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WP:MILHIST Assessment[edit]

Stubby, and stylistic problems, just like far too many other articles on Sengoku samurai. Don't get me wrong, I'm happy these articles exist, and to whichever editor is reading this and taking this personally, please don't. I have nothing against you personally - I am simply trying to help get the quality & breadth of Japanese coverage on Wikipedia to a higher level, and I can't do it alone. In any case, you can start with the introduction. It begins with "Arima Haruzumi. Japanese feudal lord in the Sengoku era." Neither of those are sentences. Add a verb, "to be", and it becomes a beautiful introductory sentence: "Arima Haruzumi was a Japanese feudal lord in the Sengoku era." It's all about the small stylistic changes. LordAmeth 22:51, 24 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]