User talk:Theredproject

Lee Walton

Please do not add unverified material to Wikipedia articles. The article looks like little more than a resume, and completely lacks reliable sources. Please acquaint yourself with our guidelines, including WP:Verifiability and WP:Reliable sources. Thank you. Drmies (talk) 15:33, 18 May 2010 (UTC)

Referencing

See WP:REFB. Ty 23:44, 3 June 2010 (UTC)

course page listing

Hi! I see you're trying to add your course page to the listings... sorry about the confusing instructions, we've been moving some of the pages around somewhat. I'll list your course page at the right place right now.--Sage Ross - Online Facilitator, Wikimedia Foundation (talk) 16:00, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Sage. This image should go in for the university picture: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:CSI_logo.png . I can also insert this afterwards, if it is clear where to do so. Theredproject (talk) 16:05, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

Here's the place for the upcoming term's courses: Wikipedia:United States Education Program/Courses/2011 Q3. We can't use the CSI logo, because it's a non-free image and by Wikipedia policy can only be used in actual articles, rather than on project pages like this. Since we don't seem to have any CSI photos, I put in a shot of a bridge to Staten Island. --Sage Ross - Online Facilitator, Wikimedia Foundation (talk) 16:08, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

The bridge works. I will have my students take some campus photos for future use. Theredproject (talk) 16:35, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

 :) --Sage Ross - Online Facilitator, Wikimedia Foundation (talk) 16:53, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

Hello, I'm just dropping you a quick note to let you know that I will be helping out as your course's Online Ambassador. Feel free to drop me a note if you need any help or if you have any questions. Cheers. – SMasters (talk) 02:58, 29 August 2011 (UTC)

That's great. Thanks in advance. Theredproject (talk) 15:38, 29 August 2011 (UTC)

I see your course is using much of the content designed by me; let me know if you'd have any questions. I fixed one tiny part, at a glance I note you currently keep 3 out of 5 5% deadlines, but it does not appear you have made adjustments to the second grading section (perhaps you weren't intending on adding it at all)? PS. If you reply to me, please do so (or copy the reply) to my talk page so I get a notification that you've done so. If you reply here, I won't get such a notification and my reply to you may be significantly delayed. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me} 16:56, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

I posted a response on your talk page.Theredproject (talk) 17:30, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I'd be happy to help out as another (2nd?) online ambassador. Many WikiProjects are indeed semi-inactive or inactive. They are currently very much hit or miss, but I hope the teaching initiatives will change us, as people like us become more involved in wikiprojects related to our disciplines (this in in fact encouraged by some professional associations, such as the APS and ASA... ). With regards to Good Article reviews, I usually get helpful ones, but you definitely need to ask for them in advance, because the WP:GAN has a 1+ month backlog, which we obviously cannot afford in class (look at the pink box at the top of Wikipedia:Good article nominations, if you check the dates below, those oldest noms are from late June, so we are looking at 2.5 months backlog now). What I have done, to great effect (and will do again soon) is to go to talk of GAN, note that I am teaching an educational course, note that I cannot afford delays, ask for reviewers and in exchange, offer to review another GAN for each one that other reviewers help out for my class (see here). I'd also encourage you to try to write one GA within the next month or so, to get a feeling for how the writing and reviewing process looks, to get a good feeling for what you are asking students to do. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me} 18:00, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

Hi!

Hi Michael, welcome to the Global Education Program! Annie Lin (Wikimedia Foundation) (talk) 21:59, 31 August 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the welcome Annie. Theredproject (talk) 22:41, 31 August 2011 (UTC)

New User Greetings

Greetings Michael, just leaving a mssge regarding my contribs for the last point in Week 2's wiki assignment. Rl081289 (talk) 21:27, 14 September 2011 (UTC)

Check Nboffa (talk · contribs) for latest contribs. Nboffa (talk) 03:28, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
Click link to diff for one contrib.

