Talk:Felix Alderisio

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Story like article[edit]

Better use of citations and references would improve the article by sounding less story like. I think a good example of an article dealing with the article's subject is Anthony Centracchio. Note how within the article about Anthony Centracchio the editors seemed to preface each statement by stating who said it and then used an inline citation do support who did the saying. In this article it sounds as if the editors made all the statements. Pknkly (talk) 20:46, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Revised sections of article[edit]

Tried to remove the story-like tone of this article. Also removed large section on Alderisio's family ties that appeared irrelevant to the article.Rogermx (talk) 22:29, 2 May 2010 (UTC)