican handcrafts and folk art

TapeteEnFabricación-Teotitlán del Valle-Oaxaca-Mexico.jpg


Roger Helland

List of Ebola outbreaks

Summerland Oil Field

Associated Motion Picture Pilots

Ralph Basset

Sugar Blue

Fish Lake (Jackson County, Oregon), Fourmile Lake, Cascade Canal

Fish Lake Oregon.jpg

  • That's great, although the reason I combined them is because I couldn't think of anything interesting about Fourmile Lake. If we were to go with ALT1 I think it would be best to shorten it a bit:
  • Or even ALT3: ... that the size of Fish Lake (pictured) is now three times larger than it was before 1902? LittleMountain5 16:45, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Sounds good to me. I'll try writing Cascade Canal, but I doubt I'll be able to push it over 1500 characters. Thanks, LittleMountain5 23:13, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Done, and over 1500 characters! Tweaked the hook accordingly. I also removed the Oregon, USA part to make it more concise. Anyone who clicks the links will find out where they are. LittleMountain5 00:33, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
Whoa! That was quick! Thank you. I've adjusted the {DYKmake} templates to include the brand new Cascade Canal article.
I've restored "in Oregon, USA" to the hook. It should be there to give the hook some geographical context (Most people outside the US wouldn't know where the Cascade Range is.) for MainPage purposes. IMO, MainPage should appear more "international", and cater to readers from anywhere on the planet. All hooks should mention the when (era) and where (general geographical location), if possible. --PFHLai (talk) 02:29, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Okay, thanks for your help! Sincerely, LittleMountain5 02:53, 30 November 2009 (UTC)


Rizong Monastery

Rizong-gompa-1.jpg
  • Added an img.--Nvvchar (talk) 23:40, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Blind Young Things

Tiger Woods

...is not only the World's Number 1 golfer, but has broken a record for the most accumulated weeks as Number 1.--Pookeo9 Talk If you need anything 22:35, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

  • Symbol delete vote.svg Does not qualify for DYK per WP:DYK#DYK rules. Hook does not reference an article (particularly not a new article). Contributions are appreciated, but DYK has rather specific rules. --Orlady (talk) 00:43, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Trustee Act 2000

... that reform of the area of law eventually contained in the United Kingdom's Trustee Act 2000 had been requested since 1982? Ironholds (talk) 21:18, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Havnelageret

Havnelageret Oslo.jpg

Georgi Valkovich

G.valkovich.jpg

  • Comment: The quote may be removed if deemed unnecessary or inappropriate, I simply find it somewhat ironic. It might just be my sense of humour. TodorBozhinov 20:17, 28 November 2009 (UTC)


Sara Stockfleth Christie

Cut-throat Records

Heekin Can

  • ... that during the latter part of the 20th century, Heekin Can was one of the largest U.S. manufacturers of food cans? Created by Orlady (talk). Nominated by Orlady (talk) at 15:33, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Kate Nesbitt

The Military Cross

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Date, length of expansion, and hook verified. modified hook to state that she was attached to 3 Commando Brigade to clarify, as theres a big difference between belonging to a perticular unit and being attached to that unit. Calmer Waters 08:13, 30 November 2009 (UTC)


Environmental Organizations and Resource Persons in Tamil Nadu

Ratha Saptami

Surya chariot.jpg
  • Added an img.--Nvvchar (talk) 17:28, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Rotating radio transient

  • A few milliseconds according to the article. That's a lot less.--Wetman (talk) 15:03, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
  • A single pulse lasts for a few milliseconds. Over the course of a single day, a few tens of pulses may be observed, so the total time over which an RRAT is visible is longer than a single pulse duration, but shorter than one second. Do you have any suggestion for how I might clarify that to make it clearer in the article? James McBride (talk) 20:15, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
  • How about replacing 'radio sources in the sky' with 'astronomical sources of radio waves' or something similar - that might be clearer to laymen. Olaf Davis (talk) 20:25, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Everything looks good. Olaf Davis (talk) 15:03, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Sardanapale

Delacroix sardanapalus 1828 950px.jpg

Created by Smerus (talk) Self nom at 11:35, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Square root biased sampling

Created by Sophus Bie (talk). Self nom at 10:59, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Werner Hosewinckel Christie (officer), Johan Koren Christie (officer)

Articles created/expanded on November 27

St. Timothy Catholic Church

St. Timothy's Catholic Church, Pico & Beverly Glen, Los Angeles.JPG

Sainte-Émélie-de-l'Énergie, Quebec

  • ... that Sainte-Émélie-de-l'Énergie in Quebec, Canada, is probably named after the wife of an early settler and the term Énergie (French for "energy") may refer to his energetic efforts to keep other settlers to stay? 5x expanded by P199 (talk). Self nom at 01:21, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Fascist League of North America

Christian Klengenberg

La Belle Assemblée

Jake Drake-Brockman

Red Dragon (1595)

Wood-cut of the Red Dragon

Created by Harrias (talk). Self nom at 10:03, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

  • Please disambiguate the links. Thanks, Gatoclass (talk) 12:51, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Sometimes I worry even myself! Fixed. Harrias (talk) 13:23, 28 November 2009 (UTC)