Just leaving my contributions. 03:33, 15 September 2011 (diff | hist) Talk:In-N-Out Burger ‎ (→Spreading the joy) (top) 03:33, 15 September 2011 (diff | hist) Talk:In-N-Out Burger ‎ (→Spreading the joy: new section) 03:21, 15 September 2011 (diff | hist) User talk:X3Kimmie ‎ (→Hi!: new section) (top) 21:33, 8 September 2011 (diff | hist) College of Staten Island ‎ (→Library Building) 21:33, 8 September 2011 (diff | hist) College of Staten Island ‎ (→Library Building) 21:17, 8 September 2011 (diff | hist) Wikipedia:Ambassadors/Courses/History of Design and Digital Media (Michael Mandiberg)/Students ‎ (→Students) Rox1286 (talk) 03:47, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

Just leaving my username and contribs for week 2 Ellebrager (talk) 03:46, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Possible Articles

Please post notes/links to your entries about your 3-5 articles here.--Theredproject (talk) 20:38, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

I just posted a few articles I've been thinking of working on for class on my user page. Which of these do you think would be best to work on? Also check Sabinajm (talk · contribs) for my contribs! Thanks, Sabinajm (talk) 23:38, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

A couple ways of looking at it: Which one would be the most useful to wikipedia? Which ones would have the most information/resources out there for you to use (especially non-copyright visual material)? A secondary concern would be which ones would you have the most luck at finding others who are interested in to work with you on it.--Theredproject (talk) 02:02, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

I think I'm most definitely more interested in working on the rococo article. I put a suggestion on it's talk page re adding in a section on rococo graphic design and typography. Sabinajm (talk) 04:42, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Hello Michael, I put up some topics on My Talk page. Rl081289 (talk) 20:51, 21 September 2011 (UTC) Hi Prof Mandiberg I put in an idea and I am interested to hear what others are doing Drichard02Drichard02 (talk) 23:05, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

I left a suggestion on Type design page. Rl081289 (talk) 00:56, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Good suggestions. --Theredproject (talk) 02:05, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if you wanted us to post the additional information we add to an existing article related to class backed up with a citation on your talk page, but I made one on the Movable type page, the 2 very last sentences under the Wooden Movable type category. Rl081289 (talk) 23:46, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

Hi Michael, I put up some topics on My Talk page.Anonymous0123 (talk) 03:59, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Hello. My topics for the research paper are on my user page. Any further comments can be posted on my talk page. Nboffa (talk) 05:29, 22 September 2011 (UTC) I contributed to a discussion about commercial art. Nboffa (talk) 05:35, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

My topics for the research on my talk page. Aking174 (talk) 05:15, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

My topics for the research on my talk page. Ellebrager (talk) 05:01, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

My topics for research on Ed Fella User_AleMarie--AleMarie (talk) 15:53, 6 October 2011 (UTC) [1] and [2]

The possible articles that I will be using for my Irma Boom project are posted on my talk page. I am having trouble figuing out how to use the codes and create links. M01022011 (talk) 14:44, 20 October 2011 (UTC)

Hi!

Hope you get a chance to visit my page to see the list of designers for the assignment. I also found a good page related to the reading for this week. My TalkPage. Roxy1286 (talk)

I also made a suggestion on the page about Graphic Design

Hope I'm on the right direction!

Rox1286 (talk) 03:34, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

--AleMarie (talk) 15:46, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

5 paragraphs on 2 potential articles

Please post your notices here--Theredproject (talk) 17:06, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

I have my summary on My Talk page. Rl081289 (talk) 23:47, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

I have posted my summary on My Talk page. KatanaBeatsPaper (talk) 23:04, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

I have posted two topics for you to look at (Drichard02 I editied the College of Staten Island page

Drichard02 I am working on the coverart page I added something about album coverart artist Alex Steinwiss)

Two things I would like to work on is Graphic Artist April Greiman and I am interested in researching cover art Template:User talk Drichard02 talk (Drichard02 (talk) 01:02, 6 October 2011 (UTC)}>

my summary has been posted My Talk page. Token718 (talk) 03:05, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

My summary has been posted on my talk page [[3]] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xxcarollo91xx (talk • contribs) 07:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

I have posted my summary on my talk page [[4]]

Ellebrager (talk) 06:05, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Here is the link to my talk page containing my paragraph summary. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Aking174

Aking174 (talk) 06:07, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Possible articles on my talk page Nboffa (talk) 08:38, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

--AleMarie (talk) 15:50, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Here is a link to my talk page, where I posted my summary. [5]--TheBauhausCure (talk) 15:52, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

I have posted my summary. My Talk page. X3Kimmie X3Kimmie 15:55, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Posted my summary My Talk page. RecKLUSs32 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 15:59, 6 October 2011 (UTC).

