Talk:Amor Gitano/GA1

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Reviewer: CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 04:36, 25 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

  • Usually, if there is a translation (there is), we place it in the lead in bold next to the title, so readers know what it means right at the top.  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • I'm not sure I would consider Knowles a singer-songwriter. She might be singer and a songwriter, meaning she occasionally writes some music in her songs, but a singer-songwriter is someone that writes and composes all of their own material, McCartney, Lennon, Carey, Dylan, Morissette etc. I highly doubt she does that.  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • If you're going to link Mexican, then why not American  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • The song contains a crossover of cultures -> could be better  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • motly  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • the exotic language of Fernández -> ummm, Spanish?  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • R&B influences of Knowles -> how dies she do that? Her voice contains R&B infusion?  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Knowles see to the writing of the song -> ?  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Knowles, Knowles, Knowles  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Knowles herself take to production for the song  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • on the premiere -> during  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • for which it serves as the theme song. -> this whole sentence could be far better  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • was generally received with mixed to positive reception from music critics  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • flamenco-pop that dominates the song's genre -> how does flamenco and pop (which is a genre), dominate a genre?  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • offensive due to the stereotypical lyrics -> should give us a sentence on its lyrical content
I need help here. Please. Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Amor Gitano" topped the charts US Hot Latin Songs chart. -> no tiny, choppy sentences plz  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • digital download -> s  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • No sources in infobox. Incorporate it somehow in the article  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why are the writers not in full name?  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • You should link them there under writers  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Recording[edit]

  • The recording came together in a synergy of Sony's biggest talents and greatest assets -> What?  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • president OF  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Bad sentence  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • suggested it could be perfect for Fernandez -> felt  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • and the duet was born. -> I didn't know Knowles was pregnant.  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Very funny. According to the press, Beyonce has been pregnant eight times. Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • You wrote it was recorded in MB as well?  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • as she has yet to relearn the language and so had to learn the sons by imitating the sounds -> tense issues, and language  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • while Knowles created the song with Fernández. -> A). Fernandez had no part in the song except vocals B). Knowles din't create it, she co-wrote and co-produced it  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • her in her Spanish -> its not her Spanish  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • If you weren't the great singer you are, than this would be impossible." -> what does being a good singer have to do with language pronunciation? minus Removed Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Also, the titles should just be Background and recording, not single selection, that doesn't have part here.
  • The song later saw -> songs don't see  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • were -> where  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • to all European -> on  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • While promoting the album Viento a Favor, ads favored the collaboration between Fernández and Knowles -> No clue what this means or says  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Music and theme[edit]

  • Songs don't see  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • No choppy sentences  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • the song features negative stereotyping of Romani or Gypsy people. -> how so?
I need help here. Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • hints of flamenco-pop as strong lyrics dominate the entire track _> flamenco has nothing to do with "strong lyrics"  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • hints of pop music for which Knowles is generally known -> A). You said she' known for her R&B B). She does nothing to the song to add pop. I don't say Mariah Carey adds Latin infusion to "My All", I say the Latin percussion and guitar arpeggios do  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • melodramatic romantic ballad territory.[ -> c/e  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Additionally described as -> additionally,  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • described as a "commercial pop to the hilt" -> by who? minus Removed Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • All these quotes need attribution  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reception[edit]

  • although most of them noted that the song may be taken offensively due to the stereotypical lyrics -> could be better  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • off of -> from  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • commented on the additional writing and production on the song as over-bearing in a positive way. -> c/e  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • From Walmart? -> This is not a high quality review. We need newspaper articles and magazines, not some employee from Walmart minus Removed Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • I don't know about these Rhapsody and Amazon reviews, I doubt these are high quality for GA minus Removed Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • strong Latin demographic -> doesn't make sense, the US is like 18 percent Latin  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • until later beaten -> replaced  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Please check this one. Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Premio amigo 2007, "Amor Gitano" won two categories: Premio amigo a la canción and Tono más descargado para celular. [1]

Charts[edit]

  • Should have sources for both certifications  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:44, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Also, there are quite a few dead links
One fixed by Novice. The two other were working some days ago. What should i do? Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:44, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    • Let me know when you're done the fixes.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 21:35, 1 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
      • I'm sorry to butt in middle of the a review, but this song did not reach number-one on the Hot Latin Songs chart. It does not appear in any of the lists of number-one Latin Songs nor on Allmusic. In fact, it did not chart on the Latin Songs at at all. Instead, it reached number twenty-three on the Latin Pop Songs chart. Source. Magiciandude (talk) 04:56, 10 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
But i have also sourced the chart position. Wait i will verify in Billboard archive. Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:45, 12 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Jivesh, what Billboard says definitely overrules Walmart. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:48, 12 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I removed it. Jivesh • Talk2Me 12:09, 13 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
That's fine now. I'm passing it.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 16:52, 13 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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