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The article has an interesting topic, but leaves out many details that a reader unfamiliar with the details of the history of Southeast Asia may not not. Consider these points:
Who were the Champa? What was the difference between the Champa and the Vietnamese? Why did they hate each other?
The above can be answered in a seperate "Background" section.
Where in Vietnam was Champa?
Why did the Champa send envoys to China? Why did the Chinese care?
I thought the people of Cambodia were called "Khmer", at least historically.
There is a year, but no dates.
There are several emotion-laden words to describe the Vietnamese conquest of Champa, including "genocide" and "arson". As those actions were standard procedure 500+ years ago, I advise getting rid of them, or adding the explanation that they were standard procedure, and weren't really considered "crimes" when committed upon another group.It's enough to say that the Champa capital was "sacked" or "pillaged", that usually encompasses all the murder, rape, looting, and burning.
Also, while an infobox is adequate, it would be helpful if there was some kind of picture; maybe an artist's rendition of what Vietnamese or Champa soldiers looked like, or even a photos of modern Champa.
Military Technology Transfers from Ming China and the Emergence of Northern Mainland Southeast Asia (c. 1390-1527)
Sun Laichen
Journal of Southeast Asian Studies
Vol. 34, No. 3 (Oct., 2003), pp. 495-517
Published by: Cambridge University Press on behalf of Department of History, National University of Singapore
Stable URL: http://www.jstor.org/stable/20072535
Page Count: 23
The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.
The result of the move request was: Moved. (with en-dash version). (non-admin closure) Iffy★Chat -- 09:09, 14 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Fix hyphen to en-DASH (–) in the request, like in the previous title. Per MOS:ENDASH, it would need to be an en-dash in the suggested title (like it is in the current title). Paintspot Infez (talk) 11:43, 5 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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