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sovereign in first para[edit]

Hello,

Shivaji was Chhatrapati ("sovereign") of the Maratha empire and crowned so. So according to me it is better to put sovereign in the first para as introduction.

In Early Life section, his status as aristocrat before being a sovereign could be mentioned.

Thanks.इति इतिUAनॆति नॆति Humour Thisthat2011 11:29, 5 March 2012 (UTC)

Since there are no comments against the above with sources I would make the changes.इति इतिUAनॆति नॆति Humour Thisthat2011 09:23, 6 March 2012 (UTC)

──────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────── This is about these edits list: [| 1] , [| 2] by MatthewVanitas.

I am not sure if emperors, especially ones who build empire, are called as aristocrats. Examples on Wikipedia pages would be Alexander the Great, Charles I of England, Henry II of England, etc. I can present a few more examples. There are many kings where such examples would be mentioned so. These languages on these pages are not stilted too.

Also there is no redundancy between sovereign and founder which should be as it is in the sentence.इति इतिUAनेति नेति Humour Thisthat2011 19:09, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

I think we're misunderstanding each other here: my concern was that the chronology was confusing: "was a Maratha sovereign who founded the Maratha Empire" seems to indicate that he was a sovereign, and also happened to found the Maratha Empire. Whereas, as I understand it, the Maratha Empire's creation is tied to his coronation, thus he, an aristocrat, conquered territory and then was crowned ruler thereof. I submit this is distinct from the kings mentioned above, in that they were kings who did things, not persons who worked their way up to becoming kings. This is not to diminish Shivaji's historical importance, but to reflect his evolution from aristocrat to conquerer and ruler.
If I can offer a parallel: George Washington was not "a president involved in the founding of the United States", he was "a military officer who became the first president of the United States." So my issue is not that Shivaji was any less of a ruler than anyone else, but that he was not a ruler who presided over a static rule, but someone who didn't start out ruling an empire, but by dint of effort created and ruled one. Might indicating the process in the first sentence help to show this dynamism and chronology? MatthewVanitas (talk) 19:35, 28 March 2012 (UTC)
Per George Washington page, the lede mentions the first President of the United States of America in the first line. The next line is "He led the American victory over Great Britain in the American Revolutionary War as commander-in-chief of the Continental Army from 1775 to 1783, and presided over the writing of the Constitution in 1787." Therefore your edits need to be reverted, as also your questions do not indicate any standards to be followed in any case.इति इतिUAनेति नेति Humour Thisthat2011 19:49, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

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Should the lede term be Shivaji Bhosle or just Shivaji ?[edit]

Per WP:COMMON NAME, the article is titled Shivaji, so why is he referred to as Shivaji Bhosle in the lede? I would submit that just bolding Shivaji seems reasonable, and the term Bhosle appears in the first couple sentences so certainly isn't missing. I took a glance at GoogleBooks and "'shivaji bhosle'" gets 220 hits while "shivaji -bhosle" (meaning "the word shivaji without the word bhosle") gets nearly a half-million. So not at all denying he's of the Bhosle clan, but questioning whether it's truly common/appropriate to refer to him as "Shivaji Bhosle" as though it were a last name in the modern sense. I have some slight suspicion that the inclusion of Bhosle as a true surname here might be anachronistic, perhaps by enthusiastic individuals who are surnamed Bhosle and want to highlight the connection? ;) MatthewVanitas (talk) 15:07, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Please see Alexander the Great, Stephen, King of England for similar example. The lede can have the titles in bold.
Also, the GoogleBooks search does not work for the lede in this case as title Shivaji Bhosale or Shivajirao Bhosale is quite popular. Your suspicion is not backed by sources nor it is correct per me.इति इतिUAनेति नेति Humour Thisthat2011 19:14, 28 March 2012 (UTC)
You raise a good point with Alexander the Great as an example of further elaboration of names in lede. If the Bhosle name is frequently used in RSs, I withdraw the objection. MatthewVanitas (talk) 16:34, 9 April 2012 (UTC)

Questionable source[edit]

This article appears to be very, very POV-y in tone, and perhaps also in fact. I would appreciate comments regarding one major source, regarding which this review seems pretty decent evidence that it fails our reliable sources policy. A "novel" written for children with the intent of hagiography is not the sort of thing that we would usually use, regardless of the author. - Sitush (talk) 02:12, 2 April 2012 (UTC)

Could you explain how is this POV-y in tone and in fact. I am sure you do not mean that it is POV because he fought in medieval times against mughals, the colonials, etc. One can not assume this without sources. Some info about Balwant Moreshwar Purandare - [| Punaya Ratna awards presented], [| 2] here.इति इतिUAनेति नेति Humour Thisthat2011 06:21, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
This is real cherry picking Sitush. The review of the book you refer to clearly states in the first line "The book is an excerpt of the big novel 'RajaShivchatrapati' written by Babasaheb Purandare." The second line says "This is specially written for children.... " That does not mean that contents are changed for children. Like say September is difficult for children to read so lets call it May instead. -§§AnimeshKulkarni (talk) 09:59, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
My main point is that this appears to be a novel, and I have no idea which version of it we are using here. What exactly are the author's qualifications as an academic? - Sitush (talk) 13:18, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
User:Thisthat2011 gave you two links about the author. §§AnimeshKulkarni (talk) 13:38, 2 April 2012 (UTC)

Babasaheb Purandare by his own admission is a "popular historian" and his work should be regarded as secondary source.This is mainly because he does not know Farsi, the Lingua franca of 17th century India. Nevertheless, he is considered an "authority" by Marathi People on life and times of Shivaji. There are a number of bilingual editors fluent in both Marathi and English who can who can translate his work into English. Jonathansammy (talk) 21:57, 5 April 2012 (UTC)

