This page needs an NPOV edit and a general re-write, as do most of the other pages written by this person.
I gave rewriting it a shot. I'm sure my try could also use some refinement later too. I think the way the wording was prior to my edit was a little too closely verbatim from another source. -User:Bebop (to reach me, my user page is linked in the history file) 06:55, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)
Memphis Soul Music
The page I created, based on information provided by the Memphis Convention and Visitors Bureau, complements your article. I was wondering if you would mind converging the two? Please review my article, and let me know what you think. Brandivan 20:47, 1 February 2007 (UTC)