Talk:Denis Crowley-Milling

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1. I've dropped this sentence down a bit as it was originally located before Crowley-Milling's experiences in France, which might give the wrong impression: "In June 1940 he was posted to 242 Squadron and flew during the Battle of Britain, one of The Few".

2. One of the 'See also' links is to 'RAF aces'. The article states that he shot four enemy aircraft down. My understanding of the term 'ace' is that someone has got to have at least five confirmed kills. So, should this link be here, or was his 'tally' more than four ?

RASAM (talk) 15:38, 20 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]