Dùn Dubh, Dùn Morbhaidh

Bonnie Woods

  • Symbol possible vote.svg I have some concerns about the NPOV of this article, particularly the statement that a creditor of theirs was located and provided free legal assistance to sue them into bankruptcy. Cirt will probably clean this article up but it shouldn't be promoted until then. Gatoclass (talk) 07:02, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
Response: I removed the info questioned by Gatoclass (talk · contribs). I also checked the other cites, verified them, and added cites to the ends of two sentences to make their verification more clear. Cirt (talk) 08:06, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
I was able to verify that questioned info itself as well. I added it back, and then tweaked it a bit for NPOV. Cirt (talk) 08:12, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
Okay, but the bankruptcy appears to be mentioned twice. Any chance you could clear that up too? Gatoclass (talk) 08:16, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
Done. Cirt (talk) 08:17, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Looks okay now. Thanks for the quick response! Gatoclass (talk) 08:26, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Vichaichan

Bovorn Vichaichan.jpg

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Verified, but I think the phrase "there was a" etc is redundant, therefore:
  • ALT1:
  • Agreed, made some superficial link changes but is fine now Sodacan (talk) 13:39, 28 November 2009 (UTC)


Perry the Platypus

David Farabee

Trần Quang Khải

Cleveland S. Rockwell

Cleveland Rockwell, Portland, Oregon, 1885.jpg

Created by Orygun (talk). Nominated by Orygun (talk) at 02:00, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Malbis Memorial Church

Western facade

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Checks up in terms of date, length and referencing. TodorBozhinov 20:21, 28 November 2009 (UTC)


Eleanor Evans

Created by Ssilvers (talk). Nominated by Donnie Park (talk) at 23:53, 27 November 2009 (UTC)

  • I certainly prefer the first one, but if you like the second, you might say that it was "despite being demoted to the chorus for her last 15 years performing with the company." -- Ssilvers (talk) 05:50, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

BEST Bus

BEST-Mumbai-Brtsnewaug08.jpg

  • ... that following court directives, BEST Bus launched limited 'disabled friendly' buses (pictured) on exclusive routes in 2005? Created by Rait (talk). Nominated by Donnie Park (talk) at 23:41, 27 November 2009 (UTC)


Bill Inman

Rescued by Rover

  • ... that the 1905 silent film Rescued by Rover was so popular that it had to be re-shot twice because the negatives wore out in order to meet the demand for prints? Created by Miyagawa (talk). Self nom at 22:18, 27 November 2009 (UTC)

W.W. Dumas

Eric Wood

Trần Nhật Duật

Accounting

Accountancy clay envelope Louvre Sb1932.jpg

  • What on earth are you talking about? Geschichte (talk) 09:16, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Gavin.collins is talking about his interesting hook. Geschichte, however, is talking about our elaborate nomination rules; please see WP:Did you know/Nomination for an introduction. Art LaPella (talk) 02:02, 29 November 2009 (UTC)


Katherine Kersten

  • Symbol question.svg Is this eyecatching? Geschichte (talk) 21:21, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
How about this, then: ALT1: "... that Minneapolis Star Tribune columnist Katherine Kersten has referred to President Bill Clinton's handling of affirmative action issues as "the Phil Donahue school of policy making"? Stonemason89 (talk) 01:20, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Rohr ROMAG

Pete Heine

ALT: ... that Pete Heine, the retired mayor of Baker, Louisiana, was a delegate to the 1973 state Constitutional Convention held in Baton Rouge?

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 15:01, 27 November 2009 (UTC)

Trustee Investments Act 1961

  • Symbol question.svg Hook is 215 characters. —mattisse (Talk) 16:05, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Length and date verified. Off line sources for hook accepted in good faith. —mattisse (Talk) 16:28, 27 November 2009 (UTC)

Blown for Good

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Length, date, and source for hook verified. (I edited the hook a little, as "auditing" is not capitalized in the article.) —mattisse (Talk) 15:59, 27 November 2009 (UTC)

Upper Peninsula Brewing Company Building

Upper Peninsula Brewing Company Building 2009.jpg

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Length, date , and source for hook verified. —mattisse (Talk) 15:50, 27 November 2009 (UTC)


Unspecified behavior

  • Comment: Hook located in the second para of "Definition".

Created by Decltype (talk). Self nom at 10:59, 27 November 2009 (UTC)

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Length, date, hook verified. Tim Song (talk) 20:28, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Frederick Waymire

Articles created/expanded on November 26

Franco-Polish alliance

List of royal visits to Worthing

Waldo Hunt

Myinsaing Kingdom

  • ... that the Myinsaing Kingdom was established in 1298 by three brothers who invited King Kyawswa of Pagan to lead the dedication of a monastery, only to dethrone him and force him to become a monk there immediately afterwards?
  • Comment: A better wording of the hook may well be possible...

Created by Hybernator (talk). Nominated by Olaf Davis (talk) at 20:36, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Government Cable Office (Seward, Alaska)

Seward cable office.jpg

St. Martin of Tours Catholic Church

St. Martin of Tours Catholic Church (Brentwood, California).JPG

St. Thomas the Apostle Catholic Church (Los Angeles)

I had intended to nominate this article myself an offer the following 'alt hook:
St. Thomas the Apostle Church.JPG

Zephyr (sculpture)

  • ... that the outdoor sculpture Zephyr is dedicated by its artist to today's youth? Created by Ltalley09 (talk). Nominated by Redtigerxyz (talk) at 05:47, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Length ok, date of creation is actually the 25th, but it is eligible anyway. Virtual tour verifies hook. decltype (talk) 00:10, 28 November 2009 (UTC)


