Talk:Dianetics: The Modern Science of Mental Health

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[edit] Horribly slanted "content" section

The first paragraph has a few lines about the actual content of the book, then has a much bigger section of fairly rampant debunking. If I wanted that I would have read the reception/criticism section. The "content" bit becomes almost unreadable for it's glaring lack of neutrality, but I suspect if I edited out the debunking portions, I would be labelled as a Scientologist who is making religiously-motivated edits. I checked out the page on Dianetics itself, and that doesn't have this problem at all. A nicely neutral bit of basic concepts, followed by a debunking in the appropriate section. I think the content section in this article should be majorly edited to fit the tone of the basic concepts section in that article. Thoughts? Wikiditm (talk) 12:55, 28 July 2011 (UTC)

I entirely agree; the Content section is pretty clearly NPOV ("Dianetics, in and of itself, thus presents nothing that was not already known to science in that area, while adding phenomena and functional systems that have no basis in fact"—seriously?) and a thorough rewrite would be quite justified, or at the very least a transfer of all the sourced criticisms to a separate Criticism section, as with the main Dianetics article. Also, for a section that offers a link to a main article for more detail, the Content section is way too long; a paragraph-long summary of the ideas contained in the book would suffice. --Wordshark (talk) 07:23, 4 August 2011 (UTC)
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