Talk:Always Be My Baby/GA1
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:03, 12 December 2010 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
- "he says he'll always be a part of her" - no contractions, please
- Choose either US (here) or U.S. (charts)
- "a record she passed in the near future" - rewmove
- "five in New Zealand, seventeen in Australia and top twenty" → number five in New Zealand, number seventeen in Australia and in the top twenty
- The second and third paragraphs should be swapped around
- Can you included the recording and release info in the article's body?
Background and recording[edit]
- You add Seal's last name in the quote, but not Dupri's. Either way, be consistent
Composition[edit]
- The two sheet music notes are quite different. I'm not sure what to do here?
- Rename section 'Composition and critical reception'
Chart performance[edit]
- Italicise Billboard
- "Always Be My Baby" stayed at two for four weeks" - number two
Official versions and remixes[edit]
- "(Da Brat would later go on to rap on remixes of "Honey" (1997), "I Still Believe" (1998), "Heartbreaker" (1999), "Loverboy" (2001), and "4real4real", an international bonus track for Carey's album, E=MC².)" - is this needed? If so, remove from brackets and reference
- "Dance remixes with re-recorded vocals were produced by David Morales and Satoshi Tomiie of Def Mix Productions. There was also a reggae remix featuring Lil Vicious." - source?
- "The US single includes a song called "Slipping Away"" - is this a B-side? If so, make this clear and add it to the infobox. Do you have a track listing?
Music video[edit]
- Does File:Alwaybemybaby.jpg really add anything to a reader's understanding?
- "The video concludes with scenes of the young boy and girl waling" - waling? really?
- Who directed the second video?
Live performances and cover version[edit]
- Remove quote marks from Rainbow World Tour and Adventures of Mimi Tou (second times)
References[edit]
- I'm not sure about Longboredsurfer.com. Is there anything else you can use?