My summary is on my talk page. MYoung1030 (talk) 8 October 2011 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.174.247.140 (talk) 21:56, 8 October 2011 (UTC)

I have posted the two potential articles on my talk page. Dalmazo (talk)Dalmazo (talk) 01:57, 14 October 2011 (UTC)

I have posted my summary. My Talk page. Anonymous0123 (talk) 19:51, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

1 to 2 sentence contribution

Put your 1-2 sentence contribution here. Please be sure to add it as a "diff." For more on diffs, please see Help:Diff. For example, is the diff for Rl081289's excellent addition to the wooden type section of the Movable Type page. Note that when you create a link to a diff, you only should use single "[" and "]" brackets, rather than the conventional double brackets, because you are using a full URL, rather than just linking to pages inside the wiki.--Theredproject (talk) 02:25, 1 October 2011 (UTC)

This is my contribution, its not much, but I hope it's good. Here's the diff KatanaBeatsPaper (talk) 23:55, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

Very good, and good for you for catching your spelling mistake.

Heres my contribution the diff Token718 (talk) 01:29, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

not sure if my previous contribution was what u wanted heres another the diffToken718 (talk) 02:13, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Your second contrib is excellent. The first was to the talk page. While that is useful, it is not what the assignment called for.--Theredproject (talk) 02:54, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

This is my contribution. old version [6] new version [7]

Ellebrager (talk) 05:39, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

This is my contribution. The previous contribution to the wikipedia article is, [8] & mine, the most recent contribution is, [9] I hope this is what you were looking for. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aking174 (talk • contribs) 05:41, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Here is my diff Nboffa (talk) 05:51, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

This is my diff of my 2 sentences plus reference to the Irma Boom page. [10] --M01022011 (talk) 15:42, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

This is my diff of my contributions plus the reference to an outside source on Geofroy Tory. [11]--TheBauhausCure (talk) 15:40, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

This is my diff for William Caslon. [12]--X3Kimmie X3Kimmie 15:46, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Here is my diff on the Hobby Horse. [13] MYoung1030 (talk) 6 October 2011 (UTC)

This is my diff for contriubtion plus reference to the Muriel Cooper page. [14] --Jckulas (talk) 15:56, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

This is my diff for contribution plus reference to the Erhard Ratdolt page [15] --Cpm22 (talk) 15:57, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Current diff of Jenson article that I've been working on - [16] also a diff of an article I am working on on Zuzana Licko [17]--Sabinajm (talk) 15:59, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

This is the diff where i added the citation [18]--Sha22357 (talk) 16:00, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

here is second diff [19]--Sha22357 (talk) 16:02, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

This is the diff for Ed Fella; added a paraphrase and fixed citations [20] 16:01, 6 October 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fi89419 (talk • contribs)

is my diff on Ed Fella CCCSSAA7 (talk) 16:06, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Here is my talk page with the dif on Zuzana Licko. http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Zuzana_Licko&action=historysubmit&diff=454249313&oldid=454248859 Rox1286 (talk)

This is the diff for Ed Fella [21] (AleMarie (talk) 17:22, 16 October 2011 (UTC))

• This is the diff for Paula Scher [22] (AnonymousAnonymous0123 (talk) 21:28, 26 October 2011 (UTC)

This is my first diff for Ed Fella http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ed_Fella&diff=prev&oldid=454242901 http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ed_Fella&diff=next&oldid=454242975 --Fi89419 (talk) 04:01, 22 November 2011 (UTC)

Final Project (interim updates)

Please put your diffs and your interim updates on your final project here. Remember to put a empty line between your post and the post that precedes yours. Also, when you are in a comment thread (e.g. when responding to another post) put a colon ":" for each entry in the comment thread before your post; if there are two other entries before yours in the thread, the second one will start with ":" and your comment in that thread should start with "::". You only do this when you are in conversation with earlier comments. --Theredproject (talk) 00:22, 18 October 2011 (UTC)

I'm a little confused, what diff are we supposed to put? I thought the assignment for tomarrow was just to fill out our talk pages with more sources as well as fill out our name on the table on the course syllabus next to our topics?-Rl081289 (talk) 20:42, 19 October 2011 (UTC)

You are correct, and I am using the term "diff" too loosely. Each time I assign you something, I want you to post your results here. I want you to check in and post your work here. This week it should be a link to the talk page for your subject article. R1081289, make sure to post your (good) sources to the subject article's talk page, not your own.--Theredproject (talk) 23:35, 19 October 2011 (UTC)

Here is my diff [23].- Rl081289 (talk) 00:15, 20 October 2011 (UTC)