By "secondary source" you mean "backup/supplementary source", yes? Not WP:Secondary source in the academic sense, right? Further, the phrase: evertheless, he is considered an "authority" by Marathi People on life and times of Shivaji. That's all well-and-good, but do people who don't have an emotional investment in Shivaji consider Purandare to be an authority? Just because a bunch of Americans consider "John J. Smith" an authority on George Washington doesn't mean that he isn't writing hagiography that any non-American would consider patent propaganda; maybe they like Smith precisely because he says a lot of wonderful things about Washington and skips over the grimy bits. I don't know BPs work, so I'm playing devil's advocate here, but fundamentally a "novel" by a "pop historian" doesn't at all seem the kind of thing we should be using if we want to reach Featured Article status here. MatthewVanitas (talk) 21:58, 13 April 2012 (UTC)

Mathewvanitas, I was just making a general comment on B M Purandare. I certainly would not use the children's book as a reference. He is popularly known as Shiv-Shahir or Shiv's ( Shivaji's) Bard. That in itself might disqualify his work for departing from NPOV. Nevertheless, it is worth translating his work and adding that to the article if it fits Wikipedia's policy on NPOV and reliable source etc.Jonathansammy (talk) 08:09, 14 April 2012 (UTC)

One must call a certain source as POV-y if the source is used in a sense that represents a "point of view". Blankly classifying a source as POV which is maybe used to verify some date is weird. Also as said before, children's book doesnt mean that facts are altered. §§AnimeshKulkarni (talk) 08:48, 14 April 2012 (UTC)
@JS: if the book stands out amongst the popularly-read bios of Shivaji, I could see it being mentioned in the "literature" section or whatnot. But I don't see the need to actually cite it, unless he's an actual serious historian who conducted independent research. If he, for example, is a serious Shivaji biographer and happened to put out a kids' book as side-project, let's find his serious, peer-reviewed adult books and cite those. If he's a childrens' author in general, then there are probably more serious historians we should focus on instead.
@Animesh: You raise half a good point, but easily rebutted: if we're using a children's book to cite a some basic fact like a date... why on earth are we using a children's book for that? Either there must be plenty of good history books which cite that fact, or else we should be a little suspicious that a children's novel is the "main place" we can find a given fact. I'm honestly not understanding why anyone is defending Purandare's work as an RS. It might be popular (even Notably so), it might be a great read, but for a figure as written-about as Shivaji I can't imagine we're so short on references that we have to turn to a kids' book to cite basic info. MatthewVanitas (talk) 17:34, 15 April 2012 (UTC)

Mention of Mahar and Mang troops in his army?[edit]

The article Mahar makes some mention of the role of the Mahar in Shivaji's army, with the implication that his incorporating an Untouchable group into his forces gives some understanding of the revolutionary nature of his empire-building. I'm finding a scattering of refs for that, and some mentions of similar incorporation of the Mang caste (though not as many cites). Would the caste diversity issue be worth adding to the "Military" section? Particularly as the section attempts to focus on his innovations, and is short on cited material. MatthewVanitas (talk) 16:34, 9 April 2012 (UTC)

Yet again: issue of Shivaji's Kshatriya claims and coronation[edit]

It turns out User:75.85.183.52 is quite the SPA; not only does this user only edit Shivaji, this user about only edits in order to remove any mention of the questions around Shivaji's heritage that came up at the time of his coronation. I am of the opinion that this "omission" is among the graver deep flaws of this article, aside from just the basic issue of it being hagiographic. I'll go ahead and agree with 75' for the moment that the references provided weren't great and should be upgraded, but the edit summary "Just one sided point of view." is not a reassuring reason to erase one side of an argument

We had previously attempted to hash out this issue in Fall 2011, here: Talk:Shivaji/Archive_3#Finding_agreement_on_how_to_portray_the_descent_controversy. Though we had some reasonable folks on both sides, that was also opportunity for less-helpful editors to charge in with:

  • Its should not be allowed to further caste objectives of one particular person. Chattrapati Shivaji Maharaj is a figure of reverence for the whole of India ; but particularly for the entire 96 K MARATHA CLAN , his reverence is second only to God .
  • LETS GET ONE THING CLEAR : WE THE MARATHAS WILL NOT TOLERATE BIZAARE CLAIMS MADE BY THOSE FANATIC KANADA WRITERS LIKE DHERE / KAMAT ETC . ON THIS ISSUE WE ARE ONE......JAI BHAVANI

Unfortunately large chunks of it became a shout-fest (and I'll note about all those shouting were pro-Rajput Descent, by some odd coincidence), and not much got resolved. In the meantime if folks have suggested ways to work in that Shivaji's eligibility for coronation has been raised as an issue (not that it was right or wrong, but that it occurred), we should get some good sourcing, ensure it isn't fringe, and get it back in there so the article will not loose further credibility for being a puff-piece vice a broad overview of historical perspective. MatthewVanitas (talk) 17:28, 15 April 2012 (UTC)

Ah, checked in and apparently that IP is just User:Bhushanbush82 editing while logged out[1]; and he even dropped into his own Sockpuppet investigation with this IP to defend himself and manually signed his username. MatthewVanitas (talk) 17:38, 15 April 2012 (UTC)


Well MathhewVanitas it was you who was shouting about Shivaji low origin(that too without evidence), Shivaji Rajput source has both contemporary agreement as well as nod by many noted historians. On the other hand opposition to Shivaji Rajput origin is more Political(Har Bilas Sarda exposed the British intention to spread this myth to give rise to Dalit Nationalism). Though the so called Low Origin of Shivaji has almost NO contemporary evidences which shows that Shivaji low origin is an invention of modern historians.122.161.127.235 (talk) 06:52, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


