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Reviewer: Wirenote (talk · contribs) 23:35, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this article. Note that I am still not too great with GAN yet. wirenote (talk) 23:35, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
Thanks. I look forward to it. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 23:42, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
- "The game received negative reviews; much of the criticism focused on the game's repetition and monotony." I see only one review focused on the monotony. Please reword this sentence.
- "The girl can stabilize wobbling dishes by pressing the button." girl should be player.
- "The TV Gamer reviewer" -> "The reviewer for TV Gamer magazine"
Hmm... It's a wee bit short. But I guess if stuff like Let's Cook! with Jamie Oliver can be a GA, I guess this one can too. wirenote (talk) 22:41, 13 June 2014 (UTC)