Excellent. Glad it is on the article page now.--Theredproject (talk) 00:19, 20 October 2011 (UTC)

Here's my diff for 10 sources so far: [24] MYoung1030 (talk) 19 October 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.168.124.172 (talk)

Great work MYoung, but be sure to add them to the talk page for the article!--Theredproject (talk) 00:56, 20 October 2011 (UTC)

MY SOURCES diff Token718 (talk) 02:12, 20 October 2011 (UTC)

Here is my diff for my sources [25] Jckulas (talk)

Here is my diff. --Nboffa (talk) 04:35, 20 October 2011 (UTC)

Updated diff. --Nboffa (talk) 04:57, 20 October 2011 (UTC)

My articles for reference on Ed Fellas talk page. [26] (AleMarie (talk) 15:03, 20 October 2011 (UTC))

My sources and potential changes are written on Katherine McCoy's talk page [[27]] . I also posted my week 7 assignment diffs on my talk page [[28]]. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ellebrager (talk • contribs) 15:35, 20 October 2011 (UTC)

My page about Hoefler & Frere-Jones will soon have it's sources. [29] --CCCSSAA7 (talk) 19:08, 20 October 2011 (UTC)

My sources for Jessica Helfand on my talk page. [30]Dalmazo (talk) 01:24, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

Sources and Explanations [31][--Sha22357 (talk) 18:51, 21 October 2011 (UTC)]

Brief summary on my plans for the MUriel Coopers Article [32] [--Sha22357 (talk) 19:00, 21 October 2011 (UTC)]

My sources are on the article talk page<http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Jessica_Helfand>Dalmazo (talk) 15:07, 27 October 2011 (UTC)

We spoke in class today about my sources being posted onto my talk page on time however they were in the wrong place. Again, a few of my sources are posted onto my talk page. M01022011 (talk) 15:12, 27 October 2011 (UTC)

Here are my sources posted to the talk page of Geoffroy Tory. Geoffroy Tory--TheBauhausCure (talk) 19:56, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

250 or 500 word summaries update

Please post a link to your article talk page with your 250 or 500 word summaries, and outlines for work completed. Your article talk page should also have at least 20 references on it (30-40 if you are going for GA)--Theredproject (talk) 16:49, 27 October 2011 (UTC)

Here is the diff for my additions plus more sources [33] -Rl081289 (talk) 01:29, 2 November 2011 (UTC)

Good work here. --Theredproject (talk) 01:22, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Here's the LINK to my articles talk page, with summary outline and twenty sources. Hopefully, I did it right! KatanaBeatsPaper (talk) 23:10, 2 November 2011 (UTC)

This is good work. --Theredproject (talk) 01:22, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Heres the link for my projects talk page. [34] this includes my summary, my sources (still need to add some more, I emailed Ed Fella personally and I'm waiting for a response) and my outline. AleMarie (talk) 03:19, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Here's my Link to my talk page where my Ten additional sources as well as my Summary for Lorraine Wild are. Jckulas (talk)

Reposted on article talk page Talk:Lorraine_Wild. Jckulas (talk) 17:30, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

HERES THE LINKof my SUMMARY and additonal SOURCESToken718 (talk) 03:54, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Summary/outline and sources --Nboffa (talk) 06:04, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Here is the diff to my summary outline on Irma Boom. Hopefully I did this correctly! M01022011 (talk) 12:57, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Here is the outline for my summary on my talk page http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:HRJ21. HRJ21 (talk) 13:29, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Here is the 250 word summary and sources updated [35]Dalmazo (talk) 14:53, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Here is my 250 word summary and updates 20 sources on Katherine McCoys Talk Page [36] and my week 8 assignment is on my talk page [37] Ellebrager (talk) 16:39, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

I've had everything updated on my page, forgot to post this *The Hobby Horse - MYoung1030 — Preceding unsigned comment added by MYoung1030 (talk • contribs) 17:22, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Here is my 250 word summary and updates 20 sources [38] Cpm22 (talk) 17:25, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Here is my 250 word summary and sources on Hoefler & Frere-Jones [39] --CCCSSAA7 (talk) 17:33, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Here is my 250 word summary and updates 20 sources on Jon Ives Talk Page Ives and my week 8 assignment is on my talk page [40] Aking174 (talk) 18:35, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Here is my 250 word summary on Paula Scher [41]Anonymous0123 (talk) 03:59, 5 November 2011 (UTC)

Here is my 250 word summary on Antiqua (typeface class) i know it is late but i am catching on to the assignments all will be done by monday [42]Chcpal (talk) 14:03, 16 November 2011 (UTC)

Here is a link to my talk page ]Jckulas (talk)

with my 500+ word essay that I added to Lorraine Wild 's page.