Mathewsvanita dont try to confuse contemporary account or sources with your Reliable Source, the Contemporary sources are the Building blocks for Historians. The original sources which give rise to various theories are of top priority, the books written in 1800s are mostly by Biritish writers but at the same time books of 1980s-1990s about Maratha History is extremely poor. The downfall of great historians have created a vaccum their is just not a single historian right now in India who can be called a reliable historian in maratha history for example see the sources from where Britannica sourced its own article about shivaji----

http://books.google.co.in/books?ei=eOf3T8LHDMbtrQfWhOXfBg&id=BhY8AAAAMAAJ&dq=balkrishna+shivaji+britannica&q=sarkar#search_anchor. As you can see the top most reference is to Shivaji the Great by Dr Balkrishna and then by Sir Jadunath Sarkar. These books are about 1930s and still the most detailed books on Shivaji.122.161.127.235 (talk) 07:46, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


Challenge the Content of the article, and dont try to back yourself with writers or authors who have no authority on this subject. The simple conclusion is Shivaji Rajput Origin is Collaborated by Contemporary Evidences and Shivaji Low Origin is fabrication of 19th century which peaked during early 20th century but its MYTH BUBBLE BUSTED with discovery of "PERSIAN FARMANS" which have been shown in this article you too can read all those farmans given to the ancestors of bhosle and ghorpade it clearly proves that Shivaji was a Sisodia Rajput and Jaduanth Sarkar Mythological theory (which he has adopted from 91 qalmi and shedgaonkar bakhar both very late works) can be PUT TO REST. He was an influential historian he has many historians under his sway who write or say what Jadunath Sarkar said but unfortunately even he cannot "FABRICATE THE CONTEMPORARY SOURCES WHO MENTIONS ONLY ONE ORIGIN OF SHIVAJI AND THAT IS SHIVAJI" , yes but for maintaining neutrality i have mentioned those sources as well.122.161.182.176 (talk) 07:20, 13 July 2012 (UTC)


Highly POV-laden article[edit]

Just some random quotes from the article with no citations:

  • Shivaji was extremely devoted to his mother Jijabai, who was deeply religious.
  • This victory alarmed Aurangazeb the mighty Mughal emperor, who now derisively referred to Shivaji as the "Mountain Rat".
  • Jauhar did not leave any stone unturned to ensure that the siege around Panhala was unyielding, he personally took utmost care that no one in his army was complacent.
  • In the ensuing Battle of Pavan Khind, Baji Prabhu Deshpande fought relentlessly.
  • Shaista Khan, appreciating his bravery, offered him a jahagir ...
  • Given the uneven match Prataprao reasoned that there was no point in leading his 1,200 cavalrymen into a suicide charge alone.
  • Shivaji is well known for his benevolent attitude towards his subjects. He believed that there was a close bond between the state and the citizens. He encouraged all accomplished and competent individuals to participate in the ongoing political/military struggle. He is remembered as a just and welfare-minded king.
  • Shivaji was the first king of the medieval world to undertake the revolutionary idea of abolishing the feudal system, 150 years before its worldwide recognition in the French revolution.
  • Among the various poems written on Shivaji Maharaj by various poets, Ramdas' Shivastuti ("Praise of King Shivaji") is the most famous.
  • He boldly risked his life, his treasure and his personal well being and that of his family, to openly challenge his immensely larger enemies to defend and achieve freedom and independence for his country. He did not spend any resources on projects designed for self-aggrandizement or vanity, instead he was propelled by his sense of dharma (sacred duty) to his people. The later Indian nationalists have hailed him as a role model for his heroism, selflessness, freedom, and courage. Shivaji earned a high level of admiration and respect from his followers and subjects. Even today, he is venerated in India and especially in the state of Maharashtra with awe and admiration and is viewed as a hero of epic proportions.

Plus the entire section on "Character" is basically POV even with its meager citations.

Anyway, the whole article could just use a lot of reduction in tone words ("ignominously", "admirably", "relentlessly") all of which provide a narrative to scenes and events with no primary sources. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.194.105.109 (talk) 03:15, 26 September 2012 (UTC)

You raise a lot of good points; the article pretty much has to be gone through with a fine-tooth comb, citations to children's novels removed, poor tone removed, the portrayal rendered more neutral, etc. Unfortunately Shivaji is a nigh-mythic figure to a lot of people, so this article is subject to constant interference from partisans that just want to inflate a historical personage into a demigod. You can see at the bottom of the page how the entire historical argument that Shivaji's Kshatriya status was a political issue is met with emotional outbursts and rather illogical arguments. I can't promise exactly when, but I have a great intent to finally sit down and hold this article to proper Wikipedia standards. MatthewVanitas (talk) 03:50, 26 September 2012 (UTC)

Did substantial cleanup[edit]

Okay, today and last night I went through about all of the article, fixing unclear bits, removing florid language and bias, etc. Also had to remove what clearly appeared to be little snippets interjected by drive-by editors with no concern for continuity or sourcing. I also marked a few areas as needing clarification, source checks, better sources, etc. As I see it here's the task ahead:

  • Go through the article and resolve any uncited sections (I have hidden some of the especially unclear or poorly written sections) or tagged "who?", "where?" etc. vague material.
  • Take a hard look at the current footnotes/sources and suss out which ones are inappropriate. We currently have 16 footnotes attributed to a television program: "Raja ShivChhatrapati". Not even a documentary, it's a serial costume drama, you can watch it on YouTube. We also have 29 footnotes to Babasaheb Purandare, who best as I can tell is a writer of popular histories, not necessarily a PhD scholar. He himself is certainly notable, and I'm sure his books are good, but best as I can tell he's a storyteller, not a stickler for fact. There are plenty of other sketchy sources, including tourist guidebooks (not RS for history like this). I'm unsure about Sardesai, as I'm not finding a lot of info about him, but the article uses him a half-dozen times too. There are also a lot of books missing weblinks, or publishers/dates, etc that need to be nailed down.
  • Following that, it would behoove us to take a look at some Feature Articles about other political-military leaders (Alexander the Great, Napoleon Bonaparte) and see how they're laid-out in order to see what a "winning formula" might be to touch up this article.
  • The above is all technical stuff that anyone familiar with WP could do. The really hard part will be finding some folks who are both neutral and well-read on the topic, who can comb through and ensure that the inclusions aren't selective. I'm not a Maratha expert, but even I already caught the absurd point where the article listed a series of awesome Maratha victories as Shivaji's legacy... and stopped just before the Battle of Panipat (1761) where the Marathas were shattered, and had no whisper of the Third Anglo-Maratha War where the Brits ended their empire. It's like having an article about V. I. Lenin and having the Legacy section end in 1985 with the USSR as one of two world superpowers... and completely skip over their losing the Soviet-Afghan War and the eventual collapse of the USSR.

So, that's what I'm seeing so far. In the short term, we need to get more (or more rigorous) watchlisters, since this article gets pecked to death by drive-by editors making unexplained changes that keep disrupting flow, sourcing, and any stability of even basic things like how the infobox is worded. How does all this sound so far? MatthewVanitas (talk) 20:21, 26 September 2012 (UTC)

Excellent work!. If Indian and Marathi editors would like to see this article elevated to FA status then they should be more objective and put their POV aside. Jonathansammy (talk) 16:59, 27 September 2012 (UTC)

Cleanup To-Do list[edit]

  • Yes check.svg Done Remove overly POV terms (glorious, ignominious, epic, etc) throughout the article
  • Yes check.svg Done Mark [citation needed]'s and [who?][when?][where?] as needed, deleting or hiding any truly dubious unsourced material
  • Yes check.svg Done Review sources and remove those which are not WP:Reliable sources or improperly used.
    • Yes check.svg Done Remove 16 footnotes to the television serial Raja ShivChhatrapati
    • Yes check.svg Done Verify non-RS of H. S. Sardesai (6 cites). I'm finding very little about him online except for writing one multi-volume book on Shivaji, and gScholar doesn't seem to show him being cited as notable. Not to be confused with the apparently-notable Sarkar colleague G. S. Sardesai?
    • Yes check.svg Done Verify non-RS of Bhawan Singh Rana (3 cites). Appears to be a PhD, but not finding much on gScholar except he's published a few history books for Diamond Pocket Books of Delhi.
    • Yes check.svg Done Verify the small/miscellaneous refs used, prune out travel guides, fansites, novels, etc. Provide links where missing, note missing page numbers
    • Yes check.svg Done Verify non-RS of Babasaheb Purandare (29 cites). This is the big one; the author is clearly a Notable person, but best as I can tell he's a writer of popular history rather than a academic historian. So his writings may be cracking tales of derrring-do, but I suspect they're not historically rigorous material. Given how extensively this source is used, the issue must be addressed.
    • Yes check.svg Done Check "Further reading" and remove any non-notable authors/publishers/books, arrange in logical order
  • yellow tickY Partly done Before we go cleaning up all the rest, we should check what material should really just be covered in its own linked article. The article Napoleon Bonaparte has sub-sections for about a dozen major campaigns or wars; this article has 14 sections for individual battles. I suspect that in a number of cases we can lump several battles together into a sub-section about a given period of Shivaji's life, and let the reader refer to the linked article to get the blow-by-blow of how the fight went.
  • X mark.svg Not done Once non-RS cites have been cleared out, go through and address any [citation needed]'s with acceptable academic RS's. Remove material which we simply can't source.
  • Possible good sources not yet used:
  • Yes check.svg Done The section "Contemporary foreign accounts" appears of dubious value; how many of these folks were any more qualified to comment on Shivaji than anyone else at the time? It appears it might just be a fluff-magnet. - Removed with this edit.
  • Yes check.svg Done Ensure all material in lede is properly sourced in body, and remove footnotes from lede for cleaner read. Those looking to find greater context and sourcing can check the body.
  • X mark.svg Not done Check current content against a variety of neutral accounts, and identify notable missing information.
    • Yes check.svg Done The article prior to cleanup deliberately stopped right before the Battle of Panipat, obscuring the eventual decline of the Maratha Empire. I fixed this and also briefly mentioned that the empire lasted until 1818.
    • Yes check.svg Done The article has a substantial gap from 1649 to 1657; either describe what happened, or specifically note it was a quiet period.
      • X mark.svg Not done Same issue, narrowed to 1649-1653 now.
    • Yes check.svg Done The Battle of Pavan Khind still has zero sources, and the main article of it isn't much better
    • yellow tickY Partly done When did Hindavi Swarajya become a concept? Was his family always "fighting for freedom of the Marathas", or is there a point where more basic raiding and influence building took on a more political-religious tone?
    • Yes check.svg Done Odd thing to be missing, but exactly when did he transition just regular fighting and raiding to having an actual empire? Was there a kingdom period prior to the empire period? Was the coronation the clear line, or is it more complex than that? At least some sources seem to indicate it wasn't considered an "empire" until the 18th century, being a "confederacy" or "kingdom" prior to that. This claims the Brits called it the Maratha Confederacy until around the 1780s or so.
    • Yes check.svg Done Sambhaji defected to the Mughals at some point; this is glossed over in the article
    • X mark.svg Not done A number of treaties are described in a way that portrays the Marathas having the upper hand; these need to be checked to ensure folks and bowlderising instances where the Marathas were at a disadvantage
    • yellow tickY Partly done The article had an astonishing lack of mention of Shivaji's dealings with the Portuguese, French, and English powers. Within WP:DUE weight, needs to be added.
    • X mark.svg Not done The article contains basically no content about criticism/critique of Shivaji; needs a survey of neutral sources to see if there are any less-admirable acts that have been whitewashed, or at least give some note of his opponents' perspectives. Properly neutral bios of admired Western figures don't shy away from presenting their controversies (see Abraham Lincoln, Winston Churchill), so I don't see why Indian leaders should be held to a lower standard of scholarship.
      • Coverage of Shivaji's "revolutionary taxes", which some saw as extortion[11]
      • Coverage of Shahaji's political accommodations and abandoning of Shivaji's mother, both causing resentment[12]
      • Accusations of atrocities at Surat?[13] Rajapur factory looting?
    • X mark.svg Not done Here's the huge one: tons of RSs mention that Shivaji had trouble getting coronated because some Brahmins didn't believe he was Kshatriya. Complex and sensitive issue, and likely to provoke outburst from drive-by editors, so when we address this one we'll have to come "loaded for bear" with a substantial number of ironclad references, and prepare for edit warring.
  • yellow tickY Partly done Historiography section: changes in how Shivaji has been perceived over time, from local leader to dacoit to communal icon to proto-nationalist, etc. JS mentioned Lokmanya Tilak as playing a key role.
    • yellow tickY Partly done Note late-19th C. taking of Shivaji as model for caste upliftment in Maharashtra[14]
    • X mark.svg Not done Summarise early British perceptions[15]
    • yellow tickY Partly done There appear to have been some number of riots associated with portrayals of Shivaji in the modern era, fights over statues, defamation accusations, etc. These would bear some note in "Legacy" or similar.
    • yellow tickY Partly done Nehru apparently referred to Shivaji as a "predatory adventurer" until he needed the political support of Marathas[16]
    • yellow tickY Partly done} M. G. Ranade was apparently a key figure in countering the British (and other) narratives portraying Shivaji as a brigand, setting the state for a new portrayal of Shivaji as a "founding father" type instead. This seems to be a key historiographical issue.[17]
  • X mark.svg Not done Following a general cleanup, the format should be checked against formats successfully used on GA/FA bios, and adjusted for optimal flow and clarity.

