Talk:Mickey Micelotta

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October 7, 2011	Good article nominee	Listed

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Reviewer: Albacore (talk · contribs) 14:47, 4 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The infobox should read (1954–1955)

American is a common term, no need for linking

New York – Penn League, not New York - Penn League

In 1949, Micelotta was promoted to the C-class Vandergrift Pioneers of the Middle Atlantic League. in caps or semicolon, I prefer the latter.

...of the Canadian-American League the following season. His performances that season dull prose

As the 1954 season began, the Phillies noted had a good chance at winning a major league roster spot due to manager Steve O'Neill being impressed with his fielding and hitting power. Is "Micelotta" supposed to be after "noted"?

Smalley returned from the disabled list perhaps link disabled list

He finished the season with only a .201 batting average in 127 games played no need for "only"

Perhaps link to BRM in the ELs

Will pass once these issues are dealt with. Albacore (talk) 21:33, 4 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Issues fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 15:51, 7 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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