Talk:Adlertag

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 23:36, 10 February 2011 (UTC) I will comment soon. Have a good review! WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 23:36, 10 February 2011 (UTC)

Comments

  • ...the use of Radio Direction Finding (RDF, later called radar...)...The technology was named RDF with misleading intent, to disguise the nature of the system to the enemy. In the same paragraph. Why was was the name RDF chosen with misleading intent? RDF does not need to be mentioned as the chosen name twice. WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 23:44, 10 February 2011 (UTC)Yes check.svg Done
  • ...the end of the war. There work is the most detailed available Clarify, and fix an apparent grammatical mistake. WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 23:45, 10 February 2011 (UTC)

Yes check.svg Done

  • Sometimes Aldertag is italicized, sometimes it isn't. In my opinion, it should. Wikicopter what i do s + c cup|former 00:55, 20 February 2011 (UTC) Yes check.svg Done

I can't find anything else for you. Passed. Wikicopter what i do s + c cup|former 17:01, 21 February 2011 (UTC)