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Composers Project Assessment of Ludwig van Beethoven: 2008-12-14
This is an assessment of article Ludwig van Beethoven by a member of the Composers project, according to its assessment criteria. This review was done by Magicpiano.
If an article is well-cited, the reviewer is assuming that the article reflects reasonably current scholarship, and deficiencies in the historical record that are documented in a particular area will be appropriately scored. If insufficient inline citations are present, the reviewer will assume that deficiencies in that area may be cured, and that area may be scored down.
Adherence to overall Wikipedia standards (WP:MOS, WP:WIAGA, WP:WIAFA) are the reviewer's opinion, and are not a substitute for the Wikipedia's processes for awarding Good Article or Featured Article status.
- Origins/family background/studies
Does the article reflect what is known about the composer's background and childhood? If s/he received musical training as a child, who from, is the experience and nature of the early teachers' influences described?
Good
- Early career
Does the article indicate when s/he started composing, discuss early style, success/failure? Are other pedagogic and personal influences from this time on his/her music discussed?
Musical mentions are limited.
- Mature career
Does the article discuss his/her adult life and composition history? Are other pedagogic and personal influences from this time on his/her music discussed?
Content is disorganized; musical mentions limited.
- List(s) of works
Are lists of the composer's works in WP, linked from this article? If there are special catalogs (e.g. Köchel for Mozart, Hoboken for Haydn), are they used? If the composer has written more than 20-30 works, any exhaustive listing should be placed in a separate article.
Good
- Critical appreciation
Does the article discuss his/her style, reception by critics and the public (both during his/her life, and over time)?
Surprisingly lacking.
- Illustrations and sound clips
Does the article contain images of its subject, birthplace, gravesite or other memorials, important residences, manuscript pages, museums, etc? Does it contain samples of the composer's work (as composer and/or performer, if appropriate)? (Note that since many 20th-century works are copyrighted, it may not be possible to acquire more than brief fair use samples of those works, but efforts should be made to do so.) If an article is of high enough quality, do its images and media comply with image use policy and non-free content policy? (Adherence to these is needed for Good Article or Featured Article consideration, and is apparently a common reason for nominations being quick-failed.)
Good
- References, sources and bibliography
Does the article contain a suitable number of references? Does it contain sufficient inline citations? (For an article to pass Good Article nomination, every paragraph possibly excepting those in the lead, and every direct quotation, should have at least one footnote.) If appropriate, does it include Further Reading or Bibliography beyond the cited references?
Article has "Further reading" and inline citations. No separate references. Inline cites are inadequate for GA/FA.
- Structure and compliance with WP
- MOS
Does the article comply with Wikipedia style and layout guidelines, especially WP:MOS, WP:LEAD, WP:LAYOUT, and possibly WP:SIZE? (Article length is not generally significant, although Featured Articles Candidates may be questioned for excessive length.)
Lead is short. External links may need scrubbing.
- Things that may be necessary to pass a Good Article review
- Article requires more inline citations (WP:CITE)
- Article lead needs work (WP:LEAD)
- Article prose needs work (WP:MOS)
- Summary
I found this article to be a difficult read, and somewhat disappointing, considering the notability and importance of the subject. While the biography starts out as a somewhat typical biography, it disintegrates into a series of seemingly disjointed sections concerning events and conditions in his adult life, without notable continuity between them. The section headings and subheadings of the biographical section don't seem to have any rhyme or reason to them. There is at least one notable conflict in information between this article and Life and work of Ludwig van Beethoven: when his deafness is reported to begin. The Music section is somewhat superficial.