Here is the link to Katherine McCoy with my 500 words added. Ellebrager (talk) 03:08, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

Here is the link to Arthur Heygate Mackmurdo with my 500 words added. Cpm22 (talk) 03:46, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

Here is the link to Paula Scher with my 500 words added. Anonymous0123 (talk) 04:06, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

Here is the link to N.W. Ayer & Son with my 501 words added. KatanaBeatsPaper (talk) 05:01, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

Up to date writing on the article for Ladislav Sutnar & the diff. --Nboffa (talk) 05:41, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

Here is the link to my updated article. Jon Ive

Aking174 (talk) 14:00, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

My 500 words on John Henry Bufford. Here is my diff. HRJ21 (talk) 14:08, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

My 500 words on Irma Boom.M01022011 (talk) 14:43, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

Article updated [[43]]Dalmazo (talk) 03:56, 11 November 2011 (UTC)

500 words to article. [44]. Some guy also began making minor edits to my post too. --Rl081289 (talk) 05:44, 11 November 2011 (UTC)

THis is the link to my 250-500 words on Muriel Cooper [[45]] the only thing is that i made multiple contributions and saved as i was going on 11/15/11 so when you look at the diff its like i only made one but, its multiple paragraphs citations and organization. --Sha22357 (talk) 02:09, 16 November 2011 (UTC)

My 500 WORD CONTRIBUTION TO ARTLICE diff 1 diff 2 diff 3diff 4 diff 5 each 'diff' contains a seperate contributionToken718 (talk) 01:41, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

Blank out - Response from SMaster

Hi, this is what SMaster response to me.

The editor that blanked this out should not have done this. I would even go as far as calling it vandalism. You can restore all your work from the diffs. I am now watching the article, and will revert any unreasonable changes. In addition, one of the editor's edit summary says, "Edits made at Paula Scher's request", which suggests that the editor knows the writer personally, and this presents a huge WP:COI. The editor should explain or refrain from editing this article. Let me know if you have any more troubles. Cheers. --SMasters (talk) 02:27, 4 November 2011 (UTC)

Is this mean, it would be harder for me to get pictures from her to create a gallery? Should i even email her now? Anonymous0123 (talk) 03:56, 5 November 2011 (UTC)

Seems like you have an interesting case on your hands. She probably won't be so reluctant judging from the edits so far, but it can't hurt to try. --Nboffa (talk) 05:37, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

First things first, revert the edits, and restore the page. If the editor messes with the page again, SMasters is watching, and you have backup. Beyond that, I doubt that the article subject is going to be particularly friendly about cooperating providing you w/ CC BY-SA images of her or her work, but you can always ask. And good work on communicating w/ SMasters, and following through. You have learned a lot in this process. Good work. --Theredproject (talk) 22:32, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

peer reviews

put a link to a diff of your peer review changes here, in order to be given credit

I have peer reviewed User:HRJ21 article on John Henry Bufford and have added a few "citation needed." I have also written on the article talk page a few suggestions on things he might want to fix and/or change. Here is the diff. M01022011 (talk) 00:45, 15 November 2011 (UTC)

I reviewed and left a sugggestion for User:MYoung1030 for the The Hobby Horse. Diff [46]. --Rl081289 (talk) 17:15, 16 November 2011 (UTC)

I have peer reviewed Muriel Cooper for User:Sha22357. Diff [47]. --MYoung1030 (talk) 18:15, 16 November 2011 (UTC)

I reviewed and left suggestions for the Piet Zwart artlicle for User: X3Kimmie here the diff. Token718 (talk) 00:22, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

I peer reviewed for User:cpm22 on the designer Arthur Heygate Mackmurdo and here is the diff [48]. Jckulas (talk) 01:49, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

I peer reviewed for User:M01022011 on the designer Irma Boom and here is the dif f [49].Cpm22 (talk) 04:23, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

hello, I reviewed Nboffa's work on Ladislav Sutnar. Here is the link to my comment: http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk%3ANboffa&action=historysubmit&diff=461068356&oldid=459748573 Rox1286 (talk) 05:31, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

