Talk:University of Findlay

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Complete rewrite needed[edit]

Using Wikipedia for free ad space only serves to undermine your institution by making it look desperate and unprofessional. This needs to be completely rewritten from a neutral point of view, preferably without a thesaurus ("Unremittingly"? "Unfailingly"? "Boasts"?). Look at some other university articles on Wikipedia to get an idea of what a professionally written article looks like. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.30.43.76 (talk) 02:32, 1 March 2014 (UTC)

Unremittingly?[edit]

Seriously -- don't use a thesaurus without a dictionary, folks. The word you want is consistently.

More to the point, this reads more like ad copy than a description of an education institution. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 174.101.173.155 (talk) 18:11, 17 December 2013 (UTC)

Cricket?[edit]

I seriously doubt that cricket (and bowling?) is an NCAA sport. Can someone who knows for certain remove this? Vbdrummer0 (talk) 19:41, 28 March 2009 (UTC)