Template:Did you know nominations/Blood Moon Prophecy
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Sven Manguard Wha? 07:54, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
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Blood Moon Prophecy, April 2014 lunar eclipse[edit]
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- ... that, according to the Blood Moon Prophecy, tonight's eclipse could be a sign that the end time is near?
- Reviewed: I Gave You Power, Flying Lions Aerobatic Team
- Comment: In order for the wording of the hook to work, it should be posted as the final set on April 14 or first on April 15. That way it will show at an appropriate time for those who can see the eclipse (N. And S. America). If necessary, "tonight's eclipse" could be changed to "the April 14–15 eclipse".
Both created/expanded by ThaddeusB (talk), April 2014 lunar eclipse expanded by Tomruen (talk). Nominated by ThaddeusB (talk) at 04:33, 9 April 2014 (UTC).
- Blood Moon Prophecy: new enough, long enough, neutral and uses inline citations. The paragraph which starts with "Tetrads are not uncommon" needs a citation, since it contradicts the "rarity" of the tetrads claim.
- April 2014 lunar eclipse: 5-fold expansion, neutral and uses inline citations. The section "Viewing events" is too short to be a section, perhaps merge it with another section?
- QPQ done for both articles and spot checks on duplication detector do not show copyright violations.
- Hook is short and is supported by references. I don't see a problem with the nominator's suggestion to use either "tonight's eclipse" or "the April 14–15 eclipse" depending on when we post it.
Overall, both articles are almost ready. Only small improvements are required. Mohamed CJ (talk) 07:07, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Mohamed CJ. I have integrated the unreferenced Blood Moon article paragraph into the rest of the article and added references (the paragraph was added after I wrote the article). I have expanded the viewing section of the eclipse article. Let me know if it is better now. --ThaddeusB (talk)
Good job. Article is ready. Mohamed CJ (talk) 21:25, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Mohamed CJ. I have integrated the unreferenced Blood Moon article paragraph into the rest of the article and added references (the paragraph was added after I wrote the article). I have expanded the viewing section of the eclipse article. Let me know if it is better now. --ThaddeusB (talk)