This is the list as I see it; feel free to modify the above, just add a mention below this signature as to what you changed when so we can keep track. Looking forward to getting this whipped into shape. MatthewVanitas (talk) 22:28, 27 September 2012 (UTC)

Discussion of author Babasaheb Purandare at the Reliable Sources Noticeboard[edit]

There is a discussion at the RS Noticeboard as to whether Purandare qualifies as a WP:RS for the article Shivaji. Discussion posted here: Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard#Raja_Shivachhatrapati_by_Babasaheb_Purandare_in_the_article_Shivaji_.28Indian_history_bio.29. MatthewVanitas (talk) 00:49, 28 September 2012 (UTC)

Doubt H. S. Sardesai is RS[edit]

While we're here, does anyone object to removing H. S. Sardesai as a source? I'm pretty sure he's not the same person as G. S. Sardesai, and I can't really find anything on him other than that he wrote a multi-volume book on Shivaji (which I can't find available online). So no easy access, and no clear way to verify his credentials. I'd like to remove his cites, so please speak up if you object. MatthewVanitas (talk) 08:27, 28 September 2012 (UTC)

H. S. Sardesai is a well known authority on Shivaji. A multi-volume book on Shivaji is clearly a good indicator as well, which can not be ignored. As also, being not available online is no reason to doubt anything. The reasoning is shallow.
Babasaheb Purandare is also a well known authority on Shivaji. It is unfortunate that he is considered not good enough source because of political reasons such as 'Brahmin' etc. which is casteist objection, this is an excuse not a reason to ignore sources on Wikipedia. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 111.91.75.216 (talk) 17:05, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
Being multi-volume is no guarantee of academic merit, so that's not an issue. And it's not simply the fact that Sardesai's book isn't available online (though that doesn't help), it's that there's almost nothing about him online. Contrast G. S. Sardesai, who has biographies, is cited in many works, his books referred to in other books, etc. So not at all shallow reasoning.
So far as Babasaheb, please see the full discussiona at Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard#Raja_Shivachhatrapati_by_Babasaheb_Purandare_in_the_article_Shivaji_.28Indian_history_bio.29, and note that so far the general consensus is that he's a novelist, not a true academic. MatthewVanitas (talk) 18:58, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Shahaji[edit]

The article has the following sentence "Shivaji's father Shahaji Bhosale was the leader of a band of mercenaries that serviced the Deccan Sultanates.[7]". I checked the reference and could not find that description. Also, conventionally, mercenaries tend to be fighters from a foreign land. Shahaji, a native son of Maharashtra, mainly operated in Maharashtra. So the description is wrong. The history I learnt in school described him as a sardar or a knight in the court of Adilshahi. Let us see what others have to say on the matter and then the text can be changed. Jonathansammy (talk) 17:40, 16 October 2012 (UTC)

Good catch, definitely open to a clarification there. The trick is to avoid any overly-judgmental old British references (the ones calling the Marathas "brigands" and the like), but also not let POV editors whitewash out any mentions of Shahaji and Shivaji ever cooperating with the Muslims, British, etc. Politics of the time certainly weren't black and white, and a lot of folks cut a lot of deals, so we just need to portray those clearly and in good summary. Way too much of this article has been the "Hollywood" version of heroes and villains, and a lot of "great stories" that aren't borne out by sources past or present, but just turned up in novels and TV serials as ways to inject some adventure into the dry bits.
Thanks for all your help so far, I think this article is really coming along! MatthewVanitas (talk) 18:10, 16 October 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. The article on Shahaji describes him as a General which is the correct description.Jonathansammy (talk) 18:57, 16 October 2012 (UTC)

Any fair minded chap could tell that Wikipedia is not a place for manufacturing history otherwise it could only make any article look like tribals writing down fantasies which any scientific mind would reject without prejudice squarely. A better source is definitely needed.202.138.106.1 (talk) 13:19, 27 October 2012 (UTC)

My recent image changes[edit]

My edits of changing images has been reverted by MatthewVanitas. He has asked to discuss it on talk page first. So, I am here.

