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"SourceFed's channel" - Youtube channel? TV channel? Specify what is meant by channel.
"The hosts are YouTube bloggers who are used like reporters, but only exclusive on the Internet and not on television or on radio." - I don't really understand this sentence, what do you mean by "only exclusive on the internet"? This should be clarified.
The inception section has a very long quote, try to trim it down or more simply paraphrase what was said.
"It became defunct shortly afterwards" - The blog or the YouTube channel? This could also do with a source.
"DeFranco negotiated for less funding, in return to have creative control over the channel's content." - Could do with explaining how/why this works.
Could you find a secondary source or two for the second paragraph?
Is Newantics a reliable source?
Wordpress blogs are not a reliable source and so should be removed.
The beginning of the third paragraph seems to repeat the end of the second paragraph?
Is the Trinitonian a reliable source?
Who is James Haffner and why does he need to be mentioned specifically?
What is an 'original channel'? It's said a few times in the paragraph but I'm not sure what that actually means.
There's a bit of WP:CITECLUTTER at the end of the paragraph, 3-4 sources for one sentence is unnecessary and can be trimmed down to one reliable source. There's actually quite a few good sources there which might be able to be redistributed around the section.
Since there's quite a lot of changes to make here, I'm going to fail the GA for now as I think it will need another full fresh review once these issues have been addressed. I'm happy to keep replying here and provide more advice :) Samwalton9 (talk) 00:11, 3 January 2014 (UTC)