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Did you know... that the Indian submarine museum Kursura(pictured) is the first of its kind in South Asia and is visited by about 250,000 people each year?
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G’day, good work so far on improving this article. I have a couple of suggestions while you wait for a GA review: AustralianRupert (talk) 23:41, 7 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
There appears to be a discrepancy between the infobox and the article regarding the vessel’s decommissioning. For instance, the infobox says “27 September 2001”, but the article says “decommissioned on 27 February 2001”. If you could fix this discrepancy, I believe that the article would meet the B-class coverage/accuracy requirements; Done
currently there is a bit of information in the infobox that does not appear in the body of the article, and doesn’t appear to be cited with a reference. For instance: the builder information; the 20,000 nmi surfaced or 380 nmi submerged range. If you could add this to the article's body with a reference, I believe that the article would meet the B-class referencing requirements; Done
try to avoid repetition. For instance, “As many as 1,500 people visit it everyday during the peak days” and then this “Daily visitors usually range between 500 and 600 and shoot up to 1,500 during the tourist season”. I’d suggest merging those two sentences. Done
the ASW abbreviation should probably be spelled out fully on first mention for lay readers. Done Good luck with the review and thanks for your efforts. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 23:41, 7 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
All done, thanks a lot for the quick look. Cheers, ƬheStrikeΣaglesorties 05:46, 8 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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Done