Review of User:Jckulas's Lorraine_Wild. diff for edits & diff for comments on talk page--Nboffa (talk) 06:25, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

I peer reviewed for User:ellebrager on the designer Katherine McCoy and here is the diff [50]. User:Anonymous0123 Anonymous0123 (talk) 07:30, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

I peer reviewed User:ellebrager . The diff is http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Katherine_McCoy#Peer_review Aking174 (talk) 14:30, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

I peer reviewed User:M01022011 on the designer Irma Boom here is the link to the articles talk page http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Irma_Boom#COPYVIO_issues &the diff for my edits [51] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ellebrager (talk • contribs) 15:25, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

peer review for Antiqua http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Antiqua_(typeface_class)&diff=prev&oldid=461865544 --Sha22357 (talk) 01:33, 22 November 2011 (UTC)

I peer reviewed User:chcpal for Antiqua (typeface) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Antiqua_(typeface_class) http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AAntiqua_%28typeface_class%29&action=historysubmit&diff=461881188&oldid=461865544 --Fi89419 (talk) 03:56, 22 November 2011 (UTC)

This is my 1st peer review. [[52]] (AleMarie (talk) 02:35, 1 December 2011 (UTC))

2nd Peer Reviews & 1000 Words

I have done my second peer review for Arthur Heygate Mackmurdo for User:cpm22. Diff [53]. --MYoung1030 (talk) I also did 1000 words on my own article. There is no section for either of these yet so I figured I'd post it here. 00:04, 25 November 2011 (UTC)

Ive completed my 2nd peer review on the N.W. Ayer & Son article for User:KatanaBeatsPaper In addition ive also responded to both reviews diff ive also finished my 1000+ words are completed heres the diff Token718 (talk) 01:25, 29 November 2011 (UTC)

here the diff for peer editing http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Hobby_horse&diff=prev&oldid=463347343

http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Hobby_horse&diff=prev&oldid=463347023--Sha22357 (talk) 19:57, 30 November 2011 (UTC)

I peer reviewed User:chcpal article on Antiqua. [54]. For my 1,000 words total, I added in a section for Film Creative Directors. I am currently up to approx. 1,140 words [55].--Rl081289 (talk) 20:12, 30 November 2011 (UTC)

I commented back on the people who left feedback on my talk page. [[56]] are the comments. M01022011 (talk) 20:30, 30 November 2011 (UTC)

I made a few revisions to my article on Irma Boom. I will be adding more information before the due date. M01022011 (talk) 20:37, 30 November 2011 (UTC)

1,000+ words & restructure post-review diff --Nboffa (talk) 02:35, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

Opened up first peer review for User:Rox1286's article on Zuzana Licko; diff for edits and diff for comments on talk page. --Nboffa (talk) 07:01, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

I have done my second peer review for Irma Boom for User:M01022011. Diff [57]Cpm22 (talk) 03:34, 1 December 2011 (UTC) I also did my 1000 words on my article. [58]Cpm22 (talk) 03:35, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

I also peer reviewed HRJ21 http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AJohn_Henry_Bufford&action=historysubmit&diff=461883675&oldid=460872109 --Fi89419 (talk) 04:11, 22 November 2011 (UTC) --Fi89419 (talk) 04:53, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

1,000 Words & 2nd Peer Review for User:Fi89419 on Ellen Lupton. Here's the diff for Peer Review & Discussion [59]

[60] Here's the diff for 1,000 words [61]Anonymous0123 (talk) 07:51, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

Here is my Peer Review on Zuzana Licko. HRJ21 (talk) 13:39, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

I have done my second peer review in Emigre and left a comment on the talk page. M01022011 (talk) 13:46, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

I have done both peer reviews and the 1000 words and as for the paragraph done by the user jessica helfand, I was going to ask if that wouldn't be a conflict of interests. I read about it when I made the stub for winter house. The first peer review was for User:Rl081289 his/her article was on Talk:Creative directors and the second peer review was on User talk:AleMarie. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dalmazo (talk • contribs) 02:32, 5 December 2011 (UTC)

Yup, it is a conflict of interest. I have asked our ambassadors for guidance on this. Also, please be sure to sign your posts to talk pages. --Theredproject (talk) 03:56, 5 December 2011 (UTC)

Here is the diff from the original state of my article and the new version [62] . 2nd peer review Hoefler & Frere-Jones on talk page.