Henry Armstrong Reed

Autie Reed.jpg

  • Symbol delete vote.svg Not a 5x expansion. It was 1006 characters before expansion and is 2458 characters now. It would need to be 5030 characters (1006 x 5 = 5030) to qualify. —mattisse (Talk) 17:12, 27 November 2009 (UTC)


Santa Clara del Cobre

File:CopVaseSCCobre.JPG

  • ... that some of the hand hammered copper work of Santa Clara del Cobre has been collected by museums and international collectors? 5x expanded by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 02:15, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg the hook is too bland, and does not say what Santa Clara del Cobre is. Was the copper work created by you or created more than 100 years? Or you have a direct permission from the artist? If that, that can not be in PD. Size, date are verified. Spanish sources are accepted per AGF.--Caspian blue 06:12, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Im open to suggestions for an ALT (and Ill keep thinking) but the main reason for this town's notability is its copper products. The pictures I have are of things I own and are utilitarian objects, pans, jars, vases etc. which can be photographed even if they are decorated in a very artistic way.Thelmadatter (talk) 15:45, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

  • After a consult with a Commons admin, I can say that the image is definitely not in PD, even though you own the art piece. However, you do not own the right to publish the image under PD-self unless you get a direct permission from the artisan. You need to move from the image on Commons to English Wikipedia, and then put a fair use image rationale to the image which can not be used for DYK hook as well unfortunately.--Caspian blue 01:29, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
I saw your request to delete the image in Commons. I made my argument for keeping there. Perhaps we should hold off on this nomination until Commons decides if the image is acceptable or not?Thelmadatter (talk) 17:39, 29 November 2009 (UTC)


Battle of Oswego (1756)

Bill Keith (Louisiana politician)

Yelloweye rockfish

Typical yelloweye adult

...Of course, I never realized that it already had an article, just under its scientific name (added all the stuff from there to this and left a redirect). So I wasted a whole day improving an article that existed already anyway. Technically, it's still a new article; does it still count? (its not fivefold from the other though...)
  • I dunno; what are the guidelines on article names? Scientific or common? For the most part with fish I see common names in use...still that was an epic fail :0 ResMar 16:01, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
  • I don't think this meets the rules. It just doesn't seem cricket to me, never mind the technicalities. The guidelines for article names? That varies. Sometimes common names are best, sometimes scientific, depending on which names are used for which fish etc. We try not to use names that refer to multiple species (like peacock bass or European whitefish). innotata (Talk | Contribs) 21:18, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
Alright, but really who writes an article on a species and doesn't put a redirect on its common name? Seems really, really stupid to me. ResMar 01:27, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
Could I get you to tone that down to something like "really unwise"? Art LaPella (talk) 02:02, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
(My usually naive) suggestion to Mario: DYK is and should be widely treated as "no big deal", that is nominations fail every now and then. We (and I'm sure the others) still do value your work on this article. DYK is often a long-term relation. I would take it with a smile (yes, someone didn't place a redirect - maybe he got distracted by something :-) and come back with new noms, complying with the rules - we shall embrace that. Cheers. Materialscientist (talk) 05:29, 29 November 2009 (UTC)


Trần Thuận Tông, Trần Thiếu Đế

Australian rodeo

  • ... that Australian rodeo has a large competitor and spectator interest in the sport? Created by Cgoodwin (talk). Self nom at 20:14, 26 November 2009 (UTC)

Symbol question.svg Im not sure if this article qualifies. First, while there are a lot of references cited, there are a number of one sentence "paragraphs" with no internal citation. Second. The first line of the article's history states "(Australian rodeo moved to Australian Professional Rodeo Association)" which does exist. I dont know if is truly a new article. If it does, length is ok.Thelmadatter (talk) 16:05, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

This article is similar to the content that I authored and submitted to Rodeo and then all of my submission was removed as a new article to Australian rodeo by Montanabw. I was totally unaware of existance of the APRA article, until it was linked by another editor.Cgoodwin (talk) 00:10, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
Comment I did the move (I'm sort of the babysitter of the rodeo article and Cgoodwin's material was so extensive and nicely done it seemed to deserve its own article). The I discovered the redirect when I moved the rodeo material to create Australian rodeo. APRA is not representative of Australian rodeo as a whole, it's just one group, and I have no idea why the association article was ever linked to or called "Australian rodeo." (that would be like the baseball article being originally titled "Little League" or something) The actual content of the current Australian rodeo article is all Cgoodwin's and on behalf of WPEQ, we believe this article should be allowed to "count" as a new article and not be penalized for having once had its title inappropriately hijacked. Montanabw(talk) 06:35, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Sounds like a good explanation to me! Since I am not Australian nor a rodeo buff, I couldnt really know that. I say go ahead and pass it.

