Talk:Miss Rosa

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Editing Needed[edit]

Paragraphs like this one... "ScreenCrush's Britt Hayes said that Miss Rosa Vee's stories dominated the second season. But was disappointed that the two stories collided to form the series finale. She felt that it was both comical and absurd.[20] Kevin Fallon from The Daily Beast opined that the scene Miss Rosa learns she is dying was handled phenomenally. He also said that she deserved an award for killing Vee.[21] Kate Zernike of The New York Times criticized the characters's accent believing it sounded more Russian. She thought Miss Rosa's last scene was both brilliant and exhilarating. But least expected her to kill Vee because fellow enemies sparred with Vee more." ...show that this article could use some judicious editing by someone with a strong writing background. The article is filled with sentence fragments like this one: "But was disappointed that the two stories collided to form the series finale." This poor level of writing makes the article come off as amateurish. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 47.16.117.83 (talk) 04:24, 26 January 2015 (UTC)