Talk:ActivMedia Robotics

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Deletion/Cleanup[edit]

This doesn't feel encyclopedic...more like a poorly-written company profile. Lots of jargon and business speak, especially in the last paragraph.

MobileRobots has also been a pioneer in flexible intelligent AGV applications, designing the control system used by RMT Robotics to develop its ADAM SGV (Self-Guided Vehicle), used for complex pick-n-place operations, in conjunction with gantry systems and industrial robot arms, used in first-tier auto supply factories to move products from process to process in non-linear layouts. Smaller versions also work in semi-conductor plant clean rooms, carrying product from workstation to workstation.

Please clean or delete... 71.97.134.4 (talk) 02:39, 27 November 2007 (UTC)

Article still needs to be cleaned of business speak, jargon, and marketing language. Unreferenced. Jo7hs2 (talk) 02:03, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
It also lacks any factual numbers like number of employers or business volume. --PaterMcFly talk contribs 16:16, 14 February 2010 (UTC)
I can look at an example of another company article if you know of a good one. Maybe an explicit Stub with basic facts would be appropriate? Thanks (I am a MobileRobots employee) ReedHedges (talk) 16:59, 14 April 2011 (UTC)