Talk:Military Auxiliary Radio System

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Jump to: navigation, search
Megaphone icon.
 This article or section reads like a news release, or is otherwise written in an overly promotional tone. Please help by either rewriting this article from a neutral point of view or by moving this article to Wikinews. When appropriate, blatant advertising may be marked for speedy deletion with {{db-spam}}.
Peer review Military Auxiliary Radio System received a peer review by Wikipedia editors, which is now archived.  It may contain ideas you can use to improve this article.
WikiProject Military history (Rated C-Class)
MILHIST This article is within the scope of the Military history WikiProject. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the project and see a list of open tasks. To use this banner, please see the full instructions.
C This article has been rated as C-Class on the quality scale.
WikiProject Amateur radio (Rated B-class, Low-importance)
WikiProject icon
Portal icon Radio portal
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Amateur radio, which collaborates on articles related to amateur radio technology, organizations, and activities. If you would like to participate, you can edit the article attached to this page, or visit the project page, where you can join the project and/or contribute to the discussion.
 B  This article has been rated as B-Class on the project's quality scale.
 Low  This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.
 

[edit] American bias

It should be mentioned that this is an american program. They do not hold a monopoly on all thing military.--Madison Gray 16:29, 31 August 2005 (UTC)

I think it's pretty obvious from the article that this is a program of the United States military. It's unclear what the objection is about.--Kharker (talk) 16:34, 26 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Tag & Assess 2008

Article reassessed and graded as start class. --dashiellx (talk) 20:20, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Promotional Tone (Newsrelease)

I'm concerned about the tone of the article. It comes across as promotional, almost like a press release. Phrases like:

  • "The Military Affiliate Radio System is just as active today as it ever was"
  • "MARS continues to be very active today"
  • "Their efforts were very successful"

Should be replaced by objective measures of success or activity to make the article more neutral. twilsonb (talk) 00:33, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Retrieved from "http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Military_Auxiliary_Radio_System&oldid=334924842"
Personal tools
Namespaces
Variants
Actions
Navigation
Interaction
Toolbox
Print/export