Talk:12 Days (book)/GA1
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Reviewer: BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 22:13, 28 April 2011 (UTC)
This is a very good short article. Your referencing is strong, the writing is well done, and the article is just really tight overall. I'll pass the article, but I just wanted to suggest that you define the "smoothie aspect" in the Reception section. I'm pretty sure that what you mean is that the protagonist used the ashes in smoothies, but it's not immediately clear, nor referenced anywhere else in the article. Apart from that, great job. (I did a quick copyedit.) BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 22:13, 28 April 2011 (UTC)