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A character summary is required for this article, dealing with the main and secondary characters, as I feel not enough information is given on certain characters- for example the Thiefmaker is mentioned in the initial paragraph of the plot summary, but no information is given as to who he is and his interactions with the main characters is not shown in any real depth. The addition of this would aid the reader in understanding the article better in a greater depth.
In general the plot summary could do with a little expanding in a few areas-no mention is made to tell the reader of this article how Locke meets and befriends Jean Tannen-though the overall length of this portion is sufficient. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Wyrmalla (talk • contribs) 02:29, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
--- The paragraph on criticism: There is a link to one critical review, no links to other reviews, and several links to responses on the first mentioned review. The problem with the latter links is that the responses do not really deal with the book but with a specific sentence in the first review that is not really related to the book. So perhaps they are not the best choice of "links to texts on this book".220.127.116.11 (talk) 10:42, 26 June 2010 (UTC)
--- The character Gray King/Grey King has been spelled with both variants in the article. There needs to be a spelling consistent with the books. Apoorv020 (talk) 18:52, 23 August 2010 (UTC)