Talk:Tsunkatse

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Star Trek.com Souce[edit]

An archived source about this episode here: archive.org. Miyagawa (talk) 20:20, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 01:37, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

I shall review this. Ruby 2010/2013 01:37, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

There's no rush as I'm on holiday until the 5th November at the moment. Miyagawa (talk) 12:53, 31 October 2013 (UTC)
Sounds good. Ruby 2010/2013 13:12, 31 October 2013 (UTC)
Ok, I'm back! :) Miyagawa (talk) 20:42, 5 November 2013 (UTC)
Great! Hope you had a good holiday! :) I should get to posting my review later today. Ruby 2010/2013 21:35, 5 November 2013 (UTC)

Comments[edit]

  • The episode had originally been called "Arena". It was described as a "clever marketing ploy" by Russ... -- This implies that the name change was the clever marketing ploy, which I'm sure it wasn't. Suggest tweaking
  • I flipped around the Russ line so it doesn't link it to Arena anymore. That was unintentional. Miyagawa (talk) 22:40, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Sweeps month could use a wikilink
  • Added - also the the mention down in the reception section. Miyagawa (talk) 22:40, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
  • It received mixed ratings by critics --> It received mixed reviews by critics... (since you mention actual ratings in the previous sentence)
  • Changed as suggested. Miyagawa (talk) 22:40, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
  • However, the fight scenes were praised by Black Belt magazine. -- Not sure that the "however" is needed here
  • I'd add a wikilink to Shore leave in the plot section

I got through the plot section; will add more tomorrow. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 04:16, 6 November 2013 (UTC)

Sorry about the delay with this. Have added my final comments below.

  • He discloses his gratefulness... --> "The Hirogen discloses his gratefulness..." (I assume?)
  • Yep. I've adjusted as noted. Miyagawa (talk) 20:04, 16 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Use consistency between percent and %
  • I've swapped out the two "%"s for "percent". Miyagawa (talk) 20:04, 16 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Is there any data out there on total viewers?
  • None I'm afraid. Miyagawa (talk) 20:04, 16 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Do you have Highbeam access? I tried looking for data on total viewers and instead found these independent sources on some of the ratings you already include. I recommend you add them in to bolster your TrekNation.com citations [1] [2]
  • Added both of them - I hadn't thought to check Highbeam (I've had Questia for the last year and only just got Highbeam back again). Miyagawa (talk) 20:04, 16 November 2013 (UTC)

Will place the review on hold for seven days, though I doubt it will take that long. Ruby 2010/2013 15:07, 12 November 2013 (UTC)

  • Sorry about the delay, I've made the suggested changes. Miyagawa (talk) 20:04, 16 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Looks good! Happy to pass this one. Ruby 2010/2013 15:14, 18 November 2013 (UTC)