Hairography

Alden staRRcar

  • ... that the Alden staRRcar was originally designed as a four-passenger electric car that could be driven onto automated guideways for high speed travel between cities, but emerged in the Morgantown PRT as a larger 20-passenger bus-like system for short distance travel? Created by Maury Markowitz (talk). Self nom at 13:39, 26 November 2009 (UTC)

Winifred Carney

Alternative:

2009 Barack Obama visit to China

File:Voa obamao.JPG

  • ... that during Barack Obama's 2009 visit to China there was Chinese merchandise with the name of "Obamao"? Created by . Benjwong. Nominated by 04:02, 26 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg In the hook, articles need to be linked to and the article the DYK is focusing on should be bolded. In the article itself, the particular fact isn't referenced. ~SuperHamster Talk Contribs 04:15, 26 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Hilarious image, but the image can't PD-self because it is not an original work of the phogographer. Fair use image could not be used for DYK hook--Caspian blue 04:16, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
The image is VOA image, is in the Public Domain, you can check the VOA website. Arilang talk 15:23, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
The image may be taken by the VOA writer with the PD license, but does not own the original copyright of the roadside merchandise. The photo is a derivative work of 2D art, so can not be in PD. That is what I'm talking about.--Caspian blue 00:44, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
I think you are wrong, Caspian blue, anyone can take a photo of Mona Lisa(so to speak) and upload it into commons. The "art work" may not be PD, but the "photo" is PD. Arilang talk 01:48, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
  • I've stricken out my note above, as the link has been fixed and references have been added. Now it just needs to be re-evaluated for any other problems or be approved. ~SuperHamster Talk Contribs 04:37, 27 November 2009 (UTC)


Behind the Exclusive Brethren

  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Verified, but I would suggest adding the word "religious" to the phrase "Australian group" in the hook to help clarify what it's referring to. Gatoclass (talk) 23:52, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
Done. Cirt (talk) 05:35, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

Soricomorphs of the Caribbean

Hispaniola Solenodon (Solenodon paradoxus)

  • Symbol possible vote.svg No mention of the Mesozoic in article. Gatoclass (talk) 16:27, 26 November 2009 (UTC)
  • The Cretaceous is part of the Mesozoic. Ucucha 16:45, 26 November 2009 (UTC)
  • The hook statement is supposed to be extant in the article, so you should either change "Cretaceous" in the article or "Mesozoic" in the hook. Gatoclass (talk) 15:16, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
  • I'm willing to do that if required, but I prefer to argue a little further. Suppose we had an article stating something happened in New York. Would you have problems with a hook stating it happened in America? This is the same case. I use "Cretaceous" in the article because it is more precise, but "Mesozoic" in the hook because it sounds like it is longer ago, making the hook fact more special-sounding. Ucucha 15:22, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
  • If the critter dates back to the Cretaceous, you should just say so, not try to mislead people into thinking it's older by using the more imprecise term "Mesozoic". We are after all trying to inform people here, not confuse them. Gatoclass (talk) 07:41, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
  • "Mesozoic" is not wrong. As far as I can see, hooks should draw readers to the article, and they do that best by using terms that make the hook sound as interesting as possible. Note that the Nature article I cite for this fact did the same; Nature evidently did not find the title misleading. Ucucha 13:35, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Okay then, cite "Mesozoic" in the article to the Nature ref and this one should be ready to go. Gatoclass (talk) 11:05, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Added "late in the Mesozoic". Ucucha 12:51, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Okay. Image verified as CCA. Gatoclass (talk) 23:43, 29 November 2009 (UTC)


Articles created/expanded on November 25

Ancient Egyptian Retainer Sacrifices

Precious Blood Catholic Church (Los Angeles)

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  • ... that the Los Angeles Times wrote that a motorist passing the playground at Precious Blood Church (pictured) might think "he'd been transported to a Catholic school in circa-1950s Chicago or Pittsburgh"? Created by Cbl62 (talk). Nominated by Cbl62 (talk) at 18:45, 27 November 2009 (UTC)

Precuneus

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  • Symbol confirmed.svg Verified. Ucucha 20:34, 27 November 2009 (UTC)


Siege of Allenstein

Olsztyn-zamek.jpg

Symbol confirmed.svg Length OK, cites OK, hook OK. Nicely written. I know almost nothing of Polish history but had no trouble understanding this article.Thelmadatter (talk) 14:51, 27 November 2009 (UTC)

Symbol delete vote.svg NPOV not okay as of last version by Radek. Yes, our Polish friends are quite experienced in disseminating their point of view, but sadly, they made no visible efforts to write a neutral article here. After two days of watching the lack of progress, I've started to clean it up myself, first with a change (and move) to Allenstein, as this was the town's name for many centuries until 1945, used even by Copernicus himself in Latin and German writings (no, there are no Polish writings from him, as he was not Polish). The town was only renamed in 1945, when all German (and many Polish) speaking citizens were expelled from Prussia by the Polish communists. On the other hand, in 1521, the town was both defended and attacked by German speaking people, including Niklas Koppernigk aka Nicolaus Copernicus, as it mainly was a local Prussian civil war, not the all out German-Polish war our friends try to portray it in an effort to support Polish claims on the nationality of the astronomer. Turning that old broken record was the very reason to start this article and DYK nom, apparently. BTW: The town belonged to the bishopric of Ermeland which had appointed the Catholic cleric as administrator. He was no soldier. -- Matthead  Discuß   08:06, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg It was a German Teutonic Order vs Poland war, that info is widely sourced, and Kopernik was on the Polish side which says it all. A nicely written, interesting and neutral article, ideal for DYK. Loosmark (talk) 08:40, 28 November 2009 (UTC)


Sigh. Whatever. Matthead wants to refight the Copernicus wars. I don't care. Let it be Allenstein. Not that I agree with this - the idea that it wasn't called Olsztyn until 1945 is patent nonsense as can be easily verified with both primary and secondary sources - but I think wasting time fighting over this is plain silly. BTW, the proper thing to do in such cases is file a Request to Move, rather then unilaterally moving it yourself according to one's own POV.
There's no POV issues in the article. It's got a reliable source cite after pretty much every single sentence.radek (talk) 21:13, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Gregory Tarver

