Talk:Rhetoric of science
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As per WP:LEAD the lead needs to summarise the text of the article, this edit diff removed the text summarising the section summarising the "History" section. If anything this section needs to be a larger part of the lead. Moreover ti produced a single-sentence paragraph, which is poor style. What was the reason for this? Tim Vickers (talk) 18:22, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
Some of the article reads like an undergraduate essay. It's referencing a bunch of different books, without explaining what they are about in a useful way. The paragraph that mentions Aristotle is the one I'm talking about.