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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:15, 24 July 2014 (UTC)

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Lourdinha Bittencourt[edit]

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Created by Rosiestep (talk), Krenakarore (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 02:59, 24 June 2014 (UTC).

Interesting life on good sources, pt sources accepted AGF, and I understand it enough to tell you that you possible confused refs 2 and 3 for the hook. Please get rid of the ALLCAPS in the references, even if they have it. I find it a bit confusing to read that she took part in a trio, but then see her with three people? Can you clarify that? The image is free in Brazil, possibly free elsewhere, but likely too small in stamp size. It's great in the infobox! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:02, 7 July 2014 (UTC)
  • @Gerda Arendt: Thank you for the review, Gerda, and sorry I didn't notice it earlier. I fixed the ALLCAPS issue. Ref2, dramaturgiainmemorian, does verify the hook ("Recém-nascida ela foi abandonada no Asilo Melo Matos.") so I'll leave that as is, but if you still believe Ref3 should be used, please let me know. I can see how the photo is misleading -- the trio pictured with a producer or sound man -- so I'll suggest ALT1: ... that the Brazilian singer Lourdinha Bittencourt was abandoned at an orphanage at birth? --Rosiestep (talk) 01:40, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
  • All good, - sorry I don't even remember my problem with the refs, - my failing memory is on the noticeboards ;) - How about ALT2, to mention a bit of what she does, not only the dramatic beginning:
ALT2: ... that the Brazilian singer Lourdinha Bittencourt, a member of the Trio de Ouro, was abandoned at an orphanage at birth? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 05:45, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
ALT2 is better than ALT1. --Rosiestep (talk) 13:02, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
, ALT2 preferred, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:40, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
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