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Source says he was first elected in 1996, and does not mention Shreveport in connection to the "Black Leader of the Year" title. Ucucha 20:37, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
State Senator (1984 to date); elected in fall 1983. See notes 1 and 2. Black Leader of the Year was in 1983, when he had yet to become a state official; it is implied that it was in Shreveport and not elsewhere.Billy Hathorn (talk) 03:22, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
I don't see the implication, and how is the enlou.com source credible when it doesn't even get the date of his election into the Senate right? Ucucha 03:29, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Tzintzuntzan, Michoacán

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  • ... that the ex-monastery of San Francisco in Tzintzuntzan, Michoacán, has an image of Christ in a glass coffin whose arms and legs are claimed to be growing? 5x expanded by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 01:16, 26 November 2009 (UTC)
Not sure I agree.. the name is ex monastery of San Francisco and we tend not to translate names in English. I could live with ex monastery of San Francisco de Asís.Thelmadatter (talk) 14:35, 26 November 2009 (UTC)
You're right about San Francisco; Google says "San" is 2–3 times more common than "Saint" for describing a Mexican monastery in English. Google also says that monastery is called "San Francisco" about 60 times more often than "San Francisco de Asís". When I first read the hook, I recognized Michoacán as somewhere in Mexico. But the problem is, I think the hook will make most readers wonder if Michoacán is in or near San Francisco, California. Could we simply add "Mexico," (with a comma) after Michoacán? Art LaPella (talk) 06:22, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
OK ALT1 ... that the ex-monastery of San Francisco in Tzintzuntzan, Mexico, has an image of Christ in a glass coffin whose arms and legs are claimed to be growing?
OK; as always I leave approvals to others. Art LaPella (talk) 03:23, 29 November 2009 (UTC)


Winter of 1990–1991 in Western Europe

  • Symbol possible vote.svg The source used for this hook states the canals of Venice last froze over in 1985 not 1885 (I've updated the article). I'm not sure how "hooky" a six year interim period is? You might want to bring something else out of the article. For example, finding a reference for the wrong kind of snow and then using:
ALT1: ... that "the wrong kind of snow" delayed British Rail services in the UK during the winter of 1990–1991?
In addition, there are unreferenced paragraphs towards the end of the article. DYK looks for at least a reference per paragraph - please can you revisit? Nick Ottery (talk) 08:51, 26 November 2009 (UTC)

YesY Done. All paragraphs now have at least one ref. Unfortunately I misread the Venice date as it is not clear, and agree with the alternative suggestion which is also now referenced. Thanks. TheRetroGuy (talk) 15:46, 26 November 2009 (UTC)

Symbol confirmed.svg All good for DYK now. Thanks. Nick Ottery (talk) 09:43, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

CU project controversy

Skavlan

  • ALT1:... that the Norwegian journalist Fredrik Skavlan was awarded with a Kristallen award in the "Best Television Host" category for his work on the Swedish talkshow Skavlan?

Created by Theleftorium (talk). Nominated by Theleftorium (talk) at 21:33, 25 November 2009 (UTC)

Retained surgical instruments

  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Date, length, and hook verified while AGF for offline references. Hard to believe there wasn't an article on this already. Will help with refnames to reduced redundent references Calmer Waters 07:15, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Laura Kirkpatrick

  • There is now an AFD debate going on about this article. Any chance we could hold off on this one until the debate is over? — Hunter Kahn (c) 22:51, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Kurt Yaghjian

List of members of the Council of Keble College, Oxford

Silver Reef, Utah

Referencing improved. --Daemonic Kangaroo (talk) 17:22, 25 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Fact for hook is not cited within the article. It appears in the first sentence of the header, but not within the body of the article. Would need inline sourced Calmer Waters 03:43, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

Kirkland Hotel

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St. Cecilia Catholic Church (Los Angeles)

St. Cecilia


National Archival Services of Norway

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  • Symbol confirmed.svg Date, length, and hook verified and sourced Calmer Waters 02:45, 28 November 2009 (UTC)


St. Nicolas' Church, North Stoneham

St. Nicolas clock.jpg

  • Symbol confirmed.svg I've got to hand it to you, although it may look like a wind up, I have to face the fact that it all checks out so I can tick this as a pass. I look forward to clocking this on the main page. </poor puns> BencherliteTalk 08:00, 27 November 2009 (UTC)


Older nominations

Articles created/expanded on November 24

Franco-Hungarian alliance

Franco Hungarian Treaty of Alliance 1529.jpg

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Verified. Ucucha 04:55, 30 November 2009 (UTC)


