Talk:Sippie Wallace

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The biography section of this article needs to be done over by someone who both knows the subject and can write in complete English sentences. Things like this are confusing to read: "Another 1966 album Sings the Blues, on the latter song, Wallace accompanied herself on piano; otherwise she is backed by either Roosevelt Sykes or Little Brother Montgomery on piano. Includes Wallace's signature song, "Women Be Wise", "Don't Advertise Your Man," (and the "sentence" ends there, with a comma.) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.65.211.134 (talk) 05:32, 17 April 2009 (UTC)

Yes it was a mess. Hopefully it reads somewhat better now. Thanks,
Derek R Bullamore (talk) 20:07, 20 November 2009 (UTC)