But I don't think it needs to be discussed as the present version (of images) was also put without discussion. Originally, some other version (which I was puting) was there in the article, but Redtigerxyz changed those images saying "(infobox, historical img)" here- http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shivaji&diff=515276035&oldid=515275893]. It was never discussed. So I was not making any new edit but just restoring the old image version here- http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shivaji&diff=524194258&oldid=524013841] because that old image version was replaced by some new version without discussion. -Pareen Singh (talk) 09:58, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

Pareen Singh, I would go for the image painted by the Dutch painter who was a contemporary of Shivaji rather than the "Modern", more stylish picture currently in the article. Thanks.Jonathansammy (talk) 21:28, 25 November 2012 (UTC))
Pareen, thanks for checking in on the issue, but I agree with Jonathan that the image from Shivaji's own era is probably a better choice than a 20th century version. If you have a counterargument, it'd be great to hear it. Thanks for discussing, and you are correct that the person who changed it to the Dutch portrait initially should have discussed it first. MatthewVanitas (talk) 17:08, 30 November 2012 (UTC)
It appears Pareen has been blocked a WP:sock puppet account. But still it's good that we have a discussion of the image just in case it arises in the future. MatthewVanitas (talk) 17:10, 30 November 2012 (UTC)

Matthew, thanks for changing the image. regards Jonathansammy (talk) 19:19, 30 November 2012 (UTC)

"Citation needed" material removed 4 August 2013[edit]

Preserving here in case someone wants to check around and find a proper cite for these.

MatthewVanitas (talk) 16:15, 4 August 2013 (UTC)

  • Thereafter a truce was made between Shivaji and Adilshah through Shahaji.[citation needed] [after Pavan Khind]

MatthewVanitas (talk) 19:54, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

Late 2014 uncited removals[edit]

  • Afzal Khan desecrated Hindu temples at Tuljapur and Pandharpur, hoping to draw Shivaji to the plains where the superior Bijapuri army could destroy him. Shivaji, however, sent a letter to Afzal Khan requesting a meeting to negotiate.[citation needed]
MatthewVanitas (talk) 07:19, 21 September 2014 (UTC)

Birthdate[edit]

Shivaji's birth year is wrong. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 117.217.42.222 (talk) 12:32, 30 November 2013 (UTC)

If you can cite reliable sources to support the date you've mentioned, then you can add it to the page. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 08:41, 1 December 2013 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 23 January 2014[edit]

Shivaji should be called one of the greatest ruler because of what he achieved and what personality he had. 101.218.85.216 (talk) 15:25, 23 January 2014 (UTC)

Add some sources to you statement. Bladesmulti (talk) 16:26, 23 January 2014 (UTC)
Agreed, when making requests always provide reliable sources supporting what has to be changed to what. Also, we do not use words like "greatest" in the encyclopaedia, see peacock wording; such opinions about him are stated (if they are indeed notable) as to who said them, rather than facts per our neutral point of view policy. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 16:39, 23 January 2014 (UTC)

Title "Shivaji" Needs to be changed to "Chhatrapati Shivaji Raje Bhonsale"[edit]

I fail to understand why the title of this article is just "Shivaji" and not "Chhatrapati Shivaji".

Raje Shivaji was honored titles of "Shakakarta" "Kshatriya Kulavantas" & "Chhatrapati" during his coronation however the most important fact is these title & honors were unanimously respected by common man during those era & now as well.

Chhatrapati ("paramount sovereign") is not a common post/position/rank/title nor a general term for ruler, monarch, or member of a monarch's or former monarch's family.

Raje Shivaji was noble king who feared nothing and cared for everything and singular name title of "Shivaji" for this article feels more dis-respectful.

There are plenty of examples which can be given for Article on greatest Kings / Politicians / Humanitarians who are published with their entitled sovereign but I would like to make only one "Mahatma Gandhi"

Article on Mohandas Gandhi has the title of "Mahatma Gandhi" a title or sovereign which he was given by the people.

On the personal point of view, today when people look back at the history of India they think about "Gandhi", "Independence War" "Mughal Sultanate & its Architectures" "Hindu Religion" "Democracy" "Buddhism" but for me the most important event in Indian history was establishment of "Hindavi Swarajya" & "Swarajya War" which took place, started by a 16 year old brave Maratha boy.

I don't have any proofs to prove that this is an important event in history and not a story of a man who wanted to become King but I seek answer to a simple question - If Raje Shivaji had not fought against Mughal's & Mughal's would have continued their growth in India... Do you think that any other religions & their legacy in Indian would have survived? Do you think British Governance would have won the war to rule Indian? Do you think we would have seen "Mahatma Gandhi" or "Indian Independence Movement" or "Making of Largest Democracy in World" in the history?

In the end, It is a fact Shivaji Raje Bhonsale was the founder of "Hindavi Swarajya" & has been entitle Chhatrapati ("paramount sovereign"), It must be published / narrated / honored along with his name whenever it is mentioned.