Norman Olson

  • Alternative suggestions would be appreciated. I don't feel that this is too negative, as it's documented fact and something he legitimately believes.
    ALT1 ... that after being kicked out of his Michigan Militia, Norman Olson moved to Alaska to attempt to start a militia there? Grsz11 18:48, 26 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Article is a little too short at 1479 b. I would prefer to leave out the "kicked out" bit, and keep it to his theories, which are quirky enough on their own:
  • Ucucha 03:13, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
I've added some, but please check it and let me know what you get because the original number I had was over 1500 using the javascriptkit.com tool. Grsz11 04:50, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
Symbol question.svg Prose is 1630 bytes, how about the hooks? Hold on, you've got a BLP article with no any basic detail on birth, place, early life, etc, etc. Any chance to have some of those? Materialscientist (talk) 04:55, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Not likely. I've got a location and atleast an early career (military), but nobody is concerned enough about his past to write about it it seems. Grsz11 05:23, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
  • As for hooks, I'm okay with any of them. Grsz11 05:24, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
    Why not adding what you've got and leave the reader to decide? I would be interested to know at least his age, but other details too, and I'm sure many would like to compare his early and recent life. Materialscientist (talk) 05:27, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
  • I mean those parts are already in: Alanson, Michigan and Air Force/Baptist preacher; and I've just added a birth year. Grsz11 05:34, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg No reason to hold this nom. Don't know which hook is better. To me, ALT2 sounds somewhat offensive to US-Japan relations. Others are Ok. Materialscientist (talk) 05:39, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
so what is the consensus on the better of hooks to be used. don't think the term kicked out is very encyclopedic. maybe involunarily dismissed. Are the orginal hook and ALT2 deemed out? Calmer Waters 04:58, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
I also didn't like "kicked out" (and it's a potential BLP concern). I don't really see how ALT2 is "offensive to US-Japan relations", as it is an obviously absurd claim, but we shouldn't use it if there are serious concerns with it. Ucucha 05:00, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

Spoon River College

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  • Symbol question.svg Expansion and date are Ok. Let us on focus on the hook. The article says "While Illinois law typically prevents community colleges from offering student housing SRC became one of the first in the State, and one of only a few dozen in the United States to arrange campus housing for students" Thus I was thinking to make up a hook that SRC offers student housing despite the state prevents that (strong isn't) but see no factual support yet. The refs talk about SRC intentions, and I don't see the fact for "prevents" (ref. 24?) I guess I'm missing something upon quick look and you can help explaining. Materialscientist (talk) 05:48, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
The notes for the factual support can be found on ref notes 24 and 25. Line 34 is the actual law regarding which buildings are permitted under the Community College act in Illinois, which is sourced from the legislature site for the state of Illinois. The second is the confirmation of this interpretation of the law via the "Forward" article in citation 25. If you look at Para 5 in the article discusses how colleges are directly prevented from building and managing on campus housing.

We could look at a couple of alternatives

  • Alt1 - ... that in spite of Illinois Law, Spoon River College is able to offer campus housing for its students?
  • Alt2 - ... that Spoon River College is one of only two community colleges in the State of Illinois to offer campus housing to its students?
  • Alt3 - ... that Spoon River College is the only community college to get around the Illinois state law prohibiting two-year colleges from offering student housing?

Your thoughts?IlliniGradResearch (talk) 06:03, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

  • Alt4 - ... that Spoon River College is one of only a few community colleges to get around the Illinois state law prohibiting two-year colleges from offering student housing?
  • Alt5 - ... that Spoon River College is one of only three community colleges in the State of Illinois to offer campus housing to its students?IlliniGradResearch (talk) 15:38, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
    Sorry for being .. me. I still do not observe a valid reference for any hook. Refs. 24-26 don't seem to talk about this college and don't say how many offer housing. Materialscientist (talk) 05:49, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
Looks good, can we get a thumbs up on Atl 7 from anyone?IlliniGradResearch (talk) 17:47, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
Pictogram voting keep.svg I'm OK with the sourcing for that (some refs are online but some are AGF), in the following reworded version:
Alt8 - ... that a partnership with Western Illinois University allows Spoon River College, a community college, to offer student housing and healthcare?
--Orlady (talk) 21:08, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
That's the best hook on phrasing, although it would be nice if we could incorporate something about that law, which in my view makes it substantially more interesting. Sourcing may make that difficult, though. Besides, we might get to Alt10, which is a feat worth having on its own. Ucucha 21:24, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
I agree with Ucucha regarding the law, and think it is an interesting aspect of this entire deal. I cited ref 24, which is the actual section of the Public Community College act which designates which buildings are permitted to be funded. The second is the confirmation of this interpretation of the law via the "Forward" article in citation 25. If you look at Para 5 in the article discusses how colleges are directly prevented from building and managing on campus housing. While the article does not mentioned SRC itself, it further backs up the issue regarding the law preventing student housing for Community Colleges. As mentioned in the article, so far, Illinois Central College and Joliet Junior College have gotten around this by using their foundations to finance and manage the operation. Shawnee Community College and Rend Lake College have done the same thing which can be seen in the articles themselves. However, SRC is unique in that it is the only one I could find in Illinois that has this type of arrangement with a local university. Does anyone have an ALT idea that the current refs could support that includes this aspect. If not, the current Alt 8 is good as well. Your thoughts?IlliniGradResearch (talk) 22:42, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
What about this:
Ucucha 22:46, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
Great hook for Alt 9 as it can be backed up by current refs (law-24) and partnership - (ref 27-29). Can we get an approval on this hook?IlliniGradResearch (talk) 23:02, 29 November 2009 (UTC)


Workington North railway station

  • Symbol question.svg Article contradicts hook, saying that it is still being built. Ucucha 14:32, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Construction started on 24th, opening originally scheduled for 28th, now 30th = still less than a week. This can wait a day or two. Mjroots (talk) 21:03, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
Services due to commence tomorrow, at which point a reliable source should become available confirming construction has been completed. Adambro (talk) 21:19, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
OK. Please add a note here when there is such a source, so that this hook can be confirmed and go on to the Main Page. Thanks for the clarification. Ucucha 21:22, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
The completion of the building work and opening of the station has been confirmed now by reliable sources and the article updated appropriately. I would support the above hook rather than the alternative below. Adambro (talk) 09:08, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
I've tweaked the hook to state "built in six days", which is referenced in the article. Mjroots (talk) 09:16, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

Alt 1

I just thought i would suggest this alternative.