I find the organization of articles about Beethoven and what they cover to be confusing. The biography here has virtually no compositional components to it; we don't know from reading it when even a few of his many famous works were written. (I would expect this article to at least summarize some of this sort of information, even if most of it is in the "Life and work" article) Musicological descriptions of his style and its development over his life (something I'm sure whole books have been written about) are treated somewhat superficially. Instances of Beethoven's influence on later composers would be appropriate somewhere; there is but a brief mention in the "Life and work" article. (Note that I am not questioning or denying his influence; robust examples of e.g. another major composer using the idea of a germ-motif are what's missing.) Descriptions of some of his concerts and the public reception of his works appear to be lacking (for example, some of his concerts were notably long, and his music was not always well-received -- if it's here somewhere, I haven't been able to find it). Historical information about how his works were received or notably interpreted and analyzed throughout the time since his death is almost entirely absent.
Editors working on this article might look to Mozart and Maurice Ravel as examples of better-written articles about famous composers.
The article's structure is decent. The lead is short for an article of this length; it should be 3-4 paragraphs. There are some inline citations; no References section. Much of the article is uncited; combined with a lack of References, we have no idea where this information comes from. The External Links section could likely stand to be scrubbed, given how long it is.
This article might be B-class, but it is an embarrassment to Wikipedia in the condition it is in. Magic♪piano 03:44, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
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Composers Project Assessment of Ludwig van Beethoven: 2008-12-14
This is an assessment of article Ludwig van Beethoven by a member of the Composers project, according to its assessment criteria. This review was done by Magicpiano.
If an article is well-cited, the reviewer is assuming that the article reflects reasonably current scholarship, and deficiencies in the historical record that are documented in a particular area will be appropriately scored. If insufficient inline citations are present, the reviewer will assume that deficiencies in that area may be cured, and that area may be scored down.
Adherence to overall Wikipedia standards (WP:MOS, WP:WIAGA, WP:WIAFA) are the reviewer's opinion, and are not a substitute for the Wikipedia's processes for awarding Good Article or Featured Article status.
- Origins/family background/studies
Does the article reflect what is known about the composer's background and childhood? If s/he received musical training as a child, who from, is the experience and nature of the early teachers' influences described?
Good
- Early career
Does the article indicate when s/he started composing, discuss early style, success/failure? Are other pedagogic and personal influences from this time on his/her music discussed?
Musical mentions are limited.
- Mature career
Does the article discuss his/her adult life and composition history? Are other pedagogic and personal influences from this time on his/her music discussed?
Content is disorganized; musical mentions limited.
- List(s) of works
Are lists of the composer's works in WP, linked from this article? If there are special catalogs (e.g. Köchel for Mozart, Hoboken for Haydn), are they used? If the composer has written more than 20-30 works, any exhaustive listing should be placed in a separate article.
Good
- Critical appreciation
Does the article discuss his/her style, reception by critics and the public (both during his/her life, and over time)?
Surprisingly lacking.
- Illustrations and sound clips
Does the article contain images of its subject, birthplace, gravesite or other memorials, important residences, manuscript pages, museums, etc? Does it contain samples of the composer's work (as composer and/or performer, if appropriate)? (Note that since many 20th-century works are copyrighted, it may not be possible to acquire more than brief fair use samples of those works, but efforts should be made to do so.) If an article is of high enough quality, do its images and media comply with image use policy and non-free content policy? (Adherence to these is needed for Good Article or Featured Article consideration, and is apparently a common reason for nominations being quick-failed.)
Good
- References, sources and bibliography
Does the article contain a suitable number of references? Does it contain sufficient inline citations? (For an article to pass Good Article nomination, every paragraph possibly excepting those in the lead, and every direct quotation, should have at least one footnote.) If appropriate, does it include Further Reading or Bibliography beyond the cited references?
Article has "Further reading" and inline citations. No separate references. Inline cites are inadequate for GA/FA.
- Structure and compliance with WP
- MOS
Does the article comply with Wikipedia style and layout guidelines, especially WP:MOS, WP:LEAD, WP:LAYOUT, and possibly WP:SIZE? (Article length is not generally significant, although Featured Articles Candidates may be questioned for excessive length.)
Lead is short. External links may need scrubbing.