Regards, viraj — Preceding unsigned comment added by Viraj s85 (talkcontribs) 19:45, 28 January 2014 (UTC)

The case of Gandhi is the exception that proves the rule. The title of the article reflects the most common name for the subject. Shivaji is the most common name, and that's what the title should remain. Vanamonde93 (talk) 19:53, 28 January 2014 (UTC)

Should it be Bhonsale or Bhosale?[edit]

This would be a minor question. As far as I know, In Marathi Bhosale is never written with the 'n'. Since its the last name should that Be corrected? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Maksedit (talkcontribs) 17:09, 15 May 2014 (UTC)

The issue here is the transliteration of the vowel indicated in Devnagri by the dot above the line. There is no precise analog in English, and I have seen it rendered variously with and without the 'n.' Here, we must depend on community consensus, which at this point appears to favour the 'n,' though I am unsure about how carefully this has been looked at. Vanamonde93 (talk) 17:42, 15 May 2014 (UTC)

I could be wrong but I have never seen Bhosale (भोसले) written with a dot above the line when written in Devnagri. If the dot is present in Devnagri I agree with the 'n' being present but I don't think it has a dot — Preceding unsigned comment added by Maksedit (talkcontribs) 18:21, 15 May 2014 (UTC)

The title of the page[edit]

The title of the page should be Chhatrapati Shivaji as mentioned above by Vanamonde or Shivaji Maharaj, instead of just Shivaji, as in whole Maharashtra he is always referred to by these names only, respectfully. Regards! Abhilash Mhaisne (talk) 10:33, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

That's not what Vanamonde said above, he said it should be just Shivaji and I agree with it. This is discussed numerous times before, read the talk archives like Talk:Shivaji/Archive 2#want change in title of this page. Sincerely, Ugog Nizdast (talk) 10:38, 21 July 2014 (UTC)
Yeah I agree with you Ugog, and I also read the archive, so can't we have Shivajiraje Bhosale , which would neither be against the encyclopaedic title styles, nor would it be dishonouring the great king, just like they have Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi ?? With due respect... Abhilash Mhaisne (talk) 06:21, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
Well then, with that, WP:COMMONNAME comes into play. Probably the same reason Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi redirects to the more common Mahatma Gandhi. As I see, Chhatrapati Shivaji, Shivaji Maharaj, Shivajiraje Bhonsale etc (see the complete long list of redirects here) are more than enough. Thanks, Ugog Nizdast (talk) 07:29, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
Yeah, so I guess by the COMMONNAME context, the name should be changed and appeal to the author to do so. Thanks Ugog! Cheers Abhilash Mhaisne (talk) 14:41, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
Abhilash Mhaisne, in my experience, Gandhi's name is the exception which proves the rule; the rule being that honorifics are not typically part of an individual's common name. Even the current Queen Elizabeth DABs to Elizabeth II. Vanamonde93 (talk) 17:24, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
Vanamonde93, perhaps we could have another exception to the rule, can't we. Come on, no one calls him just Shivaji. I am not uselessly arguing over the topic. Sincere regards, and no offence. Abhilash Mhaisne (talk) 17:54, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
I can't see why it should be an exception. Dougweller (talk) 21:02, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
Neither can I. Shivaji is easily recognizable as this august personality. --regentspark (comment) 22:08, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
Dougweller regentspark Yeah exactly why I suggested Shivajiraje Bhosale, which would abide by the rules as well as not dishonour this personality. Abhilash Mhaisne (talk) 14:02, 24 July 2014 (UTC)
Does Shivaji dishonor his name? Could you provide a reliable source indicating that the use of Shivaji is considered derogatory? I see it very commonly used (for example, this article refers to him throughout as Shivaji without the raje or the Bhosale). --regentspark (comment) 14:19, 24 July 2014 (UTC)
As I understand it, WP:COMMONNAME applies unless there is a NPOV issue with the common name. Therefore, as RP said, you would need to provide a source which shows that just "Shivaji" is an NPOV violation. Vanamonde93 (talk) 15:54, 24 July 2014 (UTC)
Well, regentspark, Vanamonde, and Doug the article referenced above by Doug shows that in wide (international level) contexts, he is referred to as Shivaji, which was not in my knowledge. There have been issues in the use of his name, but they refer rather locally here and hence no trustworthy source can be cited about them. Thank you very much. Regards! SlimShadyLFC (talk) 14:41, 28 July 2014 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Abhilash Mhaisne (talkcontribs)

Marathas or The Maratha Empire or the Maratha Confederacy[edit]

I am a student of history. In history, areas conquered or controlled by Marathas are known as The Maratha Empire or the Maratha Confederacy.(Even some times they are called just "The Marathas") It is absurd to call an area over 2,800,000 km²( at zenith) as "Kingdom". It beats common logic. By the way source is given below: [18]

It says-"Shivaji was a Hindu king who successfully fought the forces of the Mughal emperor Aurangzeb, declaring himself king and establishing the powerful Maratha Confederacy. His story has become legendary.".(Check it) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ghatus (talkcontribs) 12:20, 28 July 2014 (UTC)

──────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────── First, the lead is a summary of the article and the article discusses the Maratha Kingdom. Some of the sources:J. L. Mehta (2005). Advanced Study in the History of Modern India: Volume One: 1707–1813. Sterling Publishers Pvt. Ltd. pp. 707–. ISBN 978-1-932705-54-6. – It explains the rise to power of his Peshwa (prime minister) Buluji Vishwanath (171 3–20) and the transformation of the Maratha kingdom into a vast empire, by the collective action of all the Maratha stalwarts. M.N. Pearson (February 1976).

Review Caste, Society and Politics in India from the Eighteenth Century to the Modern Age by Susan Bayly Review by: C. J. Fuller The Journal of the Royal Anthropological Institute, Vol. 6, No. 3 (Sep., 2000), pp. 546-547 ...stage back before the post-Mughal suc- cessor regimes, notably to the Maratha kingdom of Shivaji (1630-80). Later, in the eighteenth and early nineteenth centuries, in the Maratha and some other post-Mughal kingdoms - as well as in regions ruled by the British - the norms and institutions of caste expanded and strengthened significantly....

