Talk:Pressure system

Constant pressure charts

Some explanation would be useful of the charts of pressure that are available at 850, 700, 500 and 250 hPa and how they vary from sea-level charts. JMcC 13:27, 3 April 2007 (UTC)

High pressure in equator

There no explained about what happened in equator line. about high and low pressure in equator line.Daimond (talk) 13:41, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

Highest?

Article graciously provides us with the lowest pressure, but what is the highest measured? Said: Rursus (☻) 11:14, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

Pressure systems on weather maps

Check last sentence, where it say wikipedia is wrong about everything. Pedrojoper (talk) 13:57, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Significant expansion and revamping

There was much missing within this article previously. Now, it's in much better shape. Once the low pressure area section is fully referenced, we can upgrade the article to C class. Thegreatdr (talk) 16:17, 24 November 2010 (UTC)

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Pressure system/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Disambiguation check: Y Done

Checklinks: 4 dead (Ref #'s 5, 10, 25, 19) Fixed

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Prose is very good. Only one issue while reading, under Low pressure system in first paragraph a closing parentheses seems to be missing:

...within the Westerlies (a trough with large wavelength which extends through the (troposphere). Fixed

Fix this and the dead links and I'll pass the article.

Reviewer: Lvi56 (talk) 05:39, 27 November 2010 (UTC)

Found/replaced 3 of the 4 dead links. As it turns out, former ref 10 wasn't necessary as the other refs, particularly the one now at #10, described it well enough on their own. The parenthesis problem has been fixed. Thegreatdr (talk) 06:08, 27 November 2010 (UTC)

Looks good. I went ahead and fixed the red link that was under the High pressure section. I'll pass the article, good work!Lvi56 (talk) 06:39, 27 November 2010 (UTC)