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I re-wrote the article. Kept a lot of the original text, but added and expanded the whole article. Hopefully it is a higher quality article now. Mdhandley 01:03, 11 November 2006 (UTC)
I think the article shows a lot of promise, and is very well written and sourced, but it does not have enough content to upgrade its rating. I think adding album pages would help (instead of linking to a 3rd party site), as well as adding more information about his band and influences. Also, the introduction says that he is an author. Did he write a book? If so, I think that it should be included in the article (as long as it is reasonably important). Good job so far. – Heaven's Wrath Talk 01:49, 11 November 2006 (UTC)
Good work on adding the albums, I went through and fixed the formatting and added some of the track lengths. – Heaven's Wrath Talk 03:26, 12 November 2006 (UTC)