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- *Richard Bushnell, the model, webmaster and political commentator is a tracable decendant of David Bushnell
should have more details for people to read and for students to use when doing projects.
The end of this sentence is awkward and vague:
"The Turtle eventually sank when it was trying to retreat from British observation, yet a Bushnell family member as sole commander, bailed out and survived."
Hopefully someone can identify the "Bushnell family member." And it seems meaningless to refer to the "sole commander" of a submersible that was intended to carry one person. 850 C (talk) 15:15, 3 December 2013 (UTC)