Talk:Italian battleship Impero/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 02:50, 19 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • No DABs or overlinking.
  • You refer to the 1938 Naval Expansion Program, but never mention it in the main body.
    • Added
  • Oil-fired or coal-fired?
    • Added, and I'll add it to the other 3
  • There's nothing to show that 50-caliber relates to /50 in the designations.
    • Navweaps (and presumably Campbell, but I don't have that handy at the moment) gives a barrel length of 50 calibers
      • No, I understand that, but I'm not sure that a uninitiated reader will understand that /50 means 50 caliber length. That's why I prefer not to use that format and actually spell out the caliber.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
        • Oh, I misunderstood your comment - I thought you were questioning the expansion of /50 in the 38cm gun title to 50-caliber. Fixed now. Parsecboy (talk) 15:44, 19 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • to escorts for merchant convoys, which were desperately needed. Suggest moving the last clause in front of "escorts".
    • Ok.
  • How can a ship be beached and moored simultaneously?
    • The moored bit was left over from the old version - I apparently missed deleting it when I rewrote it.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • Adding |lastauthoramp=1 to your book cites will get you ampersands there to match your footnotes.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:50, 19 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • Good idea. Thanks for the review, Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 12:04, 19 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]