Talk:Ann Louise Bardach

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POV[edit]

I have done my best to remove the promo language and the peculiar capitalisation however this whole thing still reads like a PR puff piece - which looking at the fact that the original text was released via OTRS it probably is. Nancy talk 08:55, 28 February 2010 (UTC)

This piece is merely information about Ann Louise Bardach, her publications and achievements. Her past employment and publications that are mentioned are there to demonstrate how she came to be the "go to journalist on everything cuba" and why she is such an acclaimed author today. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mlucero10 (talkcontribs) 09:35, 28 February 2010 (UTC)

Q.E.D. Nancy talk 09:59, 28 February 2010 (UTC)
Text now reordered, peacock terms and repetition removed. POV tag deleted. Nancy talk 12:45, 2 March 2010 (UTC)