Talk:Six-Day War

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Former good article nominee Six-Day War was one of the good article nominees, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There are suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.


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[edit] Non-NPOV in Golan section

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First, the Israeli government had no intention of capturing the West Bank. On the contrary, it was opposed to it. Second, there was not any provocation on the part of the IDF. Third, the rein was only loosened when a real threat to Jerusalem's security emerged. This is truly how things happened on June 5, although it is difficult to believe. The end result was something that no one had planned.[65]

is arguably purely an opinion, and highly non-NPOV. How does how express 'intent' as a fact? What is a 'real' threat? What is 'no one'? How does one prove 'no one'? Why the word 'truly'? This is essentially pure editorializing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.234.140.124 (talk) 07:57, 14 August 2011 (UTC)

[edit] Syria & the UAR

Syria seceded from the UAR in 1961. 79.177.222.146 (talk) 17:47, 24 September 2011 (UTC)

[edit] File:Golan evacuation.jpg Nominated for speedy Deletion

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[edit] Mergefrom Mauritania-Israel war of 1967

Mauritania-Israel war of 1967 +-> Six-Day War

I propose that Mauritania-Israel war of 1967 be merged into this article, Six-Day War. It is a coincident declaration that had no substantive effect, and can be addressed in the section "Conclusion of conflict and post-war situation". 76.65.128.132 (talk) 21:41, 27 December 2011 (UTC)

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