(Ellebrager (talk) 06:03, 8 December 2011 (UTC)

hi MalikaZ (talk) 00:07, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

Class talk experiment

Hey guys! come say hi... MalikaZ (talk) 00:52, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

hi! Chrissy9876 (talk) 00:52, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

this is Janice!! Chisholmredproject (talk) 00:54, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

hi!--Meilingaddress (talk) 00:55, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

hi! KRibble (talk) 00:56, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

HELLO!--Nbwrites (talk) 00:57, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

I'm starting a new thread. --DaLearnedOne (talk) 00:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

Cool. Hi. Appknyc (talk) 00:59, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

Greetings TO CUNY Grad Center from GCChisholmredproject (talk) 01:01, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

Hello all!--Theredproject (talk) 17:24, 9 February 2012 (UTC)

Timeline for current course -- when do the weeks start?

Regarding Wikipedia talk:United States Education Program/Courses/Interactive Technology and Pedagogy (Michael Mandiberg), when does the first week start? I see that in week three I should expect to see students introducing themselves to me on my talk page and also leaving a message for a classmate on the classmate's talk page. I did have six people introduce themselves on my talk page this past week -- were they early or is everyone else either late or pushing the deadline? Banaticus (talk) 19:51, 10 February 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for checking in on that. Those weeks refer to the weeks in the semester. I just added the assignment to the wikipedia page here, and that has the relevant dates. The course site outside of Wikipedia is on the CUNY Academic Commons. Right now they are starting to make their plans for revising the articles on the talk pages, for example here. Two opportunities for guidance:

1. Are there any particularly good (e.g GA, A or Featured) articles on these kinds of theoretical/historical books that you could recommend the students could model their writing off of. Most of what I found was B class.
2. The students are starting the discussion of how to rework the article on the talk pages for the three articles. Feel free to jump in and offer guidance to them. Free Culture (book), Wealth of Networks, and Experience and Education--Theredproject (talk) 00:12, 12 February 2012 (UTC)

"The early mid-term assignment will be to take blog posts from the Fall course blog and add the appropriate info to the WP article for the subject." The students goal is to basically take a sort-of CliffsNotes version of the book and use that to expand the articles in question? I don't know what the Fall course blog is like, but in general, blog posts aren't valid sources for Wikipedia articles because they generally don't have editorial oversight or any built-in fact checking process, so the blog post itself couldn't be used as a reference for something like a "Literary and cultural significance" section in the article. Wikipedia:Verifiability#Self-published sources says that "Self-published expert sources may be considered reliable when produced by an established expert on the topic of the article whose work in the relevant field has previously been published by reliable third-party publications." In those cases, though, generally the previously published reliable third-party publication(s) should be cited as a source instead of the blog post. Regarding information only reported in a blog post, "If the information in question is really worth reporting, someone else will probably have done so." This can make it difficult to put in a literary analysis section for a book when an editor has to find someone who has published a literary analysis of the book, and then quote them (and can't just write up their own literary analysis). Although perhaps I don't fully understand what the goal of the course is? Banaticus (talk) 10:05, 12 February 2012 (UTC)

I see your concern with the way that it is written. The course is a PhD level seminar, and as part of these kinds of courses it is customary to have the students write "Reading Response" papers in which they summarize the main arguments of the reading, and offer their response/interpretation of the reading. In our program, students write these on a blog. The assignment is to take that text they wrote in the fall, and rework it for Wikipedia. They will have to cite their sources (which will mostly be the primary source of the book they are writing about). No worries, there will be No Original Research. Only summary of other people's research (e.g. Lessig, Benkler, and Dewey. And if they choose to have a "Reception" section, they may have summaries of other scholars interpretations of these texts. Given that, I will rw for clarity. How about "The early mid-term assignment will be to rewrite your blog posts from last semester into articles for Wikipedia, being careful to cite each sentence of summary to the page in the original text."--Theredproject (talk) 18:54, 13 February 2012 (UTC)

Submit a diff of one paragraph added to an article related to your research

SoniaG2 (talk) Hi Michael, I added a section Youth and New Media to an article on New_Media.

