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""I would not call this a "good grammar catch". It surprises me that anyone thought that the original wording was correct.Royalcourtier (talk) 23:22, 29 March 2014 (UTC)
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Under the article on Karzai it is stated that "The gunman, one of the President's actual bodyguards, and a bystander who knocked down the gunman were killed by the attacker, when Karzai's American bodyguards returned fire". This article suggests that the fatalities were caused by the gunman. That is improbable, as if he was shooting at the Americans he wouldn't kill himself; if he had been knocked down by a bystander he was probably no longer shooting; and Americans are known as being trigger happy.Royalcourtier (talk) 23:20, 29 March 2014 (UTC)