Template:Did you know nominations/Vitakkasanthana Sutta

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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:03, 23 January 2013 (UTC)

Vitakkasanthana Sutta[edit]

Created by Presearch (talk), Savitr108 (talk). Nominated by Presearch (talk) at 20:06, 8 January 2013 (UTC)

Pictogram voting keep.svg Interesting article on solid sources, offline sources accepted AGF. A few suggestions for the article: no reference is needed for the lead as a summary, all references should go to the body. I would not pipe-link "freedom" to Nirvana, but mention both. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:00, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
Ok, glad it's good to go. FYI, I've implemented the suggestions by eliminating the piping and one redundant content footnote in the lede, and moving the other lede footnote down to the first section. -- Presearch (talk) 18:07, 21 January 2013 (UTC)