Talk:Antarctica: Empire of the Penguin/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 23:56, 1 October 2013 (UTC)

I'll take on this review. First off: is the preshow photograph of animatronics, or a projection (ie film)? If it's of film, it should be uploaded as fair use, as all it is is a film still with "rocks" overlapping. -- Zanimum (talk) 23:56, 1 October 2013 (UTC)

The "Reception" section: what's there is good, but was there any critical reviews? There's an article on Theme Park Insider about the light levels being dirastically different than in concept art. This About.com writer was "conflicted". Indeed, the lead says it was "generally well received", which suggests some negative or on the fence views, contrary to what you cite in the section. -- Zanimum (talk) 15:07, 5 October 2013 (UTC)

Pass to "History" and "Ride experience and exhibit" (that snow fact is astounding). -- Zanimum (talk) 17:49, 5 October 2013 (UTC)

"Theme area" and "Production", random check of references seem to check out. -- Zanimum (talk) 18:17, 5 October 2013 (UTC)

Have you considered linking to the official SeaWorld playlist for the attraction? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MxDj-YTdnJI&list=SP180A79C0386CFC02 -- Zanimum (talk) 18:17, 5 October 2013 (UTC)

@Zanimum: I think I have addressed all these comments. Themeparkgc  Talk  07:33, 6 October 2013 (UTC)

Cool. I'll take another read over, and promote. -- Zanimum (talk) 18:09, 6 October 2013 (UTC)

Ack, sorry to leave you hanging. I don't see any outstanding issues or areas for improvement, so promoting. -- Zanimum (talk) 17:46, 11 October 2013 (UTC)

Thanks. Themeparkgc  Talk  22:33, 11 October 2013 (UTC)