Talk:One Mission Society
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Needs rewrite[edit]
This article is... super terrible. Does someone feel like rewriting it in a more encyclopedic tone? Jessicapierce (talk) 07:51, 14 November 2017 (UTC)
- Jessicapierce, I've pared a lot of the hagiography and more blatantly evangelical content, though I don't think we need the mini-bios here at all. See the conversation re: the associated bios as well [1]. 2601:188:180:11F0:9D3F:6C9B:6798:2BB0 (talk) 15:32, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
- Wow, that was a huge amount of work you did - a vast improvement. Thank you! Jessicapierce (talk) 18:14, 11 September 2018 (UTC)