  • Why is Simply South trying to claim the credit for an article that I nominated? Mjroots (talk) 07:24, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
I don't see how he is. Adambro (talk) 09:09, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
The nom credit above! Mjroots (talk) 09:15, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
I'm sure he's just suggesting an alternative and attributing himself as the author of that. Nothing more. Adambro (talk) 09:52, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

Bessie Moses

  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Looks good. Ucucha 14:33, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Son and Stranger

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Looks good except that the hook could be tightened up a bit. Mangoe (talk) 14:02, 25 November 2009 (UTC)
I guess the Word character counter doesn't work. How about this: ... that in Mendelssohn’s operetta Son and Stranger one part comprises only a few bars, all on the note F, because its creator, the composer’s brother-in-law Wilhelm Hensel, had no ability as a singer? Drhoehl (talk) 05:59, 27 November 2009 (UTC).
Yes, 197 characters is short enough (although I always leave approvals to others). I also use Word which said 209 for the original hook, so feel free to ask me more detailed questions about hook length after studying Q1. Art LaPella (talk) 06:22, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
My version of Word (a very old one) told me that the first hook was well under 200; I'm guessing that it didn't count the spaces. You were right, of course: when I went back and counted by hand, it was indeed 209. Thanks for catching the problem and the further review of the revised hook.Drhoehl (talk) 01:46, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Length, date, source, and hook (ALT1) all check out. LittleMountain5 02:05, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Jakub Wujek Bible

Why Won't My Parakeet Eat My Diarrhea

Silly, I know, but that's exactly what makes it the best kind of hook; it's going to catch people's eyes right away! Stonemason89 (talk) 02:59, 25 November 2009 (UTC)
Symbol possible vote.svg Article has an unresolved notability tag. Also, the fact of the hook appears to be uncited. Ucucha 14:40, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Abdul Hamid Adiamoh

  • Comment: This article was created by Gbola Adiamoh (talk · contribs), later deleted as a {{G11}}, and restored by myself. I used a part of original content.

Created by Vejvančický (talk). Nominated by Vejvančický (talk) at 18:53, 24 November 2009 (UTC)

  • Symbol question.svg Several uncited paragraphs, each of which needs to have sources attached to it. Also, the hook is kind of misleading in that he was actually arrested in Gambia, not Nigeria. Ucucha 14:43, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

The Legarde Twins

  • Symbol question.svg Under 1500 b after I copyedited it; please expand a little more. Ucucha 14:46, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Ventura Oil Field

  • Symbol confirmed.svg All set. Ucucha 14:53, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on November 23

St. Bendt's Church

St. Bendt's Church, Ringsted, Denmark

Created by Ipigott (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 09:40, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

John W. Reynolds (Oregon attorney)

John W. Reynolds

  • Comment: Passed bar in 1897, graduated from law school in 1899

Created by Aboutmovies (talk). Nominated by Aboutmovies (talk) at 10:04, 27 November 2009 (UTC)

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Meets requirements. It would be good if you could find out when he died, though. Ucucha 13:02, 29 November 2009 (UTC)


Naihe

  • Symbol confirmed.svg All set. Ucucha 13:06, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Antioch Dunes Evening Primrose

Antioch Dunes Evening Primrose.jpg

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Not the first in the world, as the hook suggests--the source only says it's the first in the country. No other problems. Ucucha 13:19, 29 November 2009 (UTC)


Memorial Park Site

  • Symbol question.svg Are you sure you are interpreting the U.S. army source correctly? I haven't read the whole thing, but to me it reads like it is the geological finds that span more than 8000 years, not the cultural remains. Ucucha 13:26, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
Yes, I'm sure. The site is geological in the sense that these cultural remains are buried in alluvial deposits at various depths. One of the sentences on page 1-1 of the source document says, "Every major prehistoric period from the Middle Archaic to the Late Woodland/Clemson Island is represented in sealed, stratigraphic context." Terms like Middle Archaic refer to the cultural deposits rather than the stream gravels in which they are buried. Finetooth (talk) 21:53, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
Thanks for that. However, I do think we need some more detailed references for the time period in that case, because there doesn't seem to be any reference that says that the Middle Archaic equals 6500 BCE. Ucucha 22:05, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Fisher Morgan

Pictogram voting keep.svg for both. Ucucha 13:31, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Dương Nhật Lễ

  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Revised the hook to make it a little shorter ("impotent" and "has no child" are redundant). Verified in good faith.

Hillside Cemetery (Middletown, New York)

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  • Pictogram voting keep.svg (couldn't open ref 1). Ucucha 13:43, 29 November 2009 (UTC)


Dan Kyle

  • Symbol question.svg You need a citation for the quote at the end of the article. Otherwise, no problems here. Ucucha 13:45, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
    • Symbol confirmed.svg Resolved now. Ucucha 22:36, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

Vanessa Lytton

CFM International CFM56

Rear view of a CFM56-5 turbofan engine.