The Tyranny of Labels by Romila Thapar - seems a pretty good historian to me at any rate Social Scientist, Vol. 24, No. 9/10 (Sep. - Oct., 1996), pp. 3-23 ...Chauhana could not hold them back. The establishment of the Maratha kingdom also took place at the intervention of the deity. This kind of adjustment which emerges out of upper caste interests may also have been in part a response to the necessary change in the role model.

Towards an Ecological History of India Madhav Gadgil Economic and Political Weekly, Vol. 20, No. 45/47, Special Number (Nov., 1985), pp. 1909-1911+1913+1915+1917-1918 ...caste of Kolis and pastoral caste of Dhangars. From amongst these arose Shivaji Bhonsale, the founder of the Maratha empire that dominated the politics of India during the late seventeenth and whole of eighteenth century.22 The Maratha kingdom could survive in the seventeenth century by taking tactical ad- vantage of the..

An Indian Penal Régime: Maharashtra in the Eighteenth Century Sumit Guha Past & Present, No. 147 (May, 1995), pp. 101-126 ..."traditional India" and endow that vacuous term with some historical content. REGION AND REGIME This article will deal essentially with the Maratha kingdom during the eighteenth century. By the middle of that century the Marathas sectively controlled most of the western half of the Indian peninsula, and had extended their power...

National Symbols under Colonial Domination: The Nationalization of the Indian Flag, March-August 1923 Arundhati Virmani Past & Present, No. 164 (Aug., 1999), pp. 169-197 ...represented the degradation of India under foreign rule and her rebirth through sacrifice and destruction.22 Attempts to recharge popular enthusiasm also led to the rediscovery of former heroes, like the eighteenth-century Hindu Maratha leader, Shivaji , who had opposed the Mughal emperors and succeeded in establishing a Maratha kingdom despite..

Veda on Parade: Revivalist Ritual as Civic Spectacle Timothy Lubin Journal of the American Academy of Religion, Vol. 69, No. 2 (Jun., 2001), pp. 377-408 ...Sardar). Ramdas Swami appears in modern Indian histories as a Rama devo- tee who, like another Hanuman, took up the sword for his devotion as the guru and ally of Shivaji , the guerrilla leader who successfully defied both the Mughal and Bijapuri Muslim rulers to establish an independent Maratha kingdom...

Regional Disparity in Agricultural Development of Maharashtra B. B. Mohanty Economic and Political Weekly, Vol. 44, No. 6 (Feb. 7 - 13, 2009), pp. 63-69 ...(Brahme and Upadhyaya 1979; Mohanty 1999). However, wm emerged as the centre of Maratha-Brahmin domi- nance during the rule of Shivaji (Lele 1990; Sirsikar 1995). He established a Maratha kingdom imbuing it with a Maratha identity and also promoted Brahmins by offering them official positions...

PEASANT DESERTIONS IN EARLY COLONIAL INDAPUR LYNN ZASTOUPIL Journal of Asian History, Vol. 26, No. 2 (1992), pp. 119-139 .... II, ed. K. B. Marathe (Pune: Deccan Vernacular Translation Society, 1909), No. 709 (p. 215), No. 735 (p. 241). 12 Hiroshi Fukazawa, "Lands and Peasants in the Eighteenth Century Maratha Kingdom ", Hitotsubashi Journal of Economicst VI, pp. 32-61 (1965), pp. 57-61. 13 Deccan Commissioner's Files, Pune Archive (hereafter cited..

The Madras Corporation Band: A Story of Social Change and Indigenization Gregory D. Booth Asian Music, Vol. 28, No. 1 (Autumn, 1996 - Winter, 1997), pp. 61-86 ...and their acknowledgment of the new political reality. This musical concession to British power, however, did not ultimately contribute to the survival of the Maratha kingdom . The dynasty came to an end in 1855; the following year, the British annexed the state into the growing Presidency...

Review The New Cambridge History of India. Volume 2, part 4, The Marathas 1600- 1818 by Stewart Gordon Review by: Frank F. Conlon The American Historical Review, Vol. 100, No. 3 (Jun., 1995), pp. 931-932 ...were fluid and contested. The early Maratha kingdom was colored more by contingency than by protonational- ism. Modern communalist images of "Hindu" Mar- athas battling "Muslim" foreigners do not bear scru- tiny when examining the composition of the sides of the many Deccan conflicts. Post- Shivaji intra-Maratha rivalries permitted the AMERICAN...

Review Shivaji: Hindu King in Islamic India by James W. Laine Review by: Richard H. Davis Journal of the American Academy of Religion, Vol. 72, No. 4 (Dec., 2004), pp. 1045-1050 ...93 of Shivaji . I will return to this and discuss the events more fully, but first I want to describe the book itself. James Lame's Shivaji concerns a warrior of the Maratha community who through adept military and diplomatic maneuvers was able to establish an autonomous Maratha kingdom centered in...

THE MARATHA NATION Wolseley Haig Journal of the Royal Society of Arts, Vol. 78, No. 4049 (JUNE 27th, 1930), pp. 870-884 ...the author of the Zafar-ul-Walih , a history written in the reign of Akbar, the Arabic text of which has been edited by the Chairman from a unique holograph manuscript which he discovered, says that the Maratha kingdom had never heard of Islam until it was invaded in 1294 by Ala-ud-din...

I can find quite a few more on JSTOR, let alone other places. Dougweller (talk) 14:44, 28 July 2014 (UTC)

And of coures GBooks[19]. Dougweller (talk) 14:46, 28 July 2014 (UTC)