Talk:The Nightmare Before Christmas/GA1

GA Review[edit]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.

Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
This is me but in the Plot section, "transport" does not seem to be the right word. No need for it to be changed, just throwing it out there. In the Production section, "In 1990" add a comma after "1990".
Check. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 22:33, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
In the Production section, I believe the link to "Francis Bacon" needs to be corrected. If not, that's my bad there. Same section, it would be best if "San Francisco" is linked once, per here. In the release section, it would be best if "National Association for the Advancement of Colored People" was followed by ---> (NAACP), I mean, I know what it means, but how 'bout the reader. In the release section, the link to "Ken Page" needs to be fixed. In the Critical analysis section, there's no need for "Rotten Tomatoes" and "Metacritic" to be italicized, since their websites and per here.
Check. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 22:33, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):

C. It contains no original research:

D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
Is it neutral?
It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
Is it stable?
It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
If the statements above can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article!

-- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 16:40, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, the comments have been addressed. I think it's ready. Wildroot (talk) 22:09, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you to Wildroot for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 22:33, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]