Talk:Great Rail Journeys

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I have made some changes to the article - rewritten to make it a little more readable and took out a couple of POV statements. I am a current employee, so I hope it is acceptable for me to edit the information - I have tried to keep the tone of my new text NPOV and factual. Brickie 17:24, 13 November 2006 (UTC)Brickie

Looks a lot better, I started the article but it was pretty lame, I used to work there too :) --Hamish (Talk) 18:20, 28 November 2006 (UTC)
It still has tone issues including the environmental statements and growing popularity paragraphs, which seem to come copy-pasted from company literature. WP:MISSION It needs to be referenced by secondary media sources not from the company. When it's cleaned up please resubmit for copyediting. AngusWOOF (talk) 18:45, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
Removed sections that read like an ad 109.232.60.106 (talk) 16:20, 18 February 2013 (UTC)