  • Symbol delete vote.svg you need to add 16394 characters to meet the 5fold requirement. 38280 - 21886= 16394.--Caspian blue 05:35, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
Aside from the physical expansion, almost everything that was in the article before was rewritten and cited. The original article had nothing was cited and merely copy and pasted from the company's website. For all intents and purposes, this is a new article. -SidewinderX (talk) 13:52, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
If that is the case I guess that claiming copy-vio could be an option (per additional rule A4). Manxruler (talk) 18:07, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
I feel for you SidewinderX as I run into this situation myself. I rewrite an article that is complete crap (and worse in your case, a copyright violation) but ineligible for DYK due to the 5x rule. In many cases the work done is far longer than the 1500 needed for a completely new article that DOES qualify. Perhaps we need another different gold star prize for those of us who turn lead into gold?Thelmadatter (talk) 18:18, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Or, if this really is a case of copyright violation, this might still qualify per Additional rule A4... Manxruler (talk) 18:32, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
    Symbol possible vote.svg No. I have compared the texts before and after expansion and find that it is an expansion, not a rewriting from scratch (BTW, the latter is a usual DYK experience with 5x expansions - no complaints). Most parts and sentences of the old article are still there. The article is much better and is well referenced now - no doubt, but until it is expanded close to 5x, it should not pass. Materialscientist (talk) 11:24, 25 November 2009 (UTC)


Battle of La Paz

Symbol question.svg No in-text citations. Shouldnt the hook at least have that?Thelmadatter (talk) 03:28, 24 November 2009 (UTC)

  • Comment: The hook and one per paragraph, plz. @Kate (talk) 07:25, 24 November 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on November 21

Honor Rolls of Baseball

  • ... that the Honor Rolls of Baseball, established in 1946 to recognize the contributions of non-playing baseball personnel, lasted just the one year? Created by Neonblak (talk). Self nom at 17:56, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Symbol delete vote.svg Much of the article was plagiarized; I deleted that text. Ucucha 19:55, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg After deletion, the article shortened to 827 bytes of prose. It may be reconsidered if brought to at least 1500 without copyright violations. For future reference, please pay attention to rephrasing of the material used. Materialscientist (talk) 08:02, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on November 20

Moral agency in Judaism

  • Symbol question.svg Date and sourcing are good; can't verify the hook because the Jewish Encyclopedia site won't load. Significant portions of this article are apparently directly from a non-Wikipedia source (the JE), which is discouraged by rule M4. This article seems to be broader in scope than just "moral agency"; the parts about business and marriage don't have much to do with it. Ucucha 16:22, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Are you suggesting to merge this article into "moral agency"?--Cannibaloki 18:02, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
  • I think it's about agency in general, not just moral agency. Perhaps "agency in Judaism" would be a more fitting title, but that's for people who know more of it than I do to consider. Ucucha 18:18, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
  • I'm thinking we should handball this one to one of the Jewish wikiprojects to get someone to check it over to make sure it's reasonably accurate. The text all seems to be from either an old edition of the JE or from various primary sources, so we need to be sure there's nothing controversial in there. Gatoclass (talk) 00:14, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
  • Done. Thanks for weighing in. Ucucha 00:23, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

AkelPad

  • Symbol question.svg There are several problems: many paragraphs are entirely uncited; the direct quote in the hook is not in the article; and the neutrality of the article is questionable ("advantages" over Notepad); sourcing from Google Translate is rather dubious. Ucucha 00:53, 27 November 2009 (UTC)

Special occasion holding area

Note: Articles nominated for a special occasion should be nominated within five days of creation or expansion as usual (with the exception of April Fools'). Also, articles should be nominated at least five days before the occasion to give reviewers time to check the nomination.

Articles for December 11 (and following days) – Hanukkah

A Rugrats Chanukah

  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Lengths and hook facts OK (AGF on offline sources; citations are to RS sources). It's an interesting article. I wonder if the hook could be made more interesting by revising it to say "... that although the Rugrats episode "A Rugrats Chanukah" was pitched to the series crew by Nickelodeon in 1992, it was not produced until 1996?" --Orlady (talk) 03:02, 30 October 2009 (UTC)
  • That one does sound better. Consider that my ALT1. The Flash {talk} 02:31, 31 October 2009 (UTC)
  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Uninvolved tick for Orlady's Alt hook, it is an improvement on the original and the facts check out. Maedin\talk 12:38, 10 November 2009 (UTC)

Articles for December 25 – Christmas Day

Peace Candle

The Peace Candle

  • Comment: I've never done a DYK for a special occasion date, so sorry if I've handled it wrong at all. Please note, Holmes is supposed to flip the switch on November 27, so I figure after that time I can change it to past tense. Does that work? If not, I can come up with an alt, but I'll be gone for the next three or four days for the holiday, so I can handle it when I get back...

Created by Hunter Kahn (talk). Nominated by Hunter Kahn (talk) at 04:45, 25 November 2009 (UTC)

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Length, date, sources, image, and hook all check out. Changing to past tense tomorrow sounds good to me. LittleMountain5 Happy Thanksgiving! 18:48, 26 November 2009 (UTC)


Phineas and Ferb's Christmas Vacation

Big Bad Voodoo Daddy performing

  • Comment: Seeing that Jerk de Soleil thing on DYK this morning, and the fact that we finally have a future episode of this show with actual press coverage beforehand, is a great opportunity. It was either this, or saying that they think its going to be a holiday classic.

Created by ViperSnake151 (talk). Self nom at 22:17, 16 November 2009 (UTC)

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Date, length, hook verified. I'm saving this one for December 25 (Christmas Day) hooks. MuZemike 18:02, 23 November 2009 (UTC)


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