Talk:Spenserian stanza
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The article claims that Tennyson's Lotus eaters uses Spenserian stanzas, which should mean an ababbcbcc rhyme scheme. But looking at the poem, it clearly doesn't follow this scheme:
- There is sweet music here that softer falls
- Than petals from blown roses on the grass,
- Or night-dews on still waters between walls
- Of shadowy granite, in a gleaming pass ;
- Music that gentlier on the spirit lies,
- Than tired eyelids upon tired eyes ;
- Music that brings sweet sleep down from the blissful skies.
- Here are cool mosses deep,
- And through the moss the ivies creep,
- And in the stream the long-leaved flowers weep,
- And from the craggy ledge the poppy hangs in sleep.
The rhyme scheme here is "ababcccdddd"
Palefire 15:26, Jun 4, 2005 (UTC)
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- No one seems to be able to justify this, so I've deleted the bit about Tennyson. Palefire 17:29, Jun 11, 2005 (UTC)
[edit] redundancy
Pentameter is, by definition, made up of five feet; hexameters are by definition made up of six feet. Editing redundancy accordingly.
please check: "Each verse contains nine lines in total". I think the author ment to say "Each stanza". it's not a big deal, it is perfectly understandeable, but just in case... —Preceding unsigned comment added by 83.184.125.244 (talk) 15:12, 19 September 2007 (UTC)