- Things that may be necessary to pass a Good Article review
- Article requires more inline citations (WP:CITE)
- Article lead needs work (WP:LEAD)
- Article prose needs work (WP:MOS)
- Summary
I found this article to be a difficult read, and somewhat disappointing, considering the notability and importance of the subject. While the biography starts out as a somewhat typical biography, it disintegrates into a series of seemingly disjointed sections concerning events and conditions in his adult life, without notable continuity between them. The section headings and subheadings of the biographical section don't seem to have any rhyme or reason to them. There is at least one notable conflict in information between this article and Life and work of Ludwig van Beethoven: when his deafness is reported to begin. The Music section is somewhat superficial.
I find the organization of articles about Beethoven and what they cover to be confusing. The biography here has virtually no compositional components to it; we don't know from reading it when even a few of his many famous works were written. (I would expect this article to at least summarize some of this sort of information, even if most of it is in the "Life and work" article) Musicological descriptions of his style and its development over his life (something I'm sure whole books have been written about) are treated somewhat superficially. Instances of Beethoven's influence on later composers would be appropriate somewhere; there is but a brief mention in the "Life and work" article. (Note that I am not questioning or denying his influence; robust examples of e.g. another major composer using the idea of a germ-motif are what's missing.) Descriptions of some of his concerts and the public reception of his works appear to be lacking (for example, some of his concerts were notably long, and his music was not always well-received -- if it's here somewhere, I haven't been able to find it). Historical information about how his works were received or notably interpreted and analyzed throughout the time since his death is almost entirely absent.
Editors working on this article might look to Mozart and Maurice Ravel as examples of better-written articles about famous composers.
The article's structure is decent. The lead is short for an article of this length; it should be 3-4 paragraphs. There are some inline citations; no References section. Much of the article is uncited; combined with a lack of References, we have no idea where this information comes from. The External Links section could likely stand to be scrubbed, given how long it is.
This article might be B-class, but it is an embarrassment to Wikipedia in the condition it is in. Magic♪piano 03:44, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
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Composers Project Assessment of Ludwig van Beethoven: 2008-12-14
This is an assessment of article Ludwig van Beethoven by a member of the Composers project, according to its assessment criteria. This review was done by Magicpiano.
If an article is well-cited, the reviewer is assuming that the article reflects reasonably current scholarship, and deficiencies in the historical record that are documented in a particular area will be appropriately scored. If insufficient inline citations are present, the reviewer will assume that deficiencies in that area may be cured, and that area may be scored down.
Adherence to overall Wikipedia standards (WP:MOS, WP:WIAGA, WP:WIAFA) are the reviewer's opinion, and are not a substitute for the Wikipedia's processes for awarding Good Article or Featured Article status.
- Origins/family background/studies
Does the article reflect what is known about the composer's background and childhood? If s/he received musical training as a child, who from, is the experience and nature of the early teachers' influences described?
Good
- Early career
Does the article indicate when s/he started composing, discuss early style, success/failure? Are other pedagogic and personal influences from this time on his/her music discussed?
Musical mentions are limited.
- Mature career
Does the article discuss his/her adult life and composition history? Are other pedagogic and personal influences from this time on his/her music discussed?
Content is disorganized; musical mentions limited.
- List(s) of works
Are lists of the composer's works in WP, linked from this article? If there are special catalogs (e.g. Köchel for Mozart, Hoboken for Haydn), are they used? If the composer has written more than 20-30 works, any exhaustive listing should be placed in a separate article.
Good
- Critical appreciation
Does the article discuss his/her style, reception by critics and the public (both during his/her life, and over time)?
Surprisingly lacking.
- Illustrations and sound clips
Does the article contain images of its subject, birthplace, gravesite or other memorials, important residences, manuscript pages, museums, etc? Does it contain samples of the composer's work (as composer and/or performer, if appropriate)? (Note that since many 20th-century works are copyrighted, it may not be possible to acquire more than brief fair use samples of those works, but efforts should be made to do so.) If an article is of high enough quality, do its images and media comply with image use policy and non-free content policy? (Adherence to these is needed for Good Article or Featured Article consideration, and is apparently a common reason for nominations being quick-failed.)