I think I did it right: http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Civil_society&action=historysubmit&diff=477247325&oldid=472930647 If not, please let me know!!! KingfisherBlue11 (talk) 20:38, 16 February 2012 (UTC)

This is the link to the changes, http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=New_media&action=submit. SoniaG2 (talk) 20:42, 12 February 2012 (UTC)SoniaG2

Nice paragraph. Two notes. This is the proper way to do a diff to your contrib (we actually haven't covered it yet, so no worries there.) What you do is compare versions in the page history Also, shouldn't sign your comments *in* the actual content. Wikipedia keeps track of your contributions automagically. Where you have to remember to sign things is on talk pages, like this one. And do that with the four tildes, or the signature button at the top of the text edit interface.--Theredproject (talk) 19:02, 13 February 2012 (UTC)

Nbwrites (talk) 16:21, 16 February 2012 (UTC) Hello Michael! I added to a paragraph in the Messiah (Handel) page, in section 5.1. It started out as a whole paragraph, but then when I started integrating it into the existing article, I think I ultimately only added 3 or 4 new sentences (with citations) - here is a link to the original diff: http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Messiah_%28Handel%29&action=historysubmit&diff=477131297&oldid=473090142 and then this morning i caught one minor mistake, and fixed it: http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Messiah_%28Handel%29&action=historysubmit&diff=477204521&oldid=477131297

ria4983 (talk) Hi Michael! Here is difffor an article I added content to. I tried to look up diffs etc., and sorry for anything wonky! sbnrj33 18:43, 16 February 2012 (UTC)

Hi Michael, here is [diff on biopower] Chrissy9876 (talk) 17:33, 20 February 2012 (UTC)

Student project

I have moved Talk:Experience and Education to User:Theredproject/sandbox because it is more suitable for a user page or a Wikipedia: page. Re Experience and Education, the title should probably be experience and education. Utterly amazing, I actually read "at the meeting with Malika I learned how to create a /sandbox, SoniaG2". So what does SoniaG2 do? Create a rubbish stub in the (article) namespace. Better explain to her again about sandboxes. — RHaworth (talk · contribs) 01:23, 22 February 2012 (UTC)

Experience & Education

The cover of the book seems to indicate that the title of the book is "The World is Flat". Where does "Experience & Education" come from? Banaticus (talk) 06:38, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

It looks like they grabbed the formatting from The World is Flat, and they haven't swapped the image out yet.--Theredproject (talk) 07:37, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

Free Culture

Hi Michael. We wanted to bring you up to date with where we are with this assignment. As you know, we have been communicating on the book's Talk page. We have also been otherwise communicating extensively to strategize how to best approach and succeed with this project. Applying some of what we learned in the latest workshop, we have decided to go ahead by using the book's themes to cover the Introduction, Piracy, Property, and the Conclusion. We informed DavidMcEddy of our plan, and invited him to contribute to the two remaining themes of Puzzles and Balances, since those were not a part of last semester's work. In this way, the entre book can be covered. We expect that our first stab will be up by or before early next week. Please share any thoughts, advice, cautions that ocur to you? Chisholmredproject (talk) 20:37, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

Excellent, see my comments on your sandbox talk page. --Theredproject (talk) 18:51, 26 February 2012 (UTC)

I'm sure you've seen User:DavidMCEddy's edits to the Free Culture (book) article. I started a discussion on what to do next at User talk:Chrissy9876/Free Culture (book)/sandbox#Changes to the original page. Banaticus (talk) 22:06, 27 February 2012 (UTC)

Please see recent post on talk page from User:DavidMCEddyre: flagging for copyright issues. Does open license for book preclude this policy? --Meilingaddress (talk) 17:16, 2 March 2012 (UTC)

You can see my response on the talk page.--Theredproject (talk) 21:45, 2 March 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for your response, Michael. It is both enlightening and clear. AS our group discussed, we each have started to edit the article, and it seems to be shaping up, nicely. I must say there is LOTS to edit, but I really feel good about engaging in this project. Thanks again for your guidance and encouragement. Chisholmredproject (talk) 00:20, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

Yes, thanks, Michael. Chrissy9876 (talk) 01:01, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

Excellent all! Keep on kicking ass.--Theredproject (talk) 04:16, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

Confusing

Re this edit: please do not confuse your students. What on earth are you talking about? The denizens of the Commons seem happy that this image is already public domain. So why should anyone need to "convert the image to a CC BY-SA license"? If you are actually discussing a shot of the book cover, then that is equally simple: there are several on the web which may be ripped off with a clear conscience and posted as "fair use". The draft article already carries a good example: File:Worldisflat.gif. — RHaworth (talk · contribs) 18:41, 26 February 2012 (UTC)

Yup, that what I was saying to her. See my comments on the sandbox talk page. --Theredproject (talk) 18:49, 26 February 2012 (UTC)