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[edit] First Sentence is Clumsy.
The first sentence has "alleged" and "supposedly" both in the same sentence. I think one of the other conveys the intended meaning, but using both sounds a bit over-dramatic. We got it. Maybe it didn't really happen. One of those is enough.````Jonny Quick
[edit] First Sentence is Clumsy.
The first sentence has "alleged" and "supposedly" both in the same sentence. I think one of the other conveys the intended meaning, but using both sounds a bit over-dramatic. We got it. Maybe it didn't really happen. One of those is enough.````Jonny Quick
[edit] First Sentence is Clumsy.
The first sentence has "alleged" and "supposedly" both in the same sentence. I think one of the other conveys the intended meaning, but using both sounds a bit over-dramatic. We got it. Maybe it didn't really happen. One of those is enough.````Jonny Quick — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jonny Quick (talk • contribs) 03:31, 29 September 2011 (UTC)