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[edit] Sorry for what just happened
Just got a little overzealous here. I'll try not to let it happen again. →Dyl@n620 02:42, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
- No worries. You know if you didn't mention it I wouldn't have noticed it since you reverted your reversion almost immediately. To other editors who are wondering what Dylan620 is referring to, he accidentally reverted me archiving the talk page. - kollision (talk) 14:09, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
[edit] Articles
-to use with this article--J.D. (talk) 18:16, 26 March 2009 (UTC)
[edit] Assassination Storyline
Anent this sentence: "Barnes, however, learns from Stan Goff that Whiting is responsible and, through his powerful political connections, threatens him and his family unless he halts the investigation and releases Barnes' passports."
I don't like "...through his powerful political connections..." as it doesn't seem clear in the film that this is the case. Isn't Barnes politically bankrupt at this point? All he has left is brute force, highlighted by the suspenseful home invasion scene. I would re-write it: "Barnes, however, learns from Stan Goff that Whiting is responsible. Barnes then threatens Whiting and his family unless he halts the investigation and releases Barnes' passports." Unless there is evidence that Barnes does threaten "through powerful political connections" Ovid962 (talk) 16:49, 10 September 2010 (UTC)
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