Talk:Halo: Combat Evolved Anniversary

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Poster image on other Wikipedia[edit]

Why is the poster image of Halo Anniversary not allowed to be displayed on other Wikipedias (German, Dutch,...etc)? --Aryaz-3D (talk) 19:47, 27 October 2011 (UTC)

I've no idea. I've uploaded it as a promotional DVD cover. May be if you can re-edit its properties you can use it on other Wikipedias but frankly I've never seen any other articles borrowing images from their relevant other language wikis. ASHUIND 01:38, 28 October 2011 (UTC)
Thats interesting, maybe you have to insert it into the other language wikicommons page. I dont know why you would have to though.P0PP4B34R732 (talk) 02:04, 28 October 2011 (UTC)

Need images[edit]

I'll appreciate if some one can put some images of comparison bet'n Halo CE and Halo CEA graphics. ASHUIND 12:40, 29 October 2011 (UTC)

Release dates[edit]

Why am I seeing the same release date for countries that don't even have Xbox 360...and it is a worldwide release date too--71.58.55.146 (talk) 04:55, 31 October 2011 (UTC)

guys I know you want to contribute to the article bt do it in a creative way n not a stupid way. When its a worldwide release thn why to add the same date for every other country. If its different in some country then only add it with reference too. ASHUIND 07:57, 31 October 2011 (UTC)

Copyediting[edit]

I don't understand this sentence:

  • 343 Industries started developing original Halo: Combat Evolved to achieve the gold status (complete development).

ClayClayClay 01:37, 9 November 2011 (UTC)

Thats nothing. I just pasted all info for later copy editing. Might have forgotten to edit this one. But let it be since it gives a start to the Development section and rather makes it not look like a listing of info. ASHUIND 04:27, 9 November 2011 (UTC)

Good Job[edit]

Good Job guys.:)~Tailsman67~

Thanks dude. I hope to have another GA in Halo series. ASHUIND 15:27, 16 November 2011 (UTC)

Regarding Bungie[edit]

I've written whole article but never found even a single mention of Bungie regarding the development. Please If anyone would like to add them as a developer, will have to give the source where it clearly states their involvement in development. ASHUIND 04:07, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

Edit request on 21 December 2011[edit]

BBFC did not rate this 15 THe ACB rating is MA15+ The PEGI rating is 16


86.6.159.134 (talk) 09:20, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. --Bryce (talk | contribs) 08:11, 31 December 2011 (UTC)

MissSpell[edit]

Firefight

The map used in the Firefight mode is set at the cliff-side beam emitter encounter in one of the last

three encounters of Halo: Combar Evolved's second level, Halo. The map is vehicle-based, and unlike

previous Firefight maps it contains friendly ODSTs and Marines that help out the players against the

Covenant.[12] Despite being previously rumored, the Flood does not appear in Firefight.


Second Line "Halo: Combar Evolved's" This should be "Halo: Combat Evolved's"

Also Bungie is not developing the Halo series, the name was sold and Bungie has moved on to further there development experience.

Skyshadow382 (talk) 15:16, 31 December 2011 (UTC)

Media Distribution[edit]

The Media Distribution should be an "Optical disc" not a "DVD"
In other words, "DVD" needs to be replaced with "Optical Disc"

Skyshadow382 (talk) 15:22, 3 January 2012 (UTC)

X mark.svg Not done There are many types of optical disks, we use the specific type of disk. Techman224Talk 06:46, 7 January 2012 (UTC)

Request for GamePlay Screenshots[edit]

Please add pictures of multiplayer and single-player game play.


--Skyshadow382 (talk) 16:17, 6 January 2012 (UTC)

Do you have links to on-wiki pictures? Techman224Talk 06:48, 7 January 2012 (UTC)


Yes Image name is HaloCombatEvolvedsingleplayerscreenshot.jpeg

this is a SinglePlayer Screen Shot

►Skyshadow382◄ 19:17, 7 January 2012 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Skyshadow382 (talkcontribs)
Not done: The image is not clear and does not signify much about the subject. In any case, please start a thread and discuss the same and achieve consensus on its inclusion. Thanks,  Abhishek  Talk 12:28, 26 January 2012 (UTC)

Reception[edit]

It says the game received universal critical acclaim. However, the Metacritic score is only 82/100 - definitely not universal acclaim. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2.102.187.42 (talk) 17:39, 19 January 2012 (UTC)

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Halo: Combat Evolved Anniversary/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: James086 (talk · contribs) 17:24, 26 October 2012 (UTC) These are things I think need to be addressed:

  • In the Gameplay section there are 2 sentences repeated, also the last sentence could probably be integrated into the sentence before it. "The game's multiplayer mode uses Halo: Reach's engine,[11] and features seven maps. Six of the maps are remakes of Halo: Combat Evolved and Halo 2 maps. Seven of the available maps have been updated and re-released using Halo: Reach's engine. Six of these maps are competitive multiplayer maps that are remakes from Halo: Combat Evolved and Halo 2. Each map has two variants, classic and enhanced. Anniversary also ships with a Firefight map, where players fight against waves of enemies with the assistance of friendly non-player characters or human players. The setting of the Firefight map is taken from a Combat Evolved campaign level."
  • I think there should be some text in the Plot section unless there is consensus somewhere that says otherwise. Something along the lines of: "Anniversary's plot is word-for-word identical to the original game's."
  • The last sentence of the Development section could introduce confusion with 343 Industries and 343 Guilty Spark, perhaps it should say "Since 343 Industries developed..." for clarity.
  • In the first sentence of the Marketing section there is redundancy "later followed up with", could it be reduced to just "followed with"?
  • In the next sentence is the word "unveiling" necessary?
  • Is the MJOLNIR armour for their Xbox Live avatar or in-game multiplayer avatar?
  • In Marketing the sentence doesn't flow well: "and Halolivingmonument.com website to celebrate"
  • Should also be an external link to that site either in-line or in the external links
  • Was the Pizza-Hut promo a "tie-up" or "tie-in"?
  • In Reception this doesn't flow well: "which it brought compare to classic version"
  • This doesn't flow well either "The Guardian gave the positive comment by saying"
  • Images are correctly tagged, low-res etc., the article is well referenced, covers everything it should and neutral. Nice work. James086Talk 17:24, 26 October 2012 (UTC)

Comment: If I may, the lead does not properly mention reception. --JDC808 22:35, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

Looks good, I think it's ready to pass once there's a bit of expansion to the reception in the lead section. James086Talk 11:37, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
Agreed. --JDC808 19:17, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
I've added a few lines to sum up the section as it stands now. Apologies for the wait. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs(talk) 16:39, 14 November 2012 (UTC)

 Pass - Listed it as a Good article. James086Talk 17:06, 14 November 2012 (UTC)

Edit request on 28 November 2012[edit]

The orchestral score to the Halo Anniversary Edition was adapted and re-orchestrated by the following people: "Paul Lipson, Lennie Moore, Tom Salta, and Brian Trifon". Please include this information under the composer section with the following code:

|Score Adaptation & Orchestration = [[Paul Lipson, Lennie Moore, Tom Salta, and Brian Trifon]]

Ceredshinmor (talk) 19:11, 28 November 2012 (UTC)

Done--added to the Audio section. There isn't a spot in the infobox, if that's where you were requesting it. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs(talk) 19:23, 28 November 2012 (UTC)

FAC commentary that didn't make it in before close[edit]

  • Comment Really excellent work. I commend you for putting the Halo team on your back. But enough praise—I gave it a copyedit, checked all sources, and here are my comments:
I would be happy to support once these surmountable issues are addressed. czar · · 10:05, 15 April 2013 (UTC)

Bah, if I knew the FAC was going to close, I would have just BOLDly made the edits to save us all time. Let me know if you're interested in collaborating and we can split up the remaining tasks. czar · · 10:05, 15 April 2013 (UTC)

""Thanks. I'll take a look when I've got a chance! Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs(talk) 15:08, 15 April 2013 (UTC)

Note:  Working on this over the weekend czar · · 08:18, 8 June 2013 (UTC)

No problem, I've been gone on vacation the past week anyhow. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs(talk) 00:20, 11 June 2013 (UTC)

2013 June comments[edit]

Talk page pizza party
  • Did you take a look through the list before asking me to check it? When I went through, quite a few bullets were left unaddressed, enumerated above. You're not obligated to take my advice, but the above would be my thoughts/concerns going into FAC again
  • Ref 43 (second Gamasutra sales) says HCEA was #2 in Japan but the other ref 42 says it was #15. Using one ref as reputable but not the other would be cherry-picking, no? Ref 43 is Amazon stats.
  • Japanese release date is gone, needs to be added back and sourced. It's not the same as the WW release.
  • Do you have a scan of the Saber article, for verification purposes?
  • Price/volume of games sold?
  • Doesn't the new Plot section need citations, even if it's paraphrased from the other article?
  • Also needs more pizza (but that's neither here nor there)
czar · · 08:27, 16 June 2013 (UTC)

360 in lead[edit]

Is it worth mentioning in the lead that the game was released for the Xbox 360, or that it's a 360-exclusive? I see it's something most lead paragraphs do. czar  15:33, 27 September 2013 (UTC)

Tweaked the lead. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs(talk) 16:56, 27 September 2013 (UTC)

Verify Saber edit[edit]

Can someone with access verify this edit re: Saber? czar  13:10, 28 June 2014 (UTC)