Talk:Bioseparation of 1,3-propanediol

comments from sarah

Hey, overall your article is really good. Here's a list of the minor edits I thought might make it a little better: - your link to the teraphthalic acid article doesn’t work it says the article doesn’t exsist check spelling or just remove the link - possibly link to the petrochemical article the first time you use petrochemical as opposed to the second - Maybe it would be better to introduce that the convential method is petrochemical processing in the comparison section instead of history that way you wont need to say petrochemical process (propylene to PDO) since it will be explained in a previous section? - You have one “we” in the first paragraph your bioseperation section which does not fit the style of the rest of your article - Also there is an article on flash evaporation you should link to that instead of evaporation - In the filtration section make a clearer distinction when you start talking about ultrafiltration instead of microfiltration it kinda blends together - Your hydroxide ions link doesn’t go anyhere the hydroxide ion article is just called hydroxide - Using the term “flash out” is a little confusing people might not know what this means it is semi explained but maybe adding more or wording it differently would be more clear - You had a lot of really informative diagrams in your powerpoint if possible you should include some in the article it will add some visual appeal and make some of the more scientific concepts easier for "non-scientific" people to understand - in the distillation section im not sure what you are referring to when you say "bottoms"

I made a couple minor edits to spelling etc.  If you feel they aren't appropriate thats ok just change them back!

good job!

Srah27 (talk) 21:02, 9 December 2008 (UTC)