Talk:Adrian Dominican Sisters

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Pretty well-written article IMO. Almost no bias (POV) which is remarkable. Like most Catholic articles, it really needs to try to eliminate the "Mother Sally did this" explanation, and allow the order to do things.Or just state that they got done. This is more true now than years ago when the Mothers-Provincial and -General had a lot more power. That is, the emphasis should be on the order not on people. Some of these people, Mother Gerald in particular, should have their own articles IMO. Their accomplishments can be noted there. Student7 (talk) 21:06, 10 January 2009 (UTC)