Talk:Saint Patrick Parish, Grenada
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Peer Review Comments[edit]
I think the leading section does a good job of introducing the main point of the wikipedia article, while also introducing facts that are relevant to the important of the article.
In the leading section, the word "famous" is used to describe both a beach and a landmark and maybe a more neutral term could be applied, like "well-known" "characteristic"
Also, I would clearly state where it is that we are talking about. The first statement begins "Saint Patrick is one of the parishes of Grenada, covering the north of the country." What country? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ow2017 (talk • contribs) 09:13, 10 May 2017 (UTC)