Talk:2000–01 South-West Indian Ocean cyclone season

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Todo[edit]

All storms need a description. --Anhamirak 18:40, 31 August 2009 (UTC)

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:2000–01 South-West Indian Ocean cyclone season/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 18:43, 1 September 2014 (UTC)

Hello Hurricanehink! I will be reviewing this article today and I am hoping to list this as a Good Article in the near future. After an initial skim-through, it looks good, but I still have a some issues that will need to be fixed/addressed first:

  • "It started early, with a tropical disturbance forming on August 1 – the first day of the cyclone year." - Correct me if I am wrong, but I don't see that last part anywhere else in the article. So you will need to add a citation for that.
  • Apparently this wasn't necessary--12george1 (talk) 21:07, 1 September 2014 (UTC)
  • "(ITCZ) about 400 km south-west of Diego Garcia," - Convert 400 km to miles
  • "(78 mph) and rainfall reached 141 millimetres (5.6 in)." - Why is millimetres not abbreviated here?
  • Did Ando impact Madagascar? I see information as far west as Swaziland.'
  • "of Cocos Island or about 1165 km (625 mi) southwest" - Comma needed :P
  • "In addition, the system produced gusts of 101 kilometres per hour (63 mph)," - Why is kilometres per hour not abbreviated?
  • "producing additional river flooding Zambezi in an region that had been flooded for weeks.[3] " - I don't think that's grammatically correct
  • "with 23 millimetres (0.91 in) of rainfall recorded." - Ditto, except we're talking about millimetres here
  • "about 350 mi (215 km) west-northwest of the Cocos Islands in the Australian region" - Reverse the units

As I said above, fix/address these issues and I will be happy to pass this article. :) --12george1 (talk) 18:43, 1 September 2014 (UTC)

I believe I addressed everything, except for the Ando in Madagascar bit, which the sources did not state anything about. Thanks for reviewing! ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 21:00, 1 September 2014 (UTC)
Ok. Good job, Hurricanehink! I will now pass this article and list it as a Good Article. Congratulations, --12george1 (talk) 21:07, 1 September 2014 (UTC)