Talk:The One Where Rachel Smokes

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 19:48, 21 April 2012 (UTC)

  • Picture: needs a better NFCC#8 Rationale just in case
  • Production: "She publicly asserted her intention to quit in the past and even turned to hypnosis, with the help from co-star Lisa Kudrow, who suggested a hypnotist" Repetition of hypnosis
  • Cultural References: "…can be heard played at…" should be "can be heard playing at"
  • Reception: "The reviewer criticized… Moreover, it…" The genders don't match. I wouldn't say reviewer, I'd just say 'review', then the problem is solved
  • Reception: This section needs to seriously be bulked up a bit. Only one review is out there? I'm sure there are others somewhere…

On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 22:41, 25 April 2012 (UTC)

Have addressed concerns I believe. I could only manage to find one other review, conisdering there wasn't any newspaper reviews available. Thanks. -- Lemonade51 (talk) 23:28, 27 April 2012 (UTC)
I understand. I does indeed look better now. I will pass.--Gen. Quon (talk) 02:30, 28 April 2012 (UTC)