Good
- References, sources and bibliography
Does the article contain a suitable number of references? Does it contain sufficient inline citations? (For an article to pass Good Article nomination, every paragraph possibly excepting those in the lead, and every direct quotation, should have at least one footnote.) If appropriate, does it include Further Reading or Bibliography beyond the cited references?
Article has "Further reading" and inline citations. No separate references. Inline cites are inadequate for GA/FA.
- Structure and compliance with WP
- MOS
Does the article comply with Wikipedia style and layout guidelines, especially WP:MOS, WP:LEAD, WP:LAYOUT, and possibly WP:SIZE? (Article length is not generally significant, although Featured Articles Candidates may be questioned for excessive length.)
Lead is short. External links may need scrubbing.
- Things that may be necessary to pass a Good Article review
- Article requires more inline citations (WP:CITE)
- Article lead needs work (WP:LEAD)
- Article prose needs work (WP:MOS)
- Summary
I found this article to be a difficult read, and somewhat disappointing, considering the notability and importance of the subject. While the biography starts out as a somewhat typical biography, it disintegrates into a series of seemingly disjointed sections concerning events and conditions in his adult life, without notable continuity between them. The section headings and subheadings of the biographical section don't seem to have any rhyme or reason to them. There is at least one notable conflict in information between this article and Life and work of Ludwig van Beethoven: when his deafness is reported to begin. The Music section is somewhat superficial.
I find the organization of articles about Beethoven and what they cover to be confusing. The biography here has virtually no compositional components to it; we don't know from reading it when even a few of his many famous works were written. (I would expect this article to at least summarize some of this sort of information, even if most of it is in the "Life and work" article) Musicological descriptions of his style and its development over his life (something I'm sure whole books have been written about) are treated somewhat superficially. Instances of Beethoven's influence on later composers would be appropriate somewhere; there is but a brief mention in the "Life and work" article. (Note that I am not questioning or denying his influence; robust examples of e.g. another major composer using the idea of a germ-motif are what's missing.) Descriptions of some of his concerts and the public reception of his works appear to be lacking (for example, some of his concerts were notably long, and his music was not always well-received -- if it's here somewhere, I haven't been able to find it). Historical information about how his works were received or notably interpreted and analyzed throughout the time since his death is almost entirely absent.
Editors working on this article might look to Mozart and Maurice Ravel as examples of better-written articles about famous composers.
The article's structure is decent. The lead is short for an article of this length; it should be 3-4 paragraphs. There are some inline citations; no References section. Much of the article is uncited; combined with a lack of References, we have no idea where this information comes from. The External Links section could likely stand to be scrubbed, given how long it is.
This article might be B-class, but it is an embarrassment to Wikipedia in the condition it is in. Magic♪piano 03:44, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
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Composers Project Assessment of Ludwig van Beethoven: 2008-12-14
This is an assessment of article Ludwig van Beethoven by a member of the Composers project, according to its assessment criteria. This review was done by Magicpiano.
If an article is well-cited, the reviewer is assuming that the article reflects reasonably current scholarship, and deficiencies in the historical record that are documented in a particular area will be appropriately scored. If insufficient inline citations are present, the reviewer will assume that deficiencies in that area may be cured, and that area may be scored down.
Adherence to overall Wikipedia standards (WP:MOS, WP:WIAGA, WP:WIAFA) are the reviewer's opinion, and are not a substitute for the Wikipedia's processes for awarding Good Article or Featured Article status.
- Origins/family background/studies
Does the article reflect what is known about the composer's background and childhood? If s/he received musical training as a child, who from, is the experience and nature of the early teachers' influences described?
Good
- Early career
Does the article indicate when s/he started composing, discuss early style, success/failure? Are other pedagogic and personal influences from this time on his/her music discussed?
Musical mentions are limited.
- Mature career
Does the article discuss his/her adult life and composition history? Are other pedagogic and personal influences from this time on his/her music discussed?
Content is disorganized; musical mentions limited.
- List(s) of works
Are lists of the composer's works in WP, linked from this article? If there are special catalogs (e.g. Köchel for Mozart, Hoboken for Haydn), are they used? If the composer has written more than 20-30 works, any exhaustive listing should be placed in a separate article.
Good
- Critical appreciation
Does the article discuss his/her style, reception by critics and the public (both during his/her life, and over time)?
Surprisingly lacking.
- Illustrations and sound clips
Does the article contain images of its subject, birthplace, gravesite or other memorials, important residences, manuscript pages, museums, etc? Does it contain samples of the composer's work (as composer and/or performer, if appropriate)? (Note that since many 20th-century works are copyrighted, it may not be possible to acquire more than brief fair use samples of those works, but efforts should be made to do so.) If an article is of high enough quality, do its images and media comply with image use policy and non-free content policy? (Adherence to these is needed for Good Article or Featured Article consideration, and is apparently a common reason for nominations being quick-failed.)
Good
- References, sources and bibliography
Does the article contain a suitable number of references? Does it contain sufficient inline citations? (For an article to pass Good Article nomination, every paragraph possibly excepting those in the lead, and every direct quotation, should have at least one footnote.) If appropriate, does it include Further Reading or Bibliography beyond the cited references?
Article has "Further reading" and inline citations. No separate references. Inline cites are inadequate for GA/FA.
- Structure and compliance with WP
- MOS
Does the article comply with Wikipedia style and layout guidelines, especially WP:MOS, WP:LEAD, WP:LAYOUT, and possibly WP:SIZE? (Article length is not generally significant, although Featured Articles Candidates may be questioned for excessive length.)
Lead is short. External links may need scrubbing.
- Things that may be necessary to pass a Good Article review
- Article requires more inline citations (WP:CITE)
- Article lead needs work (WP:LEAD)
- Article prose needs work (WP:MOS)
- Summary
I found this article to be a difficult read, and somewhat disappointing, considering the notability and importance of the subject. While the biography starts out as a somewhat typical biography, it disintegrates into a series of seemingly disjointed sections concerning events and conditions in his adult life, without notable continuity between them. The section headings and subheadings of the biographical section don't seem to have any rhyme or reason to them. There is at least one notable conflict in information between this article and Life and work of Ludwig van Beethoven: when his deafness is reported to begin. The Music section is somewhat superficial.
I find the organization of articles about Beethoven and what they cover to be confusing. The biography here has virtually no compositional components to it; we don't know from reading it when even a few of his many famous works were written. (I would expect this article to at least summarize some of this sort of information, even if most of it is in the "Life and work" article) Musicological descriptions of his style and its development over his life (something I'm sure whole books have been written about) are treated somewhat superficially. Instances of Beethoven's influence on later composers would be appropriate somewhere; there is but a brief mention in the "Life and work" article. (Note that I am not questioning or denying his influence; robust examples of e.g. another major composer using the idea of a germ-motif are what's missing.) Descriptions of some of his concerts and the public reception of his works appear to be lacking (for example, some of his concerts were notably long, and his music was not always well-received -- if it's here somewhere, I haven't been able to find it). Historical information about how his works were received or notably interpreted and analyzed throughout the time since his death is almost entirely absent.
Editors working on this article might look to Mozart and Maurice Ravel as examples of better-written articles about famous composers.
The article's structure is decent. The lead is short for an article of this length; it should be 3-4 paragraphs. There are some inline citations; no References section. Much of the article is uncited; combined with a lack of References, we have no idea where this information comes from. The External Links section could likely stand to be scrubbed, given how long it is.
This article might be B-class, but it is an embarrassment to Wikipedia in the condition it is in. Magic♪piano 03:44, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
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