Having arrived in Jaipur only to discover their connecting flight has been canceled, Graham arranges for the group to be taken by bus and tuk-tuk overnight to the hotel.
It is very clear that Jaipur is where the hotel is; there are plenty of Jaipur signs throughout the movie. My guess is that their plane arrived at Indira Gandhi Airport, Delhi, and they travelled from there to Jaipur by bus. It's doable; I've done it.
The plot summary was 947 words. The length of a film plot summary on Wikipedia needs to be no more than 600 to 800 words. It is not necessary to recount the content of every scene. Today I trimmed it down a lot. If it seems too concise then it probably needs re-writing to simply give an outline of the story in brief. Invertzoo (talk) 15:46, 26 January 2013 (UTC)
"and the highest-grossing specialty releases of the year" - This should either be changed to "and one the highest-grossing specialty releases of the year" or "and the highest-grossing specialty release of the year".
"Via a translator, Muriel reveals that her bitterness was caused when the family who employed her for most of her life tossed her aside as useless after she devoted her life, love, and trained a young replacement." - clunky
This section is overly reliant on quotes and needs a bit of a rewrite
I composed the near entirety of this section, and so I am unaware of how I could modify. Any suggestions?
The content about Cast should be moved into the Cast section.
I feel a potential response will be pursuant to your response to the above inquiry. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 05:14, 17 February 2014 (UTC)
"Despite the foundation for production having been laid, the film was beset by ignition travails early on, with several film studios, such as Working Title Films, decided to pass on Parker's pitch, considering it unmarketable." - clunky prose
Too many commas, eh?
Shakespeare in Love, Mrs. Brown, and Slumdog Millionaire - add italics
"passed both The Queen (2006) and Calendar Girls (2003)... - why are these two films mentioned vs. others?
I feel it is because they are fairly agnate; both, like TBEMH, are plaintive, British dramas produced with some degree of independence from studios. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 05:14, 17 February 2014 (UTC)
"It ranks among the best international grossing film released... - It ranks among the highest-grossing international films released...
Marquee in Lewisburg, Pennsylvania - I'm not sure why this img is included other than it has the name of the movie
That seems to be the only reason. I inherited this image. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 16:31, 18 February 2014 (UTC)
Review done. I'll put it on hold for the usual 7 days. --Rosiestep (talk) 15:45, 14 February 2014 (UTC)
I've given it an overhaul and introduced some new text and polished it up and added to the lead. I believed I've addressed most of the concerns. Should be OK for GA now providing that Qatar has addressed your other points Rosie.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:25, 